Reborn in Danmachi as a Dragon-Kin (Rewrite)

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BlackFox_Memorys

For those who don't like tragedy stories, I recommend that you don't read this here, avoid it at all costs, the author simply killed half of everyone he knew, And I don't doubt he kills the rest later too, because this is the type of writer who only knows how to develop a character by killing everyone around him. He killed his father, mother, grandparents and teachers, I have no doubt about killing his brothers in the future, for more character "development", simply pathetic, After all, it's the only way to develop character that he knows, to kill everyone involved with the protagonist

LV 5

mutekishifu

The story seems to rely on gratuitous shocks and unnecessary violence. This is not only problematic but also detracts from what could have been a more engaging narrative. Thirty chapters were spent on character development, but in the end, it all seemed pointless. There are countless ways to build characters effectively and develop plots that truly matter. Unfortunately, all the time and effort put into reading this content were not rewarded, as many characters introduced did not have any significant importance to the story. It's frustrating to have spent hours trying to memorize character names that, in the end, contributed nothing to the outcome. I hope that future narratives learn from these mistakes and focus on providing readers with a more rewarding and meaningful experience.

LV 4

Dead_matter

I like it so far I just hope u don’t kill any of his childhood friends or siblings this time. Sure make them loose a arm or a leg but don’t kill them bc then all that character development goes and it’s just sad to see good characters go so early in the grand scheme of things. You know

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Zenon00125

This rewrite is really cool, I've always really liked MC, non-humans, especially dragons, the original didn't really hook me, but this one is making me even more excited to see it and keep up with the releases xD

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jackson_smith

HungryMushroom Amazing fanfic Keep doing an amazing job You can do this Danmachi Fanfic idea directly after you finish Reborn in Danmachi as a Dragon-Kin (Rewrite) Shadow Monarch in Danmachi A soul is reborn into Danmachi with the powers of the Shadow Monarch. What will he do now? Harem Hestia Ais Wallenstein Riveria Ljos Alf Ryuu Lion Tione Hiryute Tiona Hiryute Freya Hephaestus Demeter Aisha Belka Phryne Jamil Lena Tally Samira Sanjouno Haruhime Ishtar Bache Kalif Argana Kalif Tsubaki Collbrande Laura Shakti Varma Sophia Flores Emma Flores

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HungryMushroom

Authors usual 5 star review, enjoy the series.

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D_J_0151

I really like this novel, the only thing I hope is that it doesn't drag on too much with childhood, it is also updated more constantly and something I would like would be for the fights to be as epic as in the original danmachi.

LV 11

_Mortal_Mayhem_

I’ve dropped the story I’ve got 50+ chapters in but I feel uncomfortable with the way the girls are described and to be clear I mean the little girls around the mc it makes me feel like a p*do. And don’t get me started on the unnecessary violence and death for growth I feel the descriptions of the children should be toned down and not so creepy. And this is just a gripe of mine but what’s up with the underlying obsession with legal loli it’s really uncomfortable.

LV 4

Wade_Wilson_9367

good story bro keep up the good work it is fun to read

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I_was_bored

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Z_Ril

Everything's perfect, except for the chapter production. Since the story is very slow paced, i expected the chapter to be at least 2 chaps per day. but no. so how about making the story not so slow paced? i need more. it's like a drug. if i don't have more, ill go insane. so please understand.

LV 4

Donagha

This is one of the best Danmachi fanfics I have found. It has great story progression and character development. However, if you don't like or can't tolerate tragic and dark beginnings, I wouldn't recommend this, but at least give it a try. I hope you also enjoy this and leave a good review or positive criticism so that the author has more motivation to continue this fanfic and would be less likely to drop this. My only critic is that the siblings aren't too developed so far in the story, that are basically just inserted for emotional ties, however, I hope the author will start focusing some attention on them to make the story more realistic by showing the bonds between siblings and their individual personalities.

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Elemise

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