Saiyan in Warhammer

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Random_Entity

Just because of your cover, I’m gonna give you a complete five star “review”

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The_Mutated_Nut

they forgot about the Admech and the power of imperiums ships and technology the inquisitor can flick his wrist and press a button and destroy the world or condem it in a single vox transmission. also i don't like arrogant mc. also he said that if the other saiyens kill humans and cause problems he will go rogue, and his team mates go and kill humans. and he doesn't go rogue like he said and he basically forgot. Basically Plot holes LOTS

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WebiWabo

Warhammer? That's starting big. I just hope you don't abandon this story, as the Warhammer universe is fascinating.[img=recomendar][img=recomendar]

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Edwin_3200

Good start, keep it up 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊 😀😀😀😀😊😊😊

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Judy_Morgan_5854

Really like it, great idea and love how you started off the chapters. Keep up the fantastic work.

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Paulcait

I would like to start by saying that i particularly enjoyed this story. It had it's weak point especially when the war arc happened there was heavy use of chatgpt. but since that 7 chapter part we have returned to a pretty great story with fairly good smut in-between.

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krane99

good start.you should look into the genetor (bio admech) and the rogue trader, the mc could get himself a warrant of trade by selling some bio tech to the genetor, becoming a rogue trader would give him a certain level of independence without having to fear the imperium.

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stinkclaw

starts a little slow but picks up in my interest story progression wise well enough. I can't wait to see how interacting with the imperium goes. oh and good luck to the eldar trying to be prideful in front of planet killers.

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Alias_scaleheart

great idea so far, keep it up. This story has alot of potential in it and I'd love to see it flourish.

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Clay_Champion

I came here for the cover. Read upto 30 chapters. And stayed for the Warhammer.

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Zurgthegreat0137

I am enjoying it very much, thank you author

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Hunter_Valcarce

pretty good hope more comes out earlier.

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dick

i think Saiyan will download stuff into babies or something like that master roshi power level when he blew up the moon 139 they can destroy the planet when they are in ozaru

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Danilo_Gentil

Good novel [img=update][img=recommend] my only problem is that the author changed midway the focus of the novel. But is good nonetheless. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Amou_Kirukiru

Nice Very Good something good to read!! Hope you don't drop this, like the other good out there.

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Zarek8_31_07

A fantastic novel that is both loyal and holds respect for the source materials for both series borrowed from. The characters are realistic and relatable, and the readers get an actual sense of how truly dangerous the warp is. Even the grammar that needs work definitely sits at a four-star level.

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EchoingDusk

Burn the Heretic! Kill the Mutant! Purge the Unclean!