Even moreso if they're wish-fulfillment self-inserts in all but name. They butchered Naruto and Harry Potter's character and personality so hard, while citing 'character development,' that you wouldn't really know who the fvck they are if their names aren't mentioned. They should really come clean and tell us that they self-inserted themselves into those characters, it's more logical and acceptable than just giving "behind the scenes character development" as an excuse. Another thing that I hated in these two fandoms is the reduction of Danzo and Dumbledore's character and personality into one-dimensionality. Instead of exploring their character and personality, they made them into Disney villains. Rarely they ask about the W&H questions unless they're hot girls.
*Also, I'm getting pretty tired of Harry Potter Fanfic's. So I'm probably going to stop reading and recommending them*
Anime & Comics · Monsterb620
make it grandiose
Sirius was dead, and Harry knew it was his fault. Not only did Harry's monumental mistake kill his godfather, but his friends nearly all lost their lives as well. Everything good in his life was nearly completely destroyed thanks to him. Thus he stood on the edge, looking down at an end to his suffering. A single thought slowly gaining traction: Just one step, and it will all be over.
Anime & Comics · Monsterb620
It would definitely be sh*tty if he call Harry," brother" out of nowhere. I've encountered enough shit like that. I really dislike it when an author forced a relationship, it would have been okay if they let it develop much subtly and longer.
Damn. Even when he's not here, he's still haunting me. I let out a sigh, considering moving down to the common room to sleep in one of the chairs instead, but simply pulled aside the drapes to wash my face off in the bathroom. The second my bare foot hit the floor though, I stiffened, then relaxed. Harry was sitting on the floor near the window with Hedwig, who cooed softly at his touch. I approached with Dubh crawling up my pajamas to my shoulder and eyed him.
Anime & Comics · Monsterb620
If this is another evil and incompetent Dumbledore, I swear...
I snorted, turning with the other first years as though someone behind me had done it in order to not face the wrath that was McGonagall. I forgot he's such an odd one. It was all his fault Harry had to deal with his aunt and uncle though, not to mention having to die in order to kill Voldemort… Hold on. Didn't he cause Harry quite a bit of emotional trauma? I remember liking his silliness, but I'm pretty sure he's responsible for a lot of the shit that happens.
Anime & Comics · Monsterb620
wow dude, it doesn't have any self-awareness at all
[Look who's talking. Your talent levels are so low, they'd need a map to find rock bottom. But don't worry, I'm sure your knack for spectacularly average will take you places—like the couch!]
Fantasy · Regressedgod
If the status, specifically the one behind it, is the culprit, then it's just roasting itself since it's the responsible of the low stats in the first place.
Noah, your stats are so low they're practically subterranean. No class, no skills—just an endless sea of one-star ratings. Even your potential in ice and lightning magic couldn't chill a warm soda. The God of Elements must have picked you for comedic relief. The Constellation of Swords sees something in you, but it's probably just a typo. You're slightly above average—congratulations! At least you can say you're the best at being mediocre. Why not save us all the trouble and take up knitting?]
Fantasy · Regressedgod
I guess he wants pure efforts. Sword god: Go hit the gym, boy
[■ The god of sword sees potential in you. Maybe your not hopeless after all.]
Fantasy · Regressedgod
*if he refuses while giving silly excuses, smack his head for me, would you
"And if he refuses giving silly excuses smack his head for me..."
Fantasy · Regressedgod
kill that gojo wannabe
An image of the game's main character played in his mind. White hair, blue eyes and a lean build.
Fantasy · Regressedgod
An actual review! Finally!!!
I Only Want to Enjoy Life But My Little Sister Want Me to be King
Book&Literature · Fangrove