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Escreva uma avaliaçãoa good story, even if i found the rise of his clan a bit odd. Good potential and i hope you dont drop
the first 27 chp is good very good in my opinion but chp 28-30 ruined it, I just don't like what the mc is doing. for new readers if you like to try the novel maybe read chp 30 first maybe you're fine with the mc but I'm not [img=recommend][img=recommend]
it's... okay I'd say , the big problem with this story it's how the author writes , it gives the characters no depth and just the way his whole family died i could see it miles away . overall it's something to read if there's nothing left to read .
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one of the best naruto fanfiction. need more chapter. I don't mind paying for patreon for extra chapters.
At the starting chapters the grammar was a bit bad not to the level of mtl, they were minor things. now it's good. the plot is good he isn't at the OP level but he is strong but not super super strong 💪. till now no romance but the story is absolutely awesome .keep it up and good luck 👍
One Pleasant surprise great read ✨ ✨ ✨⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Awesome storyline,great power up not that crazy wish stuff,the character actually works hard even though it is not shown. Thanks to the Author for a great work and keep going👍👍🔥🔥💯💯
perfect novel ..............................................................................................................................
a good story, even if i found the rise of his clan a bit odd. Good potential and i hope you dont drop
the first 27 chp is good very good in my opinion but chp 28-30 ruined it, I just don't like what the mc is doing. for new readers if you like to try the novel maybe read chp 30 first maybe you're fine with the mc but I'm not [img=recommend][img=recommend]
it's... okay I'd say , the big problem with this story it's how the author writes , it gives the characters no depth and just the way his whole family died i could see it miles away . overall it's something to read if there's nothing left to read .
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one of the best naruto fanfiction. need more chapter. I don't mind paying for patreon for extra chapters.
At the starting chapters the grammar was a bit bad not to the level of mtl, they were minor things. now it's good. the plot is good he isn't at the OP level but he is strong but not super super strong 💪. till now no romance but the story is absolutely awesome .keep it up and good luck 👍
One Pleasant surprise great read ✨ ✨ ✨⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌟🌟⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Awesome storyline,great power up not that crazy wish stuff,the character actually works hard even though it is not shown. Thanks to the Author for a great work and keep going👍👍🔥🔥💯💯
perfect novel ..............................................................................................................................