14 chapters in and we still don't have a single proper interaction between characters, just a random guy entering the city, generic reactions and suddenly they're friends this went from 0 to 100 real quick. Have you ever thought that, I don't know, maybe we'd like to see the history progressing in the slice of live aspect? No? oh silly me why would readers ever enjoy reading a history if not for the human interaction.
You... are a horrible story teller author, I don't mean this offensively but you just jump over everything, we were supposed to see the festival, all we got was a damn description of what was happening, not even 2 pages long. Show us what's happening for fucks sake you're writing this history as if you're dragging your finger through the keyboard.
... He literally just said that
The crowd murmured, intrigued. One of the blacksmiths, Wagner, raised his hand. "An innovation hub? What exactly would we be doing there?"
genshin impact: starting from mondstadt to build infrastructure
Video Games · via_mai45
I want to like this fic but by God the way you write everything is just, it feels like you purposefully choose the worst possible way to describe a scene, repeat words, explain far too much all the damn time, not showing anything just telling, the dialogue and interactions being FAR too direct to feel human. I read 23 chapters and from beginning to end it felt like you tried to force me to feel something instead of trying to get that emotion.
Did i miss him giving his name?
"No way..." I breathed, my eyes wide. "Did he... did Aether actually drive Stormterror off?"
Genshin: Teyvat's Wandering Demon
Anime & Comics · SadGetti
The word "he" exists for a reason, use it moe and stop repeating his name ao many timeas
TD's expression didn't change, but before Tayden could continue his panicked rant, TD's fist connected with his stomach, sending him flying backward. The impact knocked the wind out of him, and Tayden crashed into the wall with a dull thud, sliding down to the floor.
Genshin: Teyvat's Wandering Demon
Anime & Comics · SadGetti
Your?
Shaking off his shock, Tayden went into the bunker with other people and saw that Eula was about to go out "Eula! Your going out there?!"
Genshin: Teyvat's Wandering Demon
Anime & Comics · SadGetti
You... dont tell someone mysterious that you are suspicious of them author, that's the single most important thing you don't do, the way the knights are acting is kinda cartoonish.
She paused, her gaze steady and authoritative. "For now, we'll continue to monitor your progress. I'll be assigning you more tasks through the Adventurers' Guild, and Eula will be monitoring your stay for now. Also regarding your place of stay, you are allowed to use it for another month but after that you have to find another place to live in. With that all out of the way, while it may seem like we see you as a threat, know this—should you ever need assistance or find yourself in trouble, the Knights of Favonius are here to help. We only ask for your honesty and cooperation in return."
Genshin: Teyvat's Wandering Demon
Anime & Comics · SadGetti
Seems like a suitable enough face for a being cursed by the Gods
His eyes fell on a body—a Hilichurl, lifeless and crumpled at his feet. But it wasn't just one. All around him were the remains of the creatures he had fought earlier, their faces twisted in pain and fear. Yet, they weren't just bodies anymore; they were twisted, monstrous versions of themselves, and they seemed to be watching him, accusing him.
Genshin: Teyvat's Wandering Demon
Anime & Comics · SadGetti
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original Destroy yourself or... Destroy YourSelf
Tags: Baki, Mlp, Weak To Strong, Oc Insert, Gore, Thriller. ______________________________________ Fear, an instinctual response rooted in humanity's primal survival instinct, the feeling that arises when they perceive a threat or danger to their continued survival, triggering a "fight or flight" response. Such an emotion should not be prevalent in the world of Equus, being a mostly peaceful planet a human of all things should not feel any kind of 'danger' or 'fear' coming from... Well, anywhere. That is... What a fool might say, for an astute observer dangers can be found in impossible places in a world of Magic. Foals capable of ripping steel with their undeveloped magic, pegasus capable of breaking the sound barrier, create tornados and even control the very skies. Unicorns capable of crushing organs without even coming near their victims, their magic being capable of warping one's mind or even their body into any desired form. And worse of all, a near God-like Mare capable of moving the very stars. One bad day is all it takes for one's life to be taken, for a planet to be destroyed in a fit of childish rage. So... What does a human do to survive in this planet? Power, the answer for it all, simple, as long as he has it he will not have to fear, he will not need to be helpless in the face of those more powerful than him.6 Chs 65 Coleções
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Just Anonymous (MLP)
You are Anonymous and after dying you were reborn in horseland. (RGRE) Reversed gender roles equestria. Except that you are not even close to being a pony or a human for that matter... Apparently you are some kind of humanoid demon... you guess? because it kinda remind you of Baphomet but with more fur. ------------ So! I am NOT the author of this fic, but he has given me permission to spread it here, I'll post his chapters as I edit them (Yes I am his editor) The original author is Anonymous 1234321 if you want to read his fic go here (https://www.fimfiction.net/story/528282/just-anonymous) Or just go to Fimfiction and search the history of the same name and Image.9 Chs 77 Coleções
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Reincarnated As an Uncreative SupersaiYANG (RWBY Yang SI) Re-Make
I was 8 years old when I finally remembered my past life. It was ridiculous. I had taken the place of Yang Xiao Long. Except I had black hair instead of a Blonde. And the important thing...I was a futa... ____________________________________________________ Not OP MC she will work for every scrap of strength she gains, Ki is not Exclusive to her, and most important of all this is not a wish-fulfillment story.13 Chs 710 Coleções
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Marvel, The Last Daughter of Krypton
4.84
Holding a symbol of an entire species and inspiring hope in the hearts of an entire planet is harder than most can ever imagine but not for her. The Last Daughter of Krypton does not have to imagine such a burden, not when she has to guide an entire race of beings so similar yet different from her own.13 Chs 1.4k Coleções
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The last daughter of Krypton: Informational
An informational book about my fic "Marvel: The Last Daughter of Krypton" The auxiliary chapters would become too many if I did not create this separate Book. Here I will post All images of the fic (The Image auxiliary chapter will remain in the main Book) Besides supplementary information about the world, the characters, Ocs, and even the abilities of certain characters so you mt dear reader won't be confused about everything. I will not be posting information that could be considered a Spoiler up to the latest chapter released so be sure to read at the very least until the current chapter or the first volume of this fic.2 Chs 67 Coleções
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None kajdb
You are Anonymous and after dying you were reborn in horseland. (RGRE) Reversed gender roles equestria. Except that you are not even close to being a pony or a human for that matter... Apparently you are some kind of humanoid demon... you guess? because it kinda remind you of Baphomet but with more fur. ---------------- So! I am NOT the author of this fic, but he has given me permission to spread it here, I'll post his chapters as I edit them (Yes I am his editor) The original author is Anonymous 1234321 if you want to read his fic go here (https://www.fimfiction.net/story/528282/just-anonymous)0 Chs 64 Coleções
Sigh... like, why? Genuinely, why? Why do you INSIST on keeping stating the obvious People. Do. Not. Speak. Like. That.
Diluc nodded, his gaze focused on the machine. "It's impressive. If it works as intended, it will make a significant difference in the construction work. Satoshi has proven that his ideas have real value."
genshin impact: starting from mondstadt to build infrastructure
Video Games · via_mai45