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Is this version abandoned?I love this version of the novel I hope it's not dead
Your story is great. but I'm seeing tech that's being left out. human tech I extensive in many more fictions than I have seen in your story.
Не слишком плохо, но не средний . Хороший такой фанф. Жаль пока мало. Можно было и не смешивать столько миров. Учитывая Мультивселенную любой мир возможен.
Where is the new episode? ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Despitethe mc getting a variety of things it doesn't feel convoluted or bloated in any way with good pacing In progression And a reasonably nice story flow
seems ok enough, the grinding for tech seems ok, but its a bit less, for a tech system, still felt weird he didnt bother trying to make an arc reactor own his own as ivan vanko is real and simple trip to russia to find the plans and getting vanko, but doing so might alienate stark
A great read the Mc wasn’t ridiculously op and still great awaiting future updates
good book this is my second review and I still enjoyed the book but I can't enjoy the mc. he's too...anime protagonist like giving away tech (or whatever CH-24 is ) to his "friends" I still don't understand how he can perceive them as real, bro never had any conflict about seeing this people as Fictional or real rubs me the wrong way when someone is giving away tech of this caliber knowing full well this is his only "ace up his sleeve" in the marvel universe won't give it a bad review loved the concept, the Tony stark chapters were fun to read don't like how Ned and Gwen are so heavily involved,also don't like how the author made them geniuses that could recreate SAO nerve gear (L yap session)
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This story is all-around awesome. I am genuinely looking forward to what comes next.What are you going to throw it snacks? How is it going to affect the course of the story? Who plans are you going to absolutely Ruin.
Lo único malo es el ritmo de las actuaciones recientes Pero eso es mejor a comparación de cancelar la historia... pero aun así es bastante buena y esperemos que continúe publicando más capítulos
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I enjoy the story. It's new for me, and I like how the Mc acts because when I read the story, I imagine I'm the Mc, and I would do what he does. PS Try a vampire romance story. I think with your writing, it could be good
Would like to see him be more proactive towards the threats he should be well aware of. Is he having Cortana subtly track/infiltrate Zola? What about Vanko? Can he use his VR to deprogram James Barnes? Is he doing anything about Osborm? Von Doom? Reed Richards is every disaster imaginable just waiting to happen. Maybe their space flight disaster should be more permanent in his case?
Es muy interesante como el protagonista se adapta al mundo y progresando.aunque el sistema lo ayude es bueno para poder aser que avance rápido.
alternate universe tech go brrrrr. haha it was a really fun read so far and I enjoy seeing the MC combining tech trees to exceed his limitations. I hate the chosen romance of Gwen, I would have went with someone who contrasts the MC. Harem or anything would have been better than Gwem. Could have developed Rogue into a good love interest because of how different to the MC she is. Other than the chosen romance its an amazing work and I can't wait for more.
What the heck. why this ff only got 4.2 star while other ff that use chatgpt to write the story with cringe dialogues and monologues got higher rate?
Man those low reviews gave this ff no justice at all. It almost made me pass this up, good thing i didn't listen. 😹 The FF itself has a lot of potential and is very enjoyable if there is a complaint here it's just the number of chapters 😹 but tyt Author thanks for not dropping.
you better not read this story, it’s so terrible, it’s just garbage, I don’t know why it’s praised out of all the fanfiction about Marvel that I’ve read, it can be said to be one of the worst. By the way, the author of this clown work doesn’t even read the reviews of his readers because I don’t know why when many asked not to make him a mutant, he still made the main character a mutant, this is stupid and stupid in the Marvel world in which everyone hates mutants
Complaining that the story doesn't develop into the direction you desire or that the MC decides for that technology or the other is NOT legit criticism!
Muy buena historia me gusta el personaje y como va mesclando la trama de Marvel en general y aunque no estoy muy seguro de que tan poderoso se podría volver el protagonista con tecnología a no ser que le metan algo como el Omnitrix se que puede ser uno de los personajes que más voto de voz tienen en el mundo.
honestly... I've rather enjoyed it. i am a fan of this style. for anyone looking for something fun without being too "grimdark" or serious...or depressing. it's a fun read. plz don't drop.
The premise was good, and it started out well in spite of some grammatical errors. But it eventually fell flat, and started to become harder and harder to read. This has potential, but it needs an editor or at the very least a beta-reader.
Cinco estrellas por qué la empiezo a leer cuando la termine o si el autor la deja que ojalá no, lo modificaré [img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries]
We need more update . Thank you. I hope u update more novel about marvel world .! Nude jah EU dh dud skate idk slack has us sys disk anyways did chdjdiskaush
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fk them reviews, have an open mind and drive head first into this, you might like it or not, don let others tell you otherwise, what matters is you like it.
Author for fun here! Of course I’m gonna rate my own novel high 😁👌 updates are consistent and I try to keep my story interesting so give it a try if you like Marvel and Sci-fi Tech
Is this version abandoned?I love this version of the novel I hope it's not dead
Your story is great. but I'm seeing tech that's being left out. human tech I extensive in many more fictions than I have seen in your story.
Не слишком плохо, но не средний . Хороший такой фанф. Жаль пока мало. Можно было и не смешивать столько миров. Учитывая Мультивселенную любой мир возможен.
Where is the new episode? ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
,.................. ,.................. .,.................. gut..........................................,.................. .,.................. .,.................. .,..................
Revelar Spoiler Despitethe mc getting a variety of things it doesn't feel convoluted or bloated in any way with good pacing In progression And a reasonably nice story flow
seems ok enough, the grinding for tech seems ok, but its a bit less, for a tech system, still felt weird he didnt bother trying to make an arc reactor own his own as ivan vanko is real and simple trip to russia to find the plans and getting vanko, but doing so might alienate stark
A great read the Mc wasn’t ridiculously op and still great awaiting future updates
good book this is my second review and I still enjoyed the book but I can't enjoy the mc. he's too...anime protagonist like giving away tech (or whatever CH-24 is ) to his "friends" I still don't understand how he can perceive them as real, bro never had any conflict about seeing this people as Fictional or real rubs me the wrong way when someone is giving away tech of this caliber knowing full well this is his only "ace up his sleeve" in the marvel universe won't give it a bad review loved the concept, the Tony stark chapters were fun to read don't like how Ned and Gwen are so heavily involved,also don't like how the author made them geniuses that could recreate SAO nerve gear (L yap session)
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This story is all-around awesome. I am genuinely looking forward to what comes next.What are you going to throw it snacks? How is it going to affect the course of the story? Who plans are you going to absolutely Ruin.
Lo único malo es el ritmo de las actuaciones recientes Pero eso es mejor a comparación de cancelar la historia... pero aun así es bastante buena y esperemos que continúe publicando más capítulos
Revelar Spoiler I enjoy the story. It's new for me, and I like how the Mc acts because when I read the story, I imagine I'm the Mc, and I would do what he does. PS Try a vampire romance story. I think with your writing, it could be good
Would like to see him be more proactive towards the threats he should be well aware of. Is he having Cortana subtly track/infiltrate Zola? What about Vanko? Can he use his VR to deprogram James Barnes? Is he doing anything about Osborm? Von Doom? Reed Richards is every disaster imaginable just waiting to happen. Maybe their space flight disaster should be more permanent in his case?
Es muy interesante como el protagonista se adapta al mundo y progresando.aunque el sistema lo ayude es bueno para poder aser que avance rápido.
alternate universe tech go brrrrr. haha it was a really fun read so far and I enjoy seeing the MC combining tech trees to exceed his limitations. I hate the chosen romance of Gwen, I would have went with someone who contrasts the MC. Harem or anything would have been better than Gwem. Could have developed Rogue into a good love interest because of how different to the MC she is. Other than the chosen romance its an amazing work and I can't wait for more.
What the heck. why this ff only got 4.2 star while other ff that use chatgpt to write the story with cringe dialogues and monologues got higher rate?
Man those low reviews gave this ff no justice at all. It almost made me pass this up, good thing i didn't listen. 😹 The FF itself has a lot of potential and is very enjoyable if there is a complaint here it's just the number of chapters 😹 but tyt Author thanks for not dropping.
you better not read this story, it’s so terrible, it’s just garbage, I don’t know why it’s praised out of all the fanfiction about Marvel that I’ve read, it can be said to be one of the worst. By the way, the author of this clown work doesn’t even read the reviews of his readers because I don’t know why when many asked not to make him a mutant, he still made the main character a mutant, this is stupid and stupid in the Marvel world in which everyone hates mutants
Complaining that the story doesn't develop into the direction you desire or that the MC decides for that technology or the other is NOT legit criticism!
Muy buena historia me gusta el personaje y como va mesclando la trama de Marvel en general y aunque no estoy muy seguro de que tan poderoso se podría volver el protagonista con tecnología a no ser que le metan algo como el Omnitrix se que puede ser uno de los personajes que más voto de voz tienen en el mundo.
honestly... I've rather enjoyed it. i am a fan of this style. for anyone looking for something fun without being too "grimdark" or serious...or depressing. it's a fun read. plz don't drop.
The premise was good, and it started out well in spite of some grammatical errors. But it eventually fell flat, and started to become harder and harder to read. This has potential, but it needs an editor or at the very least a beta-reader.
Cinco estrellas por qué la empiezo a leer cuando la termine o si el autor la deja que ojalá no, lo modificaré [img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries]
We need more update . Thank you. I hope u update more novel about marvel world .! Nude jah EU dh dud skate idk slack has us sys disk anyways did chdjdiskaush
Revelar Spoiler fk them reviews, have an open mind and drive head first into this, you might like it or not, don let others tell you otherwise, what matters is you like it.
Author for fun here! Of course I’m gonna rate my own novel high 😁👌 updates are consistent and I try to keep my story interesting so give it a try if you like Marvel and Sci-fi Tech