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Довольно хорошая история, хотя и несколько быстрая в развитии и силах гг. Совершенная память, прекрасные таланты боя, мощная магия. Хотя и нельзя отрицать тяжёлую работу, слишком быстро и легко он всё получил. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's alright, in the beginning it feels like the plot moves very fast. some decisions have small gaps others are very clever, the MC is somehow always steps ahead of everyone else. All in all you can like it or dislike it, I find it okay and the concept of this fiction very interesting.
one of the few best GOT ff, it is by far one of my favourite so far with the only reason it's not a 5/5 being the update frequency, but it's better than nothing. I mean have you seen the amount of dropped GOT ff out there.
Not a lot of writing mistakes, but bad, border line cringe character interactions. MC seems like an edgelord. Lot of chapters though, so I’m hoping it gets better.
Toute la complexité du lore rushé en moins de vingt chapitres, c'est dommage vu le bon commencement . Le plus gros défaut reste le personnage principal
bro it became so much of a nothing burger every time there is a new chapter there is no story development it is lagging so much . the MC is very scarcely mentioned any more . i mean what . i am here to see from his perspective not some general or princes it became a laggy mess...
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
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one of the good works I have read so far so...keep writing and improve i guess
Great fanfic.Hidden gem. Keep the chapters coming author. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
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MC is a lunatic and not the fun kind ..his consistency as a character is 0 ...it's so bad it even pulls GRRM's characters down to his level There are good parts in this but it all buckles under the pressure of this main character , forcing lots of plot holes and contrivances
Sabes fue un poco difícil al principio pero conforme seguí leyendo me fue gustando más este fic y ver que le dan poco crédito me da rabia no puedo cambiar eso pero espero que entre los 100 comentarios de odio tengas uno que te demuestre que Vaz por buen camimo
Every part of this story is forced plot points. It's basically a Gary Stu except that there are constant poorly written in flaws/mistakes that the main character has to work his way around the problem with that is that because they are poorly written, Is that most of the time these mistakes are easily avoidable but like I said, purposely, not avoided, making you really question the characters intelligence. Not to mention the main character is incredibly chaotic in personality Is literally like if you were to mix a child and an adult And throw them into a arrogant teenager it's just pure annoyance anyway I gave writing ability three stars because while this was pretty bad, I do think the author has talent I gave update stability. Three stars because I haven't been around this story long enough to have a clear understanding of how often or well they update Story development I gave one star because well the story started off, fairly strong-ish But went downhill pretty quickly I gave character design three stars because the characters were pretty bad, but bar the atrocity that is the main character. You can kind of sometimes see faint, resemblances of what they were supposed to be. World background I gave four stars simply because the author seems to have done a lot of research, so even though there was a lot of BS all throughout the story, there were some things that made sense
Just powered through pretty much the whole story and really enjoying it. Look forward to its continuation!
I liked the story and i hope u keep uploading Thank u for this good novel i like tis jon snow more than the show 1000 time but u could make him more peaceful than angry
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No les hagas caso a aquellos que critican, como si fueran escritores consumados. Sigue escribiendo y perfeccionando tu escritura, en mi opinión es muy buen trabajo pero solo soy un fan. Suerte
Revelar Spoiler
oh yeah, novel emas lainnya. .yah walaupun beberapa ceritanya kurang seru, tapi saya menikmatinya xD
well it has its interesting parts, but everything happens very fast and there doesn't seem to be any character development, the mc is like that and that's it, they don't show how he prepared himself or what he did, they say he spent some time preparing himself as a teacher but it is mentioned in passing and in another moment he appears with a network of spies and it is also mentioned in passing.
Revelar Spoiler
a forced story at many points. It even makes you want to read it at the beginning but as you progress the need to swallow the script is very forced... nonsense things, facilities, absurdities and "magic powers" are the last trick to bury the plot.
Written at chapter 8. So far, it's a good story with some clichés but it's still good. Can I definitely see myself reading more of this. The magic aspect I'm enjoying is that I would ike to see more on the ritual side of things. The only concern I have right now is if it's a harem story cause that could ruin it. WQ 4 SD 4 CD 3 US 5 WB 3
it is pretty good, a bit fast paced for my taste. best part is MC is powerful and uses his power to do whatever he wants and he is not completely evil. finaly MC is using maGic KEEP IT UP AUTHOR
Довольно хорошая история, хотя и несколько быстрая в развитии и силах гг. Совершенная память, прекрасные таланты боя, мощная магия. Хотя и нельзя отрицать тяжёлую работу, слишком быстро и легко он всё получил. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's alright, in the beginning it feels like the plot moves very fast. some decisions have small gaps others are very clever, the MC is somehow always steps ahead of everyone else. All in all you can like it or dislike it, I find it okay and the concept of this fiction very interesting.
one of the few best GOT ff, it is by far one of my favourite so far with the only reason it's not a 5/5 being the update frequency, but it's better than nothing. I mean have you seen the amount of dropped GOT ff out there.
Not a lot of writing mistakes, but bad, border line cringe character interactions. MC seems like an edgelord. Lot of chapters though, so I’m hoping it gets better.
Toute la complexité du lore rushé en moins de vingt chapitres, c'est dommage vu le bon commencement . Le plus gros défaut reste le personnage principal
bro it became so much of a nothing burger every time there is a new chapter there is no story development it is lagging so much . the MC is very scarcely mentioned any more . i mean what . i am here to see from his perspective not some general or princes it became a laggy mess...
Something that I have always wondered is if the Valyrians conquered the continent of Essos because all the noble families of Valyria died? It just doesn't make sense, who ruled the big cities in Essos? the slaves? Weren't there dragon lords ruling those cities? Didn't the families of Valyria have their own territories?
mind breakingly good 🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯
one of the good works I have read so far so...keep writing and improve i guess
Great fanfic.Hidden gem. Keep the chapters coming author. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
MC is a lunatic and not the fun kind ..his consistency as a character is 0 ...it's so bad it even pulls GRRM's characters down to his level There are good parts in this but it all buckles under the pressure of this main character , forcing lots of plot holes and contrivances
Sabes fue un poco difícil al principio pero conforme seguí leyendo me fue gustando más este fic y ver que le dan poco crédito me da rabia no puedo cambiar eso pero espero que entre los 100 comentarios de odio tengas uno que te demuestre que Vaz por buen camimo
Every part of this story is forced plot points. It's basically a Gary Stu except that there are constant poorly written in flaws/mistakes that the main character has to work his way around the problem with that is that because they are poorly written, Is that most of the time these mistakes are easily avoidable but like I said, purposely, not avoided, making you really question the characters intelligence. Not to mention the main character is incredibly chaotic in personality Is literally like if you were to mix a child and an adult And throw them into a arrogant teenager it's just pure annoyance anyway I gave writing ability three stars because while this was pretty bad, I do think the author has talent I gave update stability. Three stars because I haven't been around this story long enough to have a clear understanding of how often or well they update Story development I gave one star because well the story started off, fairly strong-ish But went downhill pretty quickly I gave character design three stars because the characters were pretty bad, but bar the atrocity that is the main character. You can kind of sometimes see faint, resemblances of what they were supposed to be. World background I gave four stars simply because the author seems to have done a lot of research, so even though there was a lot of BS all throughout the story, there were some things that made sense
Just powered through pretty much the whole story and really enjoying it. Look forward to its continuation!
I liked the story and i hope u keep uploading Thank u for this good novel i like tis jon snow more than the show 1000 time but u could make him more peaceful than angry
🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
No les hagas caso a aquellos que critican, como si fueran escritores consumados. Sigue escribiendo y perfeccionando tu escritura, en mi opinión es muy buen trabajo pero solo soy un fan. Suerte
Revelar Spoiler oh yeah, novel emas lainnya. .yah walaupun beberapa ceritanya kurang seru, tapi saya menikmatinya xD
well it has its interesting parts, but everything happens very fast and there doesn't seem to be any character development, the mc is like that and that's it, they don't show how he prepared himself or what he did, they say he spent some time preparing himself as a teacher but it is mentioned in passing and in another moment he appears with a network of spies and it is also mentioned in passing.
Revelar Spoiler a forced story at many points. It even makes you want to read it at the beginning but as you progress the need to swallow the script is very forced... nonsense things, facilities, absurdities and "magic powers" are the last trick to bury the plot.
Written at chapter 8. So far, it's a good story with some clichés but it's still good. Can I definitely see myself reading more of this. The magic aspect I'm enjoying is that I would ike to see more on the ritual side of things. The only concern I have right now is if it's a harem story cause that could ruin it. WQ 4 SD 4 CD 3 US 5 WB 3
it is pretty good, a bit fast paced for my taste. best part is MC is powerful and uses his power to do whatever he wants and he is not completely evil. finaly MC is using maGic KEEP IT UP AUTHOR
another masochist Jon snow transmigaration