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Hey Author, I have some feedback on the story. While it is very enjoyable and well-written, the pacing feels too slow. At this rate, it will take a long time to reach the major plot points, especially given the current update schedule. Additionally, the main character's goals need to be more clearly defined. It would be helpful to know what kind of powers he wants and how he plans to achieve them. Even if these plans change later, having an idea of his thoughts and strategies would make his journey more engaging. One more thing: the chip the main character used to protect his thoughts should have been introduced earlier. Revealing it right before meeting the X-men felt abrupt, like a last-minute addition for the readers. It would have been better for readers to know about it in advance. Thank you for your hard work!
Good story with ok ish updates,,,...,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,!,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Author “Unkown_To_All” if you had access to a guide on how to create your own writing style so that you are better equipped to write stories, would you read it? I have noticed that there isn’t much information on the basics of how to write, available online.
The writing is great up till chapter 58 but after that too much ai assistance is being used, updating stability has been mostly fine although there has been some instances of instability, the story in general is 4/5 because it is interesting seeing the interactions between Kol and members of the marvel universe, little to no cliches are used, the characters feel a little fake but overall the story was excellent.
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I was planning to read it but after reading the synopsis ......I am leaving with a broken heart..... Author please take some grammar class 🙏🙏
I love it. It has a resemblance to another story I have been reading, Technology System in the Modern World. My only critique is that it feels that the MC is rushing a lot. Like there could have been a better way to implement all the technologies and introduce them. But other than that, this is a 10/10 read. Definitely recommend.
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I am loving how you made the main character slot in nicely and how every chapter makes you want more💜 I just wish to know when ya going to add more like can we expect a chapter a day or one per week or 2 3 you get what I mean
I'm on chapter 61. So far MC is very smart, how he started his plan carefully. There are no OP powers like other FFs that are suddenly on par with MCU characters. And here's what's most interesting, how MC does research to create new elements in the MCU. Honestly this is very interesting to read and there is no drama cringe nonsense
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This is the most average story you will ever read. Nothings wrong with it, but nothing happens. You’ll go 10 chapters expecting something to happen, 20, 30, 60 but nothing substantial or actually enticing does. It’s just a gradual slog where the MC amasses power and nothing entertaining happens. Sure it has its moments, but nothing beyond that, the plot is bland like the MCs personality and I don’t see that changing.
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Everything was just fine and all until the author decided to have Mc get beaten up by Wolverine while possessing Ch-24 and not to mention NZT which is supposed to give Mc a huge advantage against Wolverine. The fight scene with Wolverine is too generic and anime-like, how can Wolverine disappear in his vision and suddenly appear in front of him like some generic anime fight scene. In the movies and even the comics, Wolverine is NOT that fast to suddenly disappear and appear. And here I thought I finally found a good Marvel fanfic. I know mistakes are inevitable and no one is perfect but from what I just read, this is clearly not a mistake and the author wrote the fight scene with purpose probably just to give the Mc character development. Anyways, this is my honest review, I wish you luck with your fanfic author-san.
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falls short of expectations, saw the reviews and the ratings, it was less then what I was thinking it will be, but fine to pass some time
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the main character is the bottom, he gives out the super-soldier serum like hot cakes... then was the point of creating it if he eventually makes everyone the same as him? What's the point of the serum?
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Bro can you putt horizon robots if we wanna se capitan America vs robot T. rex for the readers
Enjoying the story and had hope that this could be a great fanfic but nahhhh I waste my time reading 34 chapters only for the author force the MC join the xmen lol dude doesn’t even have the Xgene but not his reputation is ruined, shield will monitor him 10000x more and so will hydra and other organizations…. Like no comments said it was a good idea and literally all of them said it’s awful lol but that’s the author for ya! Ruining a story and wasting readers time by making the story trash out of nowhere
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Hey Author, I have some feedback on the story. While it is very enjoyable and well-written, the pacing feels too slow. At this rate, it will take a long time to reach the major plot points, especially given the current update schedule. Additionally, the main character's goals need to be more clearly defined. It would be helpful to know what kind of powers he wants and how he plans to achieve them. Even if these plans change later, having an idea of his thoughts and strategies would make his journey more engaging. One more thing: the chip the main character used to protect his thoughts should have been introduced earlier. Revealing it right before meeting the X-men felt abrupt, like a last-minute addition for the readers. It would have been better for readers to know about it in advance. Thank you for your hard work!
Good story with ok ish updates,,,...,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,!,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Author “Unkown_To_All” if you had access to a guide on how to create your own writing style so that you are better equipped to write stories, would you read it? I have noticed that there isn’t much information on the basics of how to write, available online.
The writing is great up till chapter 58 but after that too much ai assistance is being used, updating stability has been mostly fine although there has been some instances of instability, the story in general is 4/5 because it is interesting seeing the interactions between Kol and members of the marvel universe, little to no cliches are used, the characters feel a little fake but overall the story was excellent.
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I was planning to read it but after reading the synopsis ......I am leaving with a broken heart..... Author please take some grammar class 🙏🙏
I love it. It has a resemblance to another story I have been reading, Technology System in the Modern World. My only critique is that it feels that the MC is rushing a lot. Like there could have been a better way to implement all the technologies and introduce them. But other than that, this is a 10/10 read. Definitely recommend.
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I am loving how you made the main character slot in nicely and how every chapter makes you want more💜 I just wish to know when ya going to add more like can we expect a chapter a day or one per week or 2 3 you get what I mean
I'm on chapter 61. So far MC is very smart, how he started his plan carefully. There are no OP powers like other FFs that are suddenly on par with MCU characters. And here's what's most interesting, how MC does research to create new elements in the MCU. Honestly this is very interesting to read and there is no drama cringe nonsense
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Overall Rate 0.0 Review should be more than 140 characters
This is the most average story you will ever read. Nothings wrong with it, but nothing happens. You’ll go 10 chapters expecting something to happen, 20, 30, 60 but nothing substantial or actually enticing does. It’s just a gradual slog where the MC amasses power and nothing entertaining happens. Sure it has its moments, but nothing beyond that, the plot is bland like the MCs personality and I don’t see that changing.
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Everything was just fine and all until the author decided to have Mc get beaten up by Wolverine while possessing Ch-24 and not to mention NZT which is supposed to give Mc a huge advantage against Wolverine. The fight scene with Wolverine is too generic and anime-like, how can Wolverine disappear in his vision and suddenly appear in front of him like some generic anime fight scene. In the movies and even the comics, Wolverine is NOT that fast to suddenly disappear and appear. And here I thought I finally found a good Marvel fanfic. I know mistakes are inevitable and no one is perfect but from what I just read, this is clearly not a mistake and the author wrote the fight scene with purpose probably just to give the Mc character development. Anyways, this is my honest review, I wish you luck with your fanfic author-san.
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falls short of expectations, saw the reviews and the ratings, it was less then what I was thinking it will be, but fine to pass some time
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the main character is the bottom, he gives out the super-soldier serum like hot cakes... then was the point of creating it if he eventually makes everyone the same as him? What's the point of the serum?
Revelar Spoiler Bro can you putt horizon robots if we wanna se capitan America vs robot T. rex for the readers
Enjoying the story and had hope that this could be a great fanfic but nahhhh I waste my time reading 34 chapters only for the author force the MC join the xmen lol dude doesn’t even have the Xgene but not his reputation is ruined, shield will monitor him 10000x more and so will hydra and other organizations…. Like no comments said it was a good idea and literally all of them said it’s awful lol but that’s the author for ya! Ruining a story and wasting readers time by making the story trash out of nowhere
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It’s a Goated story. 10/10. Would recommend.