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Overall very good, but story development, not anymore... If there's 0 star rate, I'll rate it as such... or even minus 5... Overall very good, but story development, not anymore... If there's 0 star rate, I'll rate it as such... or even minus 5... Overall very good, but story development, not anymore... If there's 0 star rate, I'll rate it as such... or even minus 5...
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Muy buen fan fic de bleach, tanto el desarrollo de la historia como el personaje y me gusta que no no se quiera unir de una con alguno de los bandos si no que siga su propio ritmo además de que nomás deja intimidar y sobre se agradecen las actualizaciones que haces
I'm enjoying this story a lot! keep going! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. .. ... ..... . .. . . . . .
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No hay mucho que decir, aunque la historia no es tan original, está muy bien hecha, es muy fácil de leer, y las batallas son entretenidas, el mc no es un maníaco pervertido, ni un chad que trata a las chicas como aire, es una persona normal con un habilidad OP, y aunque hace abuso de ella, no anda con complejos de elegido, ni es un monstruo indiferente, es muy agradable leer sobre este tipo de personas, sin duda digno de estar en el top 3.
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Its a translation the raw is decent in the first couple chapters gets a bit boring after he becomes a captain and i think he became a kenpachi
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It has a lot of potential, I liked how you made it bring swords from other worlds so it doesn't have the same plot as the other fanfics. I hope there are many chapters
I like this fanfic. though in this and the original I wonder if soul society and the gotei patrol the entire planet or if other spiritual factions exist as if they only cover Japan then that leaves the question of who covers the rest of the world and the size of soul society as I assume it should be as large as earth or a little smaller
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Overall very good, but story development, not anymore... If there's 0 star rate, I'll rate it as such... or even minus 5... Overall very good, but story development, not anymore... If there's 0 star rate, I'll rate it as such... or even minus 5... Overall very good, but story development, not anymore... If there's 0 star rate, I'll rate it as such... or even minus 5...
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Muy buen fan fic de bleach, tanto el desarrollo de la historia como el personaje y me gusta que no no se quiera unir de una con alguno de los bandos si no que siga su propio ritmo además de que nomás deja intimidar y sobre se agradecen las actualizaciones que haces
I'm enjoying this story a lot! keep going! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. .. ... ..... . .. . . . . .
Revelar Spoiler No hay mucho que decir, aunque la historia no es tan original, está muy bien hecha, es muy fácil de leer, y las batallas son entretenidas, el mc no es un maníaco pervertido, ni un chad que trata a las chicas como aire, es una persona normal con un habilidad OP, y aunque hace abuso de ella, no anda con complejos de elegido, ni es un monstruo indiferente, es muy agradable leer sobre este tipo de personas, sin duda digno de estar en el top 3.
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Its a translation the raw is decent in the first couple chapters gets a bit boring after he becomes a captain and i think he became a kenpachi
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It has a lot of potential, I liked how you made it bring swords from other worlds so it doesn't have the same plot as the other fanfics. I hope there are many chapters
I like this fanfic. though in this and the original I wonder if soul society and the gotei patrol the entire planet or if other spiritual factions exist as if they only cover Japan then that leaves the question of who covers the rest of the world and the size of soul society as I assume it should be as large as earth or a little smaller