You write with your eyes on the word count i swear… dragging out every single paragraph with unnecessary words… While your novel is decent, when will you improve on that annoying writing style of yours that goes around in circles and repeats every single description every single paragraph? Can you make it a little bit easier on us readers who have to skim through multiple chapters just to get to the point in a conversation? We’re all paying money here bruh…
Yep. Btw, try to reread your chaps after writing. I saw many typos here and there, which show the rush in writing. There are many free tools to check spelling, and that’s all you need. Free grammarly can also help you if you miss some words here and there. Just some suggestions cause you write well, and your style is authentic, but you type with your toes xD
Hmm, Mc is a bit too skeptical and untrusting. I get why, but he tends to be annoying with how much he overthinks things. And the display of fake pride isn’t that funny tbh… He is a man after all, not a pu55y to avoid contact with women cause he’s some king. In fact, kings shouldn’t protect their v1rginity like it’s their highest treasure, but go for beauties.
5 for encouragement. I hope there won’t be any AI or dragged out smut, and hopefully it will be like the previous one heheh
I’ll give 5 for encouragement. Here’s to hoping this Mc will be more than a gigolo and that he’ll have actually good magic and abilities to fight, and that this world doesn’t normalize Yuri, especially considering their way of reproduction.
He hasn’t said anything
"We are not Gods, neither are we Immortals, nor are we Devils. Mortal is what we are, and through the path of Mortals shall we prosper."
Primordial Harem System
Eastern · Primordial_Seven
Attempt to command attention? Fk man… did got go haywire?
His sharp eyes observed the mingling disciples, their gazes often flickering towards him with curiosity or expectation. His presence, even without any deliberate attempt to command attention, naturally drew all eyes.
Primordial Harem System
Eastern · Primordial_Seven
Acting as if they know eachother when he never saw her before… No introductions either
Este número foi suprimido.
Primordial Harem System
Eastern · Primordial_Seven
His presence commanding… bruh, this sentence is filler with no point other than to annoy people with its stupidity
Shen Yuan performed each task with grace, his presence alone commanding everyone's respect.
Primordial Harem System
Eastern · Primordial_Seven
Long dropped it bruh… It was just too dumb of a novel.. and at the point i stopped, they were about to spend 100 chaps just to reach the capital, showing several chaps of every fight against random mobs on the street as if that was fun or something.. Don’t waste your time, author lacks creativity and intelligence.
My Celestial Ascension
Fantasy · LittleBastard879