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It's good so far ................................................................................................................................
good story, but character development has a good start and go totaly trash with harry become a dark edgy scum bully when he go to hogward. good fanfic but trashed by more and more bad choice the development or interaction with the other character
this is one of the best Harry Potter fan fics I've read in a while, the interactions between Harry and Loki are hilarious, also I've never seen such an interesting way of showing a soul influence another.
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exelente escritura, biena trama, junta bien ambos mundos, me encanta como se va moldeando la personalidad de harry en la historia, me encanta la personalidad de loki
Romance? loki falls in love with a little girl?. I hope not bro................... ............. .......... ......... ........ ....... ...... ..... .... ... .. .
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At least first 2 chapters of this is word for word a copy of A Fallen God by Hostiel from FanFiction.
You did a good job on making this story development good which I applaud you for that. Besides I believe that this deserves some 5 stars and hope u great day
Its a good story with suprisingly good writing it has potential and im looking forward to how this story continues. .............................................................
I need you to update please, I really REALLY need you to update it's been seven months this is such a great book, it makes me want to make one of my own, the plot is great, Harry and Loki is funny the way they interact with others is hilarious and i can't wait to read more of this book
It's good so far ................................................................................................................................
good story, but character development has a good start and go totaly trash with harry become a dark edgy scum bully when he go to hogward. good fanfic but trashed by more and more bad choice the development or interaction with the other character
this is one of the best Harry Potter fan fics I've read in a while, the interactions between Harry and Loki are hilarious, also I've never seen such an interesting way of showing a soul influence another.
😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😉😉😉😉😉😉😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙😙
exelente escritura, biena trama, junta bien ambos mundos, me encanta como se va moldeando la personalidad de harry en la historia, me encanta la personalidad de loki
Romance? loki falls in love with a little girl?. I hope not bro................... ............. .......... ......... ........ ....... ...... ..... .... ... .. .
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At least first 2 chapters of this is word for word a copy of A Fallen God by Hostiel from FanFiction.
You did a good job on making this story development good which I applaud you for that. Besides I believe that this deserves some 5 stars and hope u great day
Its a good story with suprisingly good writing it has potential and im looking forward to how this story continues. .............................................................
I need you to update please, I really REALLY need you to update it's been seven months this is such a great book, it makes me want to make one of my own, the plot is great, Harry and Loki is funny the way they interact with others is hilarious and i can't wait to read more of this book