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truly obsessed. I think there are a few to many character mergers, but if you let go of that, it's pretty good. character is op. hot as he'll with great yuri. keep up the good work.
This is where a shadow of doubt, one of my favorite stories of all time and I highly recommend it.
Came back after a long time to see if anything changed and... no, The author still insists on making the Mc always right, changes or exaggerates the personalities of other characters to make them seem worse. Overall everything gives off an... immature vibe, The author is probably young so I get it but still more than 100 chapters and no improvement.
really good. I hope she gets a new family member soon like sister or daughter, but I also don't want to much slice of life if possible.
when are you going to do something with the heart of darkness that cracked in the tower of fate.......................................................
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I enjoyed reading it but got bored at some point. the romantic relationships were very superficial and awkwardly realized. Mc got so many character templates that at some point I stopped reading which characters he got. I started skipping the chapters where he did a character lottery. Don't expect impressive action scenes and battles because Mc has gotten so powerful. In this kind of novels, the relationship between the characters and the way the events are managed keeps the novel flowing and makes it readable, but I must say that the novel is weak in this regard. Anyway, I still read it and enjoyed it. thank you author for your efforts I will give 3.5 stars.
This story is really good and enjoyable hope you will be able to finish it one day. Also a suggestion of characters to put on the wheel you spin if possible could you add the Ninjago universe to the available characters Gwen could get I don’t know whether urban level or above though stuff like spinjutsu and shatter spin would be cool to see if not that’s fine it’s your story.
If you, like me, found the fact that every single young justice fanfic led to the Mc leaving the group due to characters that wouldn’t react the way they do, and found it annoying. Then I have great news for you, the author has a great understanding of the characters and as a result you will be able to enjoy the Mc actually interacting with the people in the story you wanted a fanfic about. Good writing, some minor easily ignored spelling mistakes. A good story all around.
OK, THIS IS A GEM A UNIQUE GEM THAT NEEDS POLISH..PLOT STORY GWEN AVATAR THE LAST AIRBENDER OF DC BECAUSE ALL THE CHARACTERS' SOULS YOU KNOW ARE INSIDE HER BODY LIKE THE AVATAR
absolutely awesome. good in every way, but I wouldn´t mind some more smut. As I´m a man of culture. Still amazing, but maybe MC could strengthen her family more with stuff like Extremis Serum etc. especially Batsy
I really really love this story! I read it on a whim when I was bored and next thing I knew I had read the entire story it sucked me in to the extent that I could not escape. I Highly recommend this story!
I think it's great! There aren't many web novels where I stick around to keep reading because I hate waiting for new chapters, but here it's worth it. d=(^o^)=b
ok, this novel is gold. BUT THE AUTHOR FORGOT 2 THINGS ABOUT DC, THE LORD OF ALL DC EVIL DARKSIDE an evil god that kill all Justice League members, AND STARFIRE THE HOTTEST ALIEN BABE IN DC..WHAT HELLo DUDE..GWEN LEFT THE DC UNIVERSE WITHOUT DEALING WITH DARKSIDE., ps author your novel gets 3 stars because you did not put Starfire in Gwen Heram that dumb.and WHY AVATAR KORRA
but can you please make the chapters a little longer ? besides that, it is perfect so far in my eyes. I also liked your other books they're all on my reading list.
great story but I demand you revive The Condiment King. he didn't deserve to die, especially to someone not even comparable to oaa and the presence
"If you love epic tales that blend science and fantasy, 'E=MC²: The Etherium Equation' is a must-read. Prepare for an unforgettable adventure!"
The integration of the Street Level System into the Young Justice lore is seamless and intriguing. Overall, "SpiderGwen: I Have a System?!" is a must-read for fans of reincarnation and superhero genres, promising an exhilarating ride that you won’t want to miss.
It is an exciting fanfic. Since the setting is the comics world of DC/Marvel Universe, all the characters/references mentioned are easily understood if you have ever read or watched Marvel/DC. Even if you haven't read/watch Marvel/DC, you get a good understanding of the powers granted to the MC. Or else you can do a Google Search and you immediately can picture the hero/villain with a wiki page of their powers. Nice. The system barely makes a showing here except to show stats and granted rewards. this isn't one of those "symbiotic" systems. it feels more like the AI of a game, or a good secretary/butler. Which is good since the focus is now literally on Gwen's development. However, the story seems to develop too fast. I feel she is really reeeeaaaallly OP. By the 15th chapter, she is basically immortal. Not an Undying, but an Immortal. I mean, she literally receives the knowledge and powers of superheroes/supervillains every few chapters, by the handful. One of them had the ability to survive without breathing, and a few had the ability for rapid regeneration/healing. She is developing too fast.
I enjoyed reading your three stories they are unique and quite interesting I hope you continue all three of them
ch 17. so far really good for a YURI. Not a fan how the whole universe is AU just so that Author can up the age of 1 character by 2 years, it's clearly done so that when they get together with MC they are 18 instead of younger. Funny how the whole universe in the story needs to become AU just for this.
Bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom
My friend, I loved your fanfic so far, I loved everything, congratulations and the 3rd time that I'm rereading it since the last update of the new chapter, I honestly just hope that you abandon this raw pearl that you have in your hands, and I say again to goods for fic.
Very well written, especially for a power fantasy. Definitely worth reading, but I'm hesitant to give this a higher rating for a few reasons. The girlfriends that Gwen gets are largely inconsequential, to the point they might as well not even be there. The system is extremely clunky, and while there is eventually a story explanation for that, it sometimes makes it extremely difficult to read. Finally, the cognitive dissonance of Gwen one-shotting pretty much everything she fights, yet still complaining that she's bored and wants a challenge, all while being unwilling to enter a fight with anything on her level. Definitely one of the better fanfics on WN, despite those hangups, so worth the read.
truly obsessed. I think there are a few to many character mergers, but if you let go of that, it's pretty good. character is op. hot as he'll with great yuri. keep up the good work.
This is where a shadow of doubt, one of my favorite stories of all time and I highly recommend it.
Came back after a long time to see if anything changed and... no, The author still insists on making the Mc always right, changes or exaggerates the personalities of other characters to make them seem worse. Overall everything gives off an... immature vibe, The author is probably young so I get it but still more than 100 chapters and no improvement.
really good. I hope she gets a new family member soon like sister or daughter, but I also don't want to much slice of life if possible.
when are you going to do something with the heart of darkness that cracked in the tower of fate.......................................................
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I enjoyed reading it but got bored at some point. the romantic relationships were very superficial and awkwardly realized. Mc got so many character templates that at some point I stopped reading which characters he got. I started skipping the chapters where he did a character lottery. Don't expect impressive action scenes and battles because Mc has gotten so powerful. In this kind of novels, the relationship between the characters and the way the events are managed keeps the novel flowing and makes it readable, but I must say that the novel is weak in this regard. Anyway, I still read it and enjoyed it. thank you author for your efforts I will give 3.5 stars.
This story is really good and enjoyable hope you will be able to finish it one day. Also a suggestion of characters to put on the wheel you spin if possible could you add the Ninjago universe to the available characters Gwen could get I don’t know whether urban level or above though stuff like spinjutsu and shatter spin would be cool to see if not that’s fine it’s your story.
If you, like me, found the fact that every single young justice fanfic led to the Mc leaving the group due to characters that wouldn’t react the way they do, and found it annoying. Then I have great news for you, the author has a great understanding of the characters and as a result you will be able to enjoy the Mc actually interacting with the people in the story you wanted a fanfic about. Good writing, some minor easily ignored spelling mistakes. A good story all around.
OK, THIS IS A GEM A UNIQUE GEM THAT NEEDS POLISH..PLOT STORY GWEN AVATAR THE LAST AIRBENDER OF DC BECAUSE ALL THE CHARACTERS' SOULS YOU KNOW ARE INSIDE HER BODY LIKE THE AVATAR
absolutely awesome. good in every way, but I wouldn´t mind some more smut. As I´m a man of culture. Still amazing, but maybe MC could strengthen her family more with stuff like Extremis Serum etc. especially Batsy
I really really love this story! I read it on a whim when I was bored and next thing I knew I had read the entire story it sucked me in to the extent that I could not escape. I Highly recommend this story!
I think it's great! There aren't many web novels where I stick around to keep reading because I hate waiting for new chapters, but here it's worth it. d=(^o^)=b
ok, this novel is gold. BUT THE AUTHOR FORGOT 2 THINGS ABOUT DC, THE LORD OF ALL DC EVIL DARKSIDE an evil god that kill all Justice League members, AND STARFIRE THE HOTTEST ALIEN BABE IN DC..WHAT HELLo DUDE..GWEN LEFT THE DC UNIVERSE WITHOUT DEALING WITH DARKSIDE., ps author your novel gets 3 stars because you did not put Starfire in Gwen Heram that dumb.and WHY AVATAR KORRA
but can you please make the chapters a little longer ? besides that, it is perfect so far in my eyes. I also liked your other books they're all on my reading list.
great story but I demand you revive The Condiment King. he didn't deserve to die, especially to someone not even comparable to oaa and the presence
"If you love epic tales that blend science and fantasy, 'E=MC²: The Etherium Equation' is a must-read. Prepare for an unforgettable adventure!"
The integration of the Street Level System into the Young Justice lore is seamless and intriguing. Overall, "SpiderGwen: I Have a System?!" is a must-read for fans of reincarnation and superhero genres, promising an exhilarating ride that you won’t want to miss.
It is an exciting fanfic. Since the setting is the comics world of DC/Marvel Universe, all the characters/references mentioned are easily understood if you have ever read or watched Marvel/DC. Even if you haven't read/watch Marvel/DC, you get a good understanding of the powers granted to the MC. Or else you can do a Google Search and you immediately can picture the hero/villain with a wiki page of their powers. Nice. The system barely makes a showing here except to show stats and granted rewards. this isn't one of those "symbiotic" systems. it feels more like the AI of a game, or a good secretary/butler. Which is good since the focus is now literally on Gwen's development. However, the story seems to develop too fast. I feel she is really reeeeaaaallly OP. By the 15th chapter, she is basically immortal. Not an Undying, but an Immortal. I mean, she literally receives the knowledge and powers of superheroes/supervillains every few chapters, by the handful. One of them had the ability to survive without breathing, and a few had the ability for rapid regeneration/healing. She is developing too fast.
I enjoyed reading your three stories they are unique and quite interesting I hope you continue all three of them
ch 17. so far really good for a YURI. Not a fan how the whole universe is AU just so that Author can up the age of 1 character by 2 years, it's clearly done so that when they get together with MC they are 18 instead of younger. Funny how the whole universe in the story needs to become AU just for this.
Bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom bom
My friend, I loved your fanfic so far, I loved everything, congratulations and the 3rd time that I'm rereading it since the last update of the new chapter, I honestly just hope that you abandon this raw pearl that you have in your hands, and I say again to goods for fic.
Very well written, especially for a power fantasy. Definitely worth reading, but I'm hesitant to give this a higher rating for a few reasons. The girlfriends that Gwen gets are largely inconsequential, to the point they might as well not even be there. The system is extremely clunky, and while there is eventually a story explanation for that, it sometimes makes it extremely difficult to read. Finally, the cognitive dissonance of Gwen one-shotting pretty much everything she fights, yet still complaining that she's bored and wants a challenge, all while being unwilling to enter a fight with anything on her level. Definitely one of the better fanfics on WN, despite those hangups, so worth the read.