At first I saw a lot of potential in this story but I was disappointed by the quality of the writing and several things are exaggerated to a level that becomes annoying, seeming to be written or manipulated by an A.I.
+1
2. No, keep it as a single pairing with just Hatsume.
Anime & Comics · GAF_00_TW
F
So i give you all my power stone of tomorrow
Your chapters never disappoint author
Like the part where they call him a hero on the plane or when he sees the room with Igor and describes everything as if it had a great meaning but not once but several times, although other than that you have very good writing.
is it wrong to try to build a criminal Empire?
Anime & Comics · Dier69