Shards of the Broken Heart

LV 15

B0mbaCl0ck

Although the story starts on a tragic and hard to digest note, the true story starts on a very good note. MC is surrounded by a loving mother and sister, in a mansion full of beautiful women just ripe for the taking. The pace of the story is good, not too slow and not too rushed, new characters are constantly introduced, with new developments occurring every few chapters.The story is in the buildup stage, and it takes time for it to build, but it's worth the patience. Although there are points of improvement since it's the first work, it's a pleasant journey of healing surrounded by loving family and wives.

LV 15

Daoist_Culture

One of the most amazing stories you can find on wn. It hits you with great story, harem and lemons. Cool mc and lovable girls make this journey even more fun, deep plot helps a lot too...ofc hehe. Book has over 120 chaps and I hope you will give it a go. Very good read!

LV 15

Robert_C_7044

It starts out pretty good kind of cringe at the beginning, but has the opportunity to be awesome but then the author takes mushroom soup gets kicking head donkey. Something takes a character who has unbelievable traumatic experiences where his little sister is right by men, and then the authoritative to a knee and naïve retard, listening to his naïve, retard Sister. They know that antagonist has the intention to racing the girls, and he just walks away, singing à la la like a freaking retard. This is trash, don’t read it if you like logical anything

LV 15

Miles_Williams_4733

So far I’m loving this story - finally an mc that isn’t a beta or a simp- he’s possessive in a good way and is not afraid to kill those who stand in his way - he’s still young thus he still has some growing up to do but he’s making progress - I hope he and his mom start developing their relationship more which seems to be happening. Only criticism I have - which is minor- is that when meeting the new ladies there isn’t any description on how they look like - for a while I didn’t know how anyone looked like, but this seems to be changing in the later chapter - oh and there seems to be too few chapters making it hard to wait for the new chapters to come. Author keep up the good work - can’t wait to see what new powers he gets and to learn more about his passed lives

LV 13

Purple_Midnight

Story starts off a little dark so if you aren't quite the type to enjoy that type of stuff I recommend you brace yourself before reading. The grammar is good, but my one major criticism to the author is to space out the paragraphs. No one likes to read giant lumps of text over and over again.

LV 1

TruthSniffer

Came looking out for copper, but I found gold. I checked out the story as I liked the cover (author has changed it to a new one), but I stayed due to the story. Though the author should work on a catchy title for the novel, I liked the story so far. Especially the little interactions between the MC and his family.

LV 3

Death_012

Not Orphan, even has an annoying older sister, basically a resource leecher. Not my cup of tea.

LV 3

diabolic_diablo

Quite well written although there is a ton of relationship drama, nothing unfixable and it's not extended needlessly so that's good. No ntr and harem is small but we'll done.

LV 5

BloodyKing

I finally found a good novel, I was tired of unreadable novels written by bots, thank you.

LV 2

Lord_Raven

A relatively decent novel. The second chapter was extremely forced, and I felt nothing from it, but the general trend of the novel is at a decent level.Give it a try if you have time; although the English isn't the best, and the writing has many flaws, the story is nice and enjoyable to read.

LV 1

NewHustle

A great read. Finished the free chapters and enjoyed it very much. Though there were a few places where the writing was a little overboard, I liked the story so far. The writing has improved considerably from the first few chapters, keeping me hooked. Go, author! You rock!

LV 13

Silver_smile

Haven't read the book but the cover is super good 👍

LV 13

Dummybeing

Good novel author! The novel starts off good despite the first two heavy chapters and as I read more, I found it interesting. He has a lovely family to 'take care' him.

LV 12

TheLastRemnants

Although the author’s wording is a little off—which I’m guessing because it’s their first novel and not native English speaking— the novel is very well written. The pacing is gripping and the way they tell the story actually had me invested as though I was dealing with it myself. It’s very emotional, there’s a perfect balance of thought process and descriptions. I absolutely adore just how much effort and imagination that put into this. I don’t think people should complain about the R that happens in the first chapter. The world is a dark place sometimes, and I feel it takes a lot of courage to explore this, for the MC to become the person they need to be to prevent other things from happening like this in the further. Great work! Keep it up.

LV 3

ERFAN

This novel is a good read, but if I want to tell about its problems, MC gives a lot to women, while they are nothing but resource leeches, and the most dangerous thing is that he tells them his secrets. I feel threatened whenever I see a man tell his secrets to his women. After that, MC has no purpose and is easily manipulated by his women

LV 10

Grispera

Hello there. Well it finally time to become shameless and review my own work giving it the highest rating to kickstart my rise to reach the top. The snu-snu grind would be slow. And there may be an introduction to everyone's favorite face slapping system in the later chapters. A little bit about MC: Cautious, Level-headed, Detached to others, Family-oriented, Loyal, Ruthless to enemies, Hard working, and Has Dark Backstory .... (character development under progress) What to expect: Harem, Romance, Slow love progression, Lack of plot-holes, Enemy mutilation or FATALITY!!! (somewhat gory), and .... (less expectations are better) Hope you all enjoy my work