Stuck in a Chinese novel

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FoodReviewSnake

If you are going to God forbid read this novel be prepared for half baked jokes and cringe dialogues where Mc screaming at the air is considered funny.

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Macharonni

Decided to read it since it was free and luckily it was. Ignoring everything off putting with the Mc, his personality, and the system, it’s blatantly obvious that the author goes out of their way to nerf him multiple times. To awaken Qi he all of sudden has to earn 1 billion yuan and instead of converting stolen money to gold he end up leaving it because the author says he doesn’t need it right now. What exactly is the main premise of this novel?? Isn’t the whole point of him doing business and making money to get gold and beat the protagonist?? This Mc is supposedly some business savant in his previous life and all he does is kill and rob people. His businesses are even more of a joke and are forced asf. He has 1 year before he dies and he does what? Produce movies and games… But sure plot allows him to complete everything in a month. Like honestly, he inherits an entertainment company from his current body and he fires everyone from the beginning. At that point why even have an entertainment company at all, just make a completely different one or better yet just copy the company you had in your past life. Can’t say how frustrating it was to read this, the author tries making things intricate but ends up contradicting himself, adding in a bunch of things that don’t really help the story. I will say that the premise is somewhat novel in having an mc who doesn’t know the plot. However, the inclusion of him buying said plot via the system was definitely a mistake. Overall, good idea but it was a fumble.

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Bad_Wolf_7811

Hello guys! Author here. This is a new novel I am writing and unlike my first novel, I'm writing this one without a plan. Anything could happen. My MC could be cruel or sympathetic, good or evil, nothing is known for sure. Stick with me and find out what I bring to you. I promise you won't regret it.

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Aris82

the 1st chapter is a totally let down. im only reading it and i can totally not believe it. because the MC seems to have a few screws loose from the get go and seems to like walking and running naked all over the place. and seems to like screaming a lot and looks stupid to everyone around him. so those looking to try it. better not.

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DaoistnieFJZ

i like this novel but don't make brainless harem.

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Nay085_digimon

Author has cooked really hard. Many left halfway because of mc temperament, but if u read till 76, you will notice he only behaves such on useless matter

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TheAuthorKami

After reading a few chapters, getting to know and analyzing the protagonist, this was my conclusion: A vulgar guy, with a questionable brain, and an attitude just like those cliché protagonists he complains so much about.

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30Degree

The synopsis was bait. I thought the story would break cliches or atleast make fun or play with it. But all I got was an occasional comment here and there on how garbage the orginal story was. I laughed a bit on the first chapter with him yelling at the system. When he walked out and bought suits on his underwear I thought he was a lunatic that doesn't take the world seriously but then it was revealed that he was supposed to be a business billioanaire and that he vauled his time a lot. So why did he do that? He could have just ordered someone to buy the suits its not like they took his measurements in the store he gave it to them and how did he even knew the size of the original body he was in? Then a lot of illogical things happened. They thought he was possed by an evil cultivator but no one even bothered to check they just accept it and move on that he became a completely person. Then he fell in love with one of the heroines out of nowhere (well it felt like that for me anyway) after that he started acting like a teen in puberty that doesn't know what love is. Then the crimes and trials which I will admit is entertaining but could have been completely avoided if he was smart enough. Killing three people in a motel like some sort of anti hero then leaving camera evidence? Anyway there were a lot of things that left me scratching my head but its ok because it was good junkfood. But all the little things pile up and I just ran out of patience to this story especially when I read the part that he will lose control of his body because of the original owner.

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Mr_ZeroDagger07

I was hooked reading the synopsis thinking the mc going to bash all the cliche events of the Chinese novel setting but colour me suprised when he get a snaching hero luck type of system and then routine continue where mc take mantle of villain taking hero opportunity like in all chinese novel , i expected the novel to be like [I want play by the books] novel,but i was disappointed, sad,angry .

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BloodMonk

Exciting and truly worth waiting for updates

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Krisavq

synopsis is bait, doesn't correlate with the story I thought this web novel was supposed to break cliches but it didn't. Main character becomes a villain and gets a luck plunder system, also he's supposed to make hell for the protagonist. Overused and really bland tbh, other than that it just feels like another Chinese cashgrab with with a copy and pasted plot.

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Takamiya_Shin

I stopped at chapter two, MC is temperamental, every time he speaks he has to shout 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

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MoreMercury76

Garbage. Another waste of time story....

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BashfulName

This novel is interesting. Please show the real evil mc. Most villain novels are not villain. Please show the real evil mc.

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Quinn_Talon

it's this cover from CANVA, good thing I did not use it for my book. Anyways the book is cringe that's all I have to say... and it's not because he copied the book cover🤞

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Zeref_Allison

amazing book for a refreshing take I enjoyed it a lot.

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Mhopedo77

meh, nope nope nope nope nope..... 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎.....

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Direxts

this is just bad...end of the Review [img=faceslap]

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varma_147

浪费时间。情节毫无希望，在第一卷中，MC 被大肆宣传，但在第二卷和第三卷中，他变得一文不值

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Hiricks

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