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- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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As I haven't reviewed this masterpiece yet, I will now. Jokes aside, I do think that the story has been really good till now and is getting even better over time as my bro gains more experience. The writing quality (spelling, grammar) may not be impeccable, but it's definitely more than readable. The world background is obviously amazing as it's Honkai, and the character design and story development have been very nice. As for update stability, It's not the best, though there are definitely many that are worse, but I know that he has his reasons, and it's not like it's abysmally terrible. Still very much acceptable imo. I'll go back to reading now.
It's a 'nice idea but could have done better' fic where the author should have written it more detailedly. Well, I don't really have much opinions regarding it other than the fact it was clearly written by a teenager who just started writing. Who knows, I might change this rating in the future.
As the author myself , I would shamelessly give my own fanfic a five star but you all, as readers must give this poor guy honest reaction about this novel ( Although I would love if you all added a few honey smoothed words!) Adios and see you in the story !
As I haven't reviewed this masterpiece yet, I will now. Jokes aside, I do think that the story has been really good till now and is getting even better over time as my bro gains more experience. The writing quality (spelling, grammar) may not be impeccable, but it's definitely more than readable. The world background is obviously amazing as it's Honkai, and the character design and story development have been very nice. As for update stability, It's not the best, though there are definitely many that are worse, but I know that he has his reasons, and it's not like it's abysmally terrible. Still very much acceptable imo. I'll go back to reading now.
It's a 'nice idea but could have done better' fic where the author should have written it more detailedly. Well, I don't really have much opinions regarding it other than the fact it was clearly written by a teenager who just started writing. Who knows, I might change this rating in the future.
As the author myself , I would shamelessly give my own fanfic a five star but you all, as readers must give this poor guy honest reaction about this novel ( Although I would love if you all added a few honey smoothed words!) Adios and see you in the story !
good show. .. . .. .... .. .. .. ..