its good keep up the good work please update more.
You're right before Dumbledore tried to kill him but now its personal cause Dumbledore will not leave him alone. He only stopped cause of grindawald and the plan but from this story u can tell he is petty so after the plan is done he will go for harry again.
Make their own city in Essos with all the knowledge of valayria. Also use future modern knowledge of sewers(he doesn't need to know how they work he can get experts to make it) hygiene and just proper planning from the start to make it be able to expand. Also anything else I missed from modern world, try to make it the most modern city in the world.
1. The Continent of Essos
Game Of Thrones: Lucaerys Family
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Thanks for the chapter, the only bad thing was he should have stayed longer and tried to learn their language and how they made the portals, so he could come back any time and train there for future threats.
This is the best invincible fan fiction I have read. Its better than the invincible tv show. Please don't forget to use the flaxan world as a hide out, training time chamber and use the technology of the world and if possible even improve it. An example would be nano technology. Which can be used by mc, his family, friends and future team if needed to improve physique and healing factor to fight enemies. Please don't drop it its really good.
Thanks for the chapter keep up the good work
I always wanted to read a fan fiction that developed the knight path as well cause it has a lot of potential. From what I remember it uses life fore to improve stats, if leylin could research and understand the soul he could have done the same with life force. MC could share this with his future family.
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Its getting really good keep up the good work.
Why is the main character not killing the mountain and his lackeys.
All your stories are really good the only thing holding it back is how quickly it gets updated................................................
Aemon Targaryen
TV · Ghostrider0002