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Nicely written but very boring. Average till chapter 10 and I still didn't understand what's the point of this fanfic as I didn't find it enjoyable to read nor anticipated the next chapter.
It's well written but the plot is so random, from the very beginning the plot is weird. The character's are not consistent, their personality doesn't match with the book. The time skip seems misplaced. The plot is not engaging. Even though the MC is OP, he has such shallow goals. I understand that the author was trying to do something new but it's too wild and boring. I mean it's not a typical OP MC fanfic, nor is it a well thought out story. It doesn't follow any consistent theme. So I'm dropping this.
absolute trash , china 100% .......................................................................................................................
The writing is ok but the plot is really bad for me and at the end the randomness and the lack of interest made me give up in like 10 chapters
For someone who is new to GOT series and never knowing the storyline but recognise some characters, sure does make me invested on the fic. Although the plotline seem abit rushed and messy to follow, but it got me interested on the series as a whole.
Honestly, it feels like simple wish fulfillment. Descently written, but the mc just decides random things with very little actual logic behind it. And then the story deffends it as if they were actually logical and well thought out choices. Honestly, i think that you need to like OP main characters and to be okay with him being hypocritic to truly enjoy this. ----- The MC is a super OP dragon that keeps achieving everything because his super powerful and fast, with weird random magic. But the story acts as if he is wise and smart and people will follow him because of that,even though we dont see any of that. Just him using his OPness to achieve everything. Aside form that, the mc just decides things with basically no logic, but the plot will tell you that he is right. Like he decides to suport the Targaryen since the beginning because they are the only ones that can rule, for some reason. And then the story just plays along. He does a few less than questionable things at times, but then he will act like he has some kind of moral high ground to stand on, and as always, the plot and characters play along. --- Aside from that, The orignal characters have their own personalities and can be interesting, but basically all of them worship everything the mc does. --- When it comes to the events from orignal timeline, is weird. Early on he does something that should change everything, but the events still play like cannon, even though i makes no sense. Later on he does change cannon, but we see him making weird moral judgments in which he treats some gray characters as good and forgivable, while other gray characters are unforgivable monsters because he says so. --- And later the author starts to add new tings, probably to give the mc some kind of challenge. But i dont know how good or bad that ends up being.
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A lot of things don't make sense to me and the fact that we haven't seen at least some training is strange. It seems more like you want to give him abilities as appropriate to the plot. Very poorly executed from my point of view. Also Jay's name change was poorly executed and without explanation. Not to mention the lack of development in the personality of the protagonist... At least your writing is good so all my criticism is just something that with experience you will fix.
Author what happened to your other fanfic like ASIOAF:im no longer a side Character is in hiatus or dropped ?
I have not come here because the great Dragon king Bahamut threatened me I am here only because I see that this is a great novel which deserves a 5 star review.
Support!! but Ch. is quite short it better make it longer ch. Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!!
Congratulations author-san, you've improved so much from your previous fanfics. This fics has better grammar, less mistakes. story telling is less cringe and more stable.Now, you just have to practice story telling.Like story pace is good but it still is little bit fast. But everything is so much good than most of fanfics.Thank-you for your hardwork.
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eh, not for me. its well written, but i just personally didnt like any of the plot developments. interfering with such random events, the newborn dragons so early, and just a generally really weird outlook on other characters. idk, it was just annoying to read personally cuz I wouldnt like any of the mcs actions or even thoughts
Good story there & impressive take from dragon point of view[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Question: Is there romance and harem if so I am out another is mc a good person going out to help other fixing the plot and stuff also is mc goal is something like achieving immortality.
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I have a saying, if you have a choice to be anything other than a human, then stay human, unless you can be a dragon, then always be a dragon
Было интересно, но после того, как автор решил дать человеческую форму МС, отбило желание продолжить чтиво истории, а так было неплохо, мне понравилось.
Nicely written but very boring. Average till chapter 10 and I still didn't understand what's the point of this fanfic as I didn't find it enjoyable to read nor anticipated the next chapter.
It's well written but the plot is so random, from the very beginning the plot is weird. The character's are not consistent, their personality doesn't match with the book. The time skip seems misplaced. The plot is not engaging. Even though the MC is OP, he has such shallow goals. I understand that the author was trying to do something new but it's too wild and boring. I mean it's not a typical OP MC fanfic, nor is it a well thought out story. It doesn't follow any consistent theme. So I'm dropping this.
absolute trash , china 100% .......................................................................................................................
The writing is ok but the plot is really bad for me and at the end the randomness and the lack of interest made me give up in like 10 chapters
For someone who is new to GOT series and never knowing the storyline but recognise some characters, sure does make me invested on the fic. Although the plotline seem abit rushed and messy to follow, but it got me interested on the series as a whole.
Honestly, it feels like simple wish fulfillment. Descently written, but the mc just decides random things with very little actual logic behind it. And then the story deffends it as if they were actually logical and well thought out choices. Honestly, i think that you need to like OP main characters and to be okay with him being hypocritic to truly enjoy this. ----- The MC is a super OP dragon that keeps achieving everything because his super powerful and fast, with weird random magic. But the story acts as if he is wise and smart and people will follow him because of that,even though we dont see any of that. Just him using his OPness to achieve everything. Aside form that, the mc just decides things with basically no logic, but the plot will tell you that he is right. Like he decides to suport the Targaryen since the beginning because they are the only ones that can rule, for some reason. And then the story just plays along. He does a few less than questionable things at times, but then he will act like he has some kind of moral high ground to stand on, and as always, the plot and characters play along. --- Aside from that, The orignal characters have their own personalities and can be interesting, but basically all of them worship everything the mc does. --- When it comes to the events from orignal timeline, is weird. Early on he does something that should change everything, but the events still play like cannon, even though i makes no sense. Later on he does change cannon, but we see him making weird moral judgments in which he treats some gray characters as good and forgivable, while other gray characters are unforgivable monsters because he says so. --- And later the author starts to add new tings, probably to give the mc some kind of challenge. But i dont know how good or bad that ends up being.
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Escravo MC 🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
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A lot of things don't make sense to me and the fact that we haven't seen at least some training is strange. It seems more like you want to give him abilities as appropriate to the plot. Very poorly executed from my point of view. Also Jay's name change was poorly executed and without explanation. Not to mention the lack of development in the personality of the protagonist... At least your writing is good so all my criticism is just something that with experience you will fix.
Author what happened to your other fanfic like ASIOAF:im no longer a side Character is in hiatus or dropped ?
I have not come here because the great Dragon king Bahamut threatened me I am here only because I see that this is a great novel which deserves a 5 star review.
Support!! but Ch. is quite short it better make it longer ch. Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!! Support!!
Congratulations author-san, you've improved so much from your previous fanfics. This fics has better grammar, less mistakes. story telling is less cringe and more stable.Now, you just have to practice story telling.Like story pace is good but it still is little bit fast. But everything is so much good than most of fanfics.Thank-you for your hardwork.
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eh, not for me. its well written, but i just personally didnt like any of the plot developments. interfering with such random events, the newborn dragons so early, and just a generally really weird outlook on other characters. idk, it was just annoying to read personally cuz I wouldnt like any of the mcs actions or even thoughts
Good story there & impressive take from dragon point of view[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Question: Is there romance and harem if so I am out another is mc a good person going out to help other fixing the plot and stuff also is mc goal is something like achieving immortality.
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I have a saying, if you have a choice to be anything other than a human, then stay human, unless you can be a dragon, then always be a dragon
Было интересно, но после того, как автор решил дать человеческую форму МС, отбило желание продолжить чтиво истории, а так было неплохо, мне понравилось.