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i like the story tho other than MC everyone else feels a bit dumber and the plot seems bit rushed
This is a really good fanfiction I hope you release chapters regularly. Your story will definitely reach number 1. If you do that then it will get over a million views or more. Even if 1% or 0.1% of a million viewers join for membership with you it should support you to carry on writing great fanfiction even with writers block. Please 🙏 don't drop this fanfiction.
The author should persist and continue this story, it's going well........................................................................ .......
don't stop writing this masterpiece pls it amazing I can't get enough of it. I just wish he could work more on his magic try and make it more versatile so if he ever gets to dragon fighting level he will be ready like really imagine he's flying in the sky fighting 3 DRAGONS that will be EPIC ps: great job continue the great work and try to not get stressed while writing cuz I don't what you to suddenly drop it
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Very nice story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏 I liked the story💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚
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so far i really enjoy this story there's nothing annoying me which is very good all the characters feel accurate to the lore so far i am very excited to see the rest of the story i really hope the author doesn't drop it like the rest
I hope you all have a great time reading this fanfiction, I had a lot of trouble putting it out because I didn't think I was good enough at it but I think sometimes you have to take courage and get started if you like this story I am grateful to you in advance and I hope that you can continue to follow me throughout this long adventure.
I didn't understand the first chapter and the beginning is a bit confusing but other than this every thing else is good .
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Man o just found it and still didn't read it yet but before that can you make VAL one of his wife it will benefit him well because he is gonna marry the princess
i like the story tho other than MC everyone else feels a bit dumber and the plot seems bit rushed
This is a really good fanfiction I hope you release chapters regularly. Your story will definitely reach number 1. If you do that then it will get over a million views or more. Even if 1% or 0.1% of a million viewers join for membership with you it should support you to carry on writing great fanfiction even with writers block. Please 🙏 don't drop this fanfiction.
The author should persist and continue this story, it's going well........................................................................ .......
don't stop writing this masterpiece pls it amazing I can't get enough of it. I just wish he could work more on his magic try and make it more versatile so if he ever gets to dragon fighting level he will be ready like really imagine he's flying in the sky fighting 3 DRAGONS that will be EPIC ps: great job continue the great work and try to not get stressed while writing cuz I don't what you to suddenly drop it
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Very nice story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏 I liked the story💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚
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so far i really enjoy this story there's nothing annoying me which is very good all the characters feel accurate to the lore so far i am very excited to see the rest of the story i really hope the author doesn't drop it like the rest
I hope you all have a great time reading this fanfiction, I had a lot of trouble putting it out because I didn't think I was good enough at it but I think sometimes you have to take courage and get started if you like this story I am grateful to you in advance and I hope that you can continue to follow me throughout this long adventure.
I didn't understand the first chapter and the beginning is a bit confusing but other than this every thing else is good .
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Man o just found it and still didn't read it yet but before that can you make VAL one of his wife it will benefit him well because he is gonna marry the princess