MC understimate the potential of science too much in the firsts chapters , that make him sound a bit stupid. But except the beginning, the story seem great and the traduction is very good. (review about the 10 first chapter
harem in a World medieval is reasonable. But in a modern world, that make no sense, except for some redneck, or poor country without human right. and more there is women in the harem and less they are developped and usefull for the story. A collection of Pokémon.
A good story, not perfect. but worth it. my review is about the twenty first chapter.
One of a young boy named Peter, which matched his current surroundings as well as his body, and another of a 36-year-old balding man named George.
I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
Movies · AlienWarlord
my suggestion, more chapter. thank for the chapter
for now this is good, thanks for the chapter
for a bully, look the height of a potential victime should be important. Too tall and is too dangerous , i think.
"Hey Jameson, your ass got taller or something? Also, you look like shit right now man and you- Wait- Is that blood?! Shit man! Want me to get the nurse?" He says craning up to look at my face with a degree of worry that I did not expect.
Great Power and Great Responsibility
Movies · TheBlackSkull
no synopsis, no tag, nothing but the title ? Please if a real synopsis is make or a reader make a good resume make a comment. Thank
did this story is dropped ?
[HP x SL] The Desired Heir
Book&Literature · Oshborne