A Journey Unwanted

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WhOaMI

Finally, another novel with a very good story is again on this platform with a very good story plot with a very good balance between slow and fast development has been found and of course the usual behavior of this platform makes this kind of novels somewhat buried and very difficult to be found.

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WattsonSimp

Honestly I am loving this book, great writing with a bit of everything. Side stories, past memories it all connects amazingly well. I am in absolute love with this book keep it going.

Ngl, this is pretty fire so far. I'm not a fan of isekai with op protagonist but this is pretty decent. And please no harem

For an isekai novel with an Op Mc this is pretty decent so far. I like the concept of the God's and spawns. Keep it up.

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PocketCat2

Whoa what a earthshattering novel, jk jk. This is a repost of the original novel where I just improve a few things.

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NeroCladius

It's interesting so far with little spelling or punctuation mistakes. But sometimes the story feels too slow or too fast but all in all this is a fine novel.

LV 1

Jakaka_Jajaha

Isekai novels are a guilty pleasure of mine especially if they are decently written. I like the characters so far, seems like they're there because they have an actual role and are not just mouth pieces. Also you made the mc a femboy which is enough for 5 stars

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bravus69

Hey new to this app and this is one of the first novels I have read. It's good so far with little punctuation or spelling mistakes. Feels like I'm reading a Light Novel.

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Deez_nuts8999

The story is okay. I give it five stars cause the babes are hot, writing is okay but yeah thats about it. Is this gonna be a harem. It be a waste if not, you could get a lot more readers.

Whyyyyyyy is the Mc a femboyyyyyyyyyyyyy?

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RED203

It’s so fire I hope this stays free frfr

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Araina_Diaz

Excellent story overall so far. I very much am looking forward to seeing more. Please keep up the good work and thank you for writing this.

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therock

The writing is excellent, no doubt. Even though I'm on chapter 55 it's definitely a story that stands out from the others, of course it has quite visible mistakes, Mikoto development is quite null so far I'll probably have to rewrite my review if something happens. Dear author, your way of describing everything is certainly out of the ordinary but doing it every chapter for unimportant things is certainly tedious for me, the development of the other characters is not great either, almost null except for Agatha. The abrupt changes of perspective is also a problem, but as I say, I have yet to read the other half of the story. Too many names without any importance and well the dialogues are not bad but definitely can be improved. But it was definitely a good read.

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Deandre_Young_0854

pretty good won’t lie it just focused to much on the side characters that a lot of the times the mc doesn’t feel like the mc author said he didn’t want sc to get forgotten about that’s good and all but they should’ve be to revelevant to the point you go a multiples on them and don’t see the mc that’s a lot of what the 2nd arc suffered from he still has great moments though just try to fix this for the 3rd arc plz

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Nagito_Komaeda_8093

I've read many isekai novels before but yours is definitely one of the better ones

It's okay so far, a lot of unique concepts and powers in the setting. A lot of characters to keep track of though.

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Aseer89

It's okay. Not many spelling mistakes and the fights and everything is decent. Just feel like there are too many charecters to keep track of. But that just makes the Auxiliary chapter more useful