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C'est un soldat de la mort sans émotion. Il obtint un système. Il obtient les souvenirs de sa vie avec sa mère donc il y quelques émotion qui remonte. Il revient à la base pour quitter son emploi. Malheureusement l'auteur et le mc est sans cerveau car il sauve des personnes alors qu'il s'en foutait royalement au début, puis en faite c'était une quête caché. Bref il devait s'échapper sans se faire remarquer mais il est trop bête, naïf, alors qu'il n'aurait pas dû l'être. Et un système de quête gâche vraiment un livre. Je m'arrête là c'est dommage car le livre aurait pu être cool.
It is a very interesting story with an MC with a great attitude. The only drawback is a failure to properly proofread, resulting in a vast number of typos. Also, a repetitive changing of the MCs name, like the author was confusing it with a named MC of a different story that they were writing at the same time. Still, this was one of my favorite storylines due to the dark humor that made up the MC.
Interesting story with intricate world building and and good layout. MC has it's charm and strong character. And he also seems pretty smart. So following him doesn't irritate much. There's also a good fighting and system looks to make it more so! Can't wait for stacking more chapters and gulp them in one swoop. Dear author, WHY HAVE YOU DROPPED FOR MONTH NOW?
This is going to be a great book judging by who the author is. Me diving in now. Wish me good luck!
A really great book, that actually does well in creating real life characters. Unfortunately, it's not getting much attention at all.
I really like this novel and so far the only thing that gives me anxiety is knowing who the FMC is that the MC is going to stay with, it would have been epic if the MC had accepted the oni-sama's proposal and well the only thing about What I can do is say that I recommend this novel 100%, I hope they don't abandon it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hello! Author Here. Just wanted to use this as a place to answer some of your really important questions. So Ask Away, I reply back in a blink.
So far I have liked the direction the story is taking, which does confuse me a little about the MC's personality, since in what is explained, his teacher, Onii-sama, took him in since he was little, so his personality was cold, ruthless. and decisive, the first contradictory decision to save Aurelia and I understand that it was due to the confusion of what happened to her with the message that her mother left her, but I feel that she has little stopped being as she used to be before to worry about him world and so on, rather see how it can be beneficial to achieve the objectives and that is what baffles me about his personality and as for romance I would like an implementation but when the time is right.
I like this novel a lot there’s good characters in it nice world building interesting story but I’m too broke to unlock the next chapter🥲overall its good.
Supreme IQ it's me Dream Lord Anyways am sure your novel will be as superb as always.Well it is indeed as superb as always.I love your other novel, Chaos Devouring system.it was quite interesting.let's see if this can hook me too.Sha, hope you don't burn out.writing Chaos Devouring system and this novel.😁😁
Its terrific in a good way, just hope the author keeps on being motivated. love C1
The grammar could be better but otherwise really good story, nice development of the character, looking forward to the see how he develops 👍🏾.
C'est un soldat de la mort sans émotion. Il obtint un système. Il obtient les souvenirs de sa vie avec sa mère donc il y quelques émotion qui remonte. Il revient à la base pour quitter son emploi. Malheureusement l'auteur et le mc est sans cerveau car il sauve des personnes alors qu'il s'en foutait royalement au début, puis en faite c'était une quête caché. Bref il devait s'échapper sans se faire remarquer mais il est trop bête, naïf, alors qu'il n'aurait pas dû l'être. Et un système de quête gâche vraiment un livre. Je m'arrête là c'est dommage car le livre aurait pu être cool.
It is a very interesting story with an MC with a great attitude. The only drawback is a failure to properly proofread, resulting in a vast number of typos. Also, a repetitive changing of the MCs name, like the author was confusing it with a named MC of a different story that they were writing at the same time. Still, this was one of my favorite storylines due to the dark humor that made up the MC.
Interesting story with intricate world building and and good layout. MC has it's charm and strong character. And he also seems pretty smart. So following him doesn't irritate much. There's also a good fighting and system looks to make it more so! Can't wait for stacking more chapters and gulp them in one swoop. Dear author, WHY HAVE YOU DROPPED FOR MONTH NOW?
This is going to be a great book judging by who the author is. Me diving in now. Wish me good luck!
A really great book, that actually does well in creating real life characters. Unfortunately, it's not getting much attention at all.
I really like this novel and so far the only thing that gives me anxiety is knowing who the FMC is that the MC is going to stay with, it would have been epic if the MC had accepted the oni-sama's proposal and well the only thing about What I can do is say that I recommend this novel 100%, I hope they don't abandon it.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hello! Author Here. Just wanted to use this as a place to answer some of your really important questions. So Ask Away, I reply back in a blink.
So far I have liked the direction the story is taking, which does confuse me a little about the MC's personality, since in what is explained, his teacher, Onii-sama, took him in since he was little, so his personality was cold, ruthless. and decisive, the first contradictory decision to save Aurelia and I understand that it was due to the confusion of what happened to her with the message that her mother left her, but I feel that she has little stopped being as she used to be before to worry about him world and so on, rather see how it can be beneficial to achieve the objectives and that is what baffles me about his personality and as for romance I would like an implementation but when the time is right.
I like this novel a lot there’s good characters in it nice world building interesting story but I’m too broke to unlock the next chapter🥲overall its good.
Supreme IQ it's me Dream Lord Anyways am sure your novel will be as superb as always.Well it is indeed as superb as always.I love your other novel, Chaos Devouring system.it was quite interesting.let's see if this can hook me too.Sha, hope you don't burn out.writing Chaos Devouring system and this novel.😁😁
Its terrific in a good way, just hope the author keeps on being motivated. love C1
The grammar could be better but otherwise really good story, nice development of the character, looking forward to the see how he develops 👍🏾.