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Foolish author I told u , u will lose readers if you don't stop your path and listen to reasons well u were too stubborn to improve so drop the novel or rewrite it
Yeah I dropped after the death of the dad and letting Emma into his mind it’s just too dumb of a decision for me to put up with adding onto the fact the story was kinda bad anyway that just broke the camels back
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Its decent. The story is good but the protagonist is horrible. He killed some drug dealers that attacked a friend to protect his identity, and then just knock Magneto and all his minions. Because sure... its not dangerous at all that Magneto knows your identity. The worst thing by far is the MC not only not killing someone that killed a precious person to him, but also giving him a job. So yes, he is as pathetic (in human standards) as the original Superman. The difference is that he is a random guy reincarnated and not a messiah una unable to hate
Se tem alguma história ou enredo é uma bosta, o mc nunca teve um objetivo além de parecer um adolescente com tesão. O mc não é herói, vilão ou anti-heroi é mesmo tendo os poderes de Superman sendo criptoniano, não teve nenhuma relevância ao enredo mesmo depois de 90 capítulos além de ser conveniente. O único antagonista que apareceu foi magneto é foi derrotado facilmente, o que torna tudo uma bosta é que morre quem o autor quer que morra sem nenhum motivo por algum mutante aleatório. É mesmo o mc sendo op é mesmo tendo alguem com poder précognitivo avisando que ele morrera protegendo sua mãe por uma flecha de criptonita, ainda vai agir como um adolescente com tesão que ignora todo os tipos de perigo que sua família poderia passar é acaba deixando seu pai morrer por um qualquer por um motivo idiota. É depois deixa ele viver por que o pai iria querer deixar alguém se reformar, uma cópia barata do Smallville. Fora que ele deixou sua amiga morrer também por um acidente carro. Um adulto inútil que reencarnou como um bebê de Crypton e não teve nenhum feito ou utilidade até os capítulos 90, e ainda age como uma adolescente dramático por ter negligênciado a segurança de sua amiga e seu pai. Nenhuma luta com super vilão ou organização como Hidra. Uma bosta sem enredo. Não vejo o sentido dessa história, além de parecer aqueles enredos hentais baratos. so quero saber quem sera o proximo a morrer.
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Kinda mood off due to dc stuff in marvel and a 8th grade syndrome MC name
Didn't read it probably not going to not really a Superman fan but I gotta say the title is hilarious 10/10 brother do work
Im reall afraid of starting to read it. i mean what is the reason for mentioning his race? Does that plays a role? Yk these type of story gets racist really fast. I don’t wanna ruin my day so plz give some feedback .
По началу неплохо , но потом всё становится очень хреновым. Гг почемуто не знает о марвел . Он творит не логичную херню. Куча "вынужденых" поворотов сюжета. Внезапно 18+ появляется слишком бысторо и не риалистично развивается и занимает значительное кол-во места. Про гг местами больно читать . Он вроде все слышит ,но главное пропускает . Всем рассказывает свои способности , не парится скрывать личность и тд .
Currently at chap 62. Is this a black superman in marvel story or a black guy with kryptoninan capabilities in marvel story? It’s feeling like the former at this point and I’m not too excited about that. Good story so far regardless. MC is funny sometimes but annoyingly lacks awareness at this point in the story. Hopefully he grows out of that later on and starts using his “genius level intellect”. I’ll read to catch up, then continue until the chapters stop coming. For the culture
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The story is good but after some time we are seeing many discrepancies in MC nature and personality which are different from the narrative set by the writer. Because of that the immersion is broken and the story does not remain engaging enough.
Doesn’t matter if the author is black or not because he’s making the MC seem like an actually black person the use of the n-word doesn’t bother me nor should it bother older black people.
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i gave this book all 5 stars and a review because no heram it’s stupid and to unrealistic for wishful fools who can get a women!.
of all the girl choices in Marvel.... Why did you even pair your MC with your OC (Jean's older sister), who probably doesn't even matter in a fanfiction story. There are options like MJ, Felicia and even Jean herself. Ugh...
I ain’t actually read this just skimmed through but from what I saw it almost all filler and the only love interest I could find was a dam oc (if author changes it or story gets better I’ll make a new review)
the whole thing can be called a filler, there's basically no story going on only slice of life banter/talk even when a chance comes to make a nice action or intense moment/scene author throws more slice of life taking any potential out of the picture WQ 4 SofB 4 SD 1 CD 3 WB 2
what a masterpiece author,,,write more chapters heck get it up to till Thanos invasion and beyond it even please don't give up on this I'm counting on you please I'm begging you 🙏🏾
What a wasted opportunity could have gone with marvel the man of steal as punishment here is 4.8 stars will change to 5 if you change the name
MC has a stupidass name and I feel embarrassed on his behalf when he introduces himself. I only read upto chapter 47 because I thought Jean Grey would be the love interest. I liked how she was portrayed in this fic but the moment I found out she wasn't the love interest is when I leave because there isn't much to look forward to in this fic.
The story is good but the heavy slice of life is not my thing.. it does get u to feel more for the characters and gets in touch with their struggle but it's too much for a Superman fic
Not even gonna say nothing. It's good so just keep doing what you doing. Seriously bro it's been months, please give us more. You ended on a cliffhanger for crying out loud
Foolish author I told u , u will lose readers if you don't stop your path and listen to reasons well u were too stubborn to improve so drop the novel or rewrite it
Yeah I dropped after the death of the dad and letting Emma into his mind it’s just too dumb of a decision for me to put up with adding onto the fact the story was kinda bad anyway that just broke the camels back
Revelar Spoiler Its decent. The story is good but the protagonist is horrible. He killed some drug dealers that attacked a friend to protect his identity, and then just knock Magneto and all his minions. Because sure... its not dangerous at all that Magneto knows your identity. The worst thing by far is the MC not only not killing someone that killed a precious person to him, but also giving him a job. So yes, he is as pathetic (in human standards) as the original Superman. The difference is that he is a random guy reincarnated and not a messiah una unable to hate
Se tem alguma história ou enredo é uma bosta, o mc nunca teve um objetivo além de parecer um adolescente com tesão. O mc não é herói, vilão ou anti-heroi é mesmo tendo os poderes de Superman sendo criptoniano, não teve nenhuma relevância ao enredo mesmo depois de 90 capítulos além de ser conveniente. O único antagonista que apareceu foi magneto é foi derrotado facilmente, o que torna tudo uma bosta é que morre quem o autor quer que morra sem nenhum motivo por algum mutante aleatório. É mesmo o mc sendo op é mesmo tendo alguem com poder précognitivo avisando que ele morrera protegendo sua mãe por uma flecha de criptonita, ainda vai agir como um adolescente com tesão que ignora todo os tipos de perigo que sua família poderia passar é acaba deixando seu pai morrer por um qualquer por um motivo idiota. É depois deixa ele viver por que o pai iria querer deixar alguém se reformar, uma cópia barata do Smallville. Fora que ele deixou sua amiga morrer também por um acidente carro. Um adulto inútil que reencarnou como um bebê de Crypton e não teve nenhum feito ou utilidade até os capítulos 90, e ainda age como uma adolescente dramático por ter negligênciado a segurança de sua amiga e seu pai. Nenhuma luta com super vilão ou organização como Hidra. Uma bosta sem enredo. Não vejo o sentido dessa história, além de parecer aqueles enredos hentais baratos. so quero saber quem sera o proximo a morrer.
Revelar Spoiler Kinda mood off due to dc stuff in marvel and a 8th grade syndrome MC name
Didn't read it probably not going to not really a Superman fan but I gotta say the title is hilarious 10/10 brother do work
Im reall afraid of starting to read it. i mean what is the reason for mentioning his race? Does that plays a role? Yk these type of story gets racist really fast. I don’t wanna ruin my day so plz give some feedback .
По началу неплохо , но потом всё становится очень хреновым. Гг почемуто не знает о марвел . Он творит не логичную херню. Куча "вынужденых" поворотов сюжета. Внезапно 18+ появляется слишком бысторо и не риалистично развивается и занимает значительное кол-во места. Про гг местами больно читать . Он вроде все слышит ,но главное пропускает . Всем рассказывает свои способности , не парится скрывать личность и тд .
Currently at chap 62. Is this a black superman in marvel story or a black guy with kryptoninan capabilities in marvel story? It’s feeling like the former at this point and I’m not too excited about that. Good story so far regardless. MC is funny sometimes but annoyingly lacks awareness at this point in the story. Hopefully he grows out of that later on and starts using his “genius level intellect”. I’ll read to catch up, then continue until the chapters stop coming. For the culture
Revelar Spoiler The story is good but after some time we are seeing many discrepancies in MC nature and personality which are different from the narrative set by the writer. Because of that the immersion is broken and the story does not remain engaging enough.
Doesn’t matter if the author is black or not because he’s making the MC seem like an actually black person the use of the n-word doesn’t bother me nor should it bother older black people.
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i gave this book all 5 stars and a review because no heram it’s stupid and to unrealistic for wishful fools who can get a women!.
of all the girl choices in Marvel.... Why did you even pair your MC with your OC (Jean's older sister), who probably doesn't even matter in a fanfiction story. There are options like MJ, Felicia and even Jean herself. Ugh...
I ain’t actually read this just skimmed through but from what I saw it almost all filler and the only love interest I could find was a dam oc (if author changes it or story gets better I’ll make a new review)
the whole thing can be called a filler, there's basically no story going on only slice of life banter/talk even when a chance comes to make a nice action or intense moment/scene author throws more slice of life taking any potential out of the picture WQ 4 SofB 4 SD 1 CD 3 WB 2
what a masterpiece author,,,write more chapters heck get it up to till Thanos invasion and beyond it even please don't give up on this I'm counting on you please I'm begging you 🙏🏾
What a wasted opportunity could have gone with marvel the man of steal as punishment here is 4.8 stars will change to 5 if you change the name
MC has a stupidass name and I feel embarrassed on his behalf when he introduces himself. I only read upto chapter 47 because I thought Jean Grey would be the love interest. I liked how she was portrayed in this fic but the moment I found out she wasn't the love interest is when I leave because there isn't much to look forward to in this fic.
The story is good but the heavy slice of life is not my thing.. it does get u to feel more for the characters and gets in touch with their struggle but it's too much for a Superman fic
Not even gonna say nothing. It's good so just keep doing what you doing. Seriously bro it's been months, please give us more. You ended on a cliffhanger for crying out loud