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it was great at the starteverything was good but the sudden end to the story without even ending the summary to explain things at a fast pace was a big turn off
I gave up after chapter 14. It's nothing special or unique. When reading there was some good parts but then there was more predictable moments. The romance is no existent and everything feels kind of idiotic or forced or both in terms of plot whether it be romance, situations, the MC, etcetera. Overall bland and predictable read if your bored
Good job Author... Much better than many cultivation novels. MC not much arogant , calm. *Slowly uncovering his mysterious background character .{*I hope harem will be goddess level interesting women. Not those who will lag him behind. They need deep background .} This novel has potential like (My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires).##Author please don't drop this legendary grade novel. Even if upload is slow, Please never drop this...FULL SUPPORT 💪
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Unfortunately, this is a so-called villainous novel. Basically, this means that logic and common sense are not taken into account when writing a plot. The author can attribute all questions and claims to "the luck of the main character", "the halo of the villain" and luck.
It's an interesting premise, but you fall in the trap of nearly every harem fic: Lack of character or even romantic development. Every woman just falls in love with MC at a glance and it is honestly frustrating as a reader. They have no agency beyond MC and are thus 1-dimensional character. From the look of it, the Immortal Prison Goddess is going to be a walk in the park as well, plus MC grows too strong too fast. Getting too many cool things at once gets old real quick. Honest advice would be to pace it out more. I don't even remember half the things he got beyond the Zither and Sword talents, because it just blends together.
Is delicious, good chapter rico y con buen toque la próxima vez no me saltaré capítulos de lemon, este estuvo diez de diez aunque me preguntó como sera el tiempo aqui es decir lo de mil años cultivando etc
I would really appreciate if you add character pics.... been waiting for a lot..
beware 😃 author is master baiter cliffhanger master', don't get hooked up like me [img=gift][img=update][img=update]
I really like this story so far, and i hope you will continue it. I can honestly say it's my fav novel of yours so far, much more enjoyable than the paid ones. The writing style is also much better and doesn't feel 'overdone', with the MC growing well in power. A bit exagerated with the geniuses if the upper realms, considering MC's advantages, but anyway, still enjoyable.
hello dear author,I like this novel very much and I hope you can atleast write 500chapters.Though can you clearly describe the world background clearly I got confused a bit I mean what comes after void realm you directly mentioned world king realm.I hope you are understanding what I am saying I am not criticizing your work It's just can you describe some things clearly .Thank you for writing this author-san.[img=update]
the reason that the writing quality is only 4 stars is because the quality of the writing gets rough sometimes. updating stability the book updates daily so 5 stars. story development is better then I thought it would be 5 stars. Character design is also better then I thought it would be 5 stars. world background is better then I thought it would be 5 star. When I first started reading this I thought it would be just terrible but it was really nice the mc isn't so bad.
I'll be giving this a 5star because of the Yandere master oh also is this a fanfic or an original novel. if it's a fanfic what is the original?
I usually hate reading Chinese novels but this one was actually one of the most enjoyable ones to read. The English is not scuffed asf so I can read the fic without getting an aneurysm. The yandere aspect is the thing that attracted me to this fic in the first place and made me read till the latest chapter. Wuxia tropes are cringy most of the time but this one manages to make me not kms every paragraph I read. 4.6/5
Maravilloso espero con ansias el próximo capítulo y me gustaría que halla más variación de poderes no se más tipo de poderes pero por lo demás las yanderes están bien construidas y el prota uff
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Honestly good concept, I like reading the counterattack of "villain/young masters" type of novels. But the one thing is that I was attracted to this novel because of the synopsis. Legit I saw the mc had an affection system and then was suddenly hooked, instantly started reading. Now the question is, what's this novel about now? The master? Like yeah I get the title, but the synopsis and summary indicate another thing. Thought this was gonna be a system novel but was jabaited, update or change your synopsis.
So much potential… wasted because author is too wishy washy to decide from the start what they want to do. Seriously, if it’s a system novel, keep it that way. If you wanted to get rid of the system, say so from the start. And worst of all, stop listening to readers requests for everything. Take the suggestions, if you like them and find a way to incorporate them into the story without dismantling everything you wrote, then do it, otherwise ignore it
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Honestly, the rhythm of the story is completely random and most of the plot is forced so the Novel's MC can act cool. I Read up to the latest chapter (25) and it's very confusing, one moment our MC is "free" then the next he is somehow burdened by another thing. At one point he can cuddle all night with a woman and act fine but if it's one kiss then he immediately realizes how bad it is. The entire story is just one big mix of Wish Fulfillment, DRAMA, "Cool" MC. The story itself is fine if you just want to turn off your brain and read for the sake of it but it will either take a Massive Rewrite or a new way of Writing if this story is to reach 70 Chapters without the Plot Holes imploding the story...
it was great at the starteverything was good but the sudden end to the story without even ending the summary to explain things at a fast pace was a big turn off
I gave up after chapter 14. It's nothing special or unique. When reading there was some good parts but then there was more predictable moments. The romance is no existent and everything feels kind of idiotic or forced or both in terms of plot whether it be romance, situations, the MC, etcetera. Overall bland and predictable read if your bored
Good job Author... Much better than many cultivation novels. MC not much arogant , calm. *Slowly uncovering his mysterious background character .{*I hope harem will be goddess level interesting women. Not those who will lag him behind. They need deep background .} This novel has potential like (My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires).##Author please don't drop this legendary grade novel. Even if upload is slow, Please never drop this...FULL SUPPORT 💪
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Unfortunately, this is a so-called villainous novel. Basically, this means that logic and common sense are not taken into account when writing a plot. The author can attribute all questions and claims to "the luck of the main character", "the halo of the villain" and luck.
It's an interesting premise, but you fall in the trap of nearly every harem fic: Lack of character or even romantic development. Every woman just falls in love with MC at a glance and it is honestly frustrating as a reader. They have no agency beyond MC and are thus 1-dimensional character. From the look of it, the Immortal Prison Goddess is going to be a walk in the park as well, plus MC grows too strong too fast. Getting too many cool things at once gets old real quick. Honest advice would be to pace it out more. I don't even remember half the things he got beyond the Zither and Sword talents, because it just blends together.
Is delicious, good chapter rico y con buen toque la próxima vez no me saltaré capítulos de lemon, este estuvo diez de diez aunque me preguntó como sera el tiempo aqui es decir lo de mil años cultivando etc
I would really appreciate if you add character pics.... been waiting for a lot..
beware 😃 author is master baiter cliffhanger master', don't get hooked up like me [img=gift][img=update][img=update]
I really like this story so far, and i hope you will continue it. I can honestly say it's my fav novel of yours so far, much more enjoyable than the paid ones. The writing style is also much better and doesn't feel 'overdone', with the MC growing well in power. A bit exagerated with the geniuses if the upper realms, considering MC's advantages, but anyway, still enjoyable.
hello dear author,I like this novel very much and I hope you can atleast write 500chapters.Though can you clearly describe the world background clearly I got confused a bit I mean what comes after void realm you directly mentioned world king realm.I hope you are understanding what I am saying I am not criticizing your work It's just can you describe some things clearly .Thank you for writing this author-san.[img=update]
the reason that the writing quality is only 4 stars is because the quality of the writing gets rough sometimes. updating stability the book updates daily so 5 stars. story development is better then I thought it would be 5 stars. Character design is also better then I thought it would be 5 stars. world background is better then I thought it would be 5 star. When I first started reading this I thought it would be just terrible but it was really nice the mc isn't so bad.
I'll be giving this a 5star because of the Yandere master oh also is this a fanfic or an original novel. if it's a fanfic what is the original?
I usually hate reading Chinese novels but this one was actually one of the most enjoyable ones to read. The English is not scuffed asf so I can read the fic without getting an aneurysm. The yandere aspect is the thing that attracted me to this fic in the first place and made me read till the latest chapter. Wuxia tropes are cringy most of the time but this one manages to make me not kms every paragraph I read. 4.6/5
Maravilloso espero con ansias el próximo capítulo y me gustaría que halla más variación de poderes no se más tipo de poderes pero por lo demás las yanderes están bien construidas y el prota uff
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Honestly good concept, I like reading the counterattack of "villain/young masters" type of novels. But the one thing is that I was attracted to this novel because of the synopsis. Legit I saw the mc had an affection system and then was suddenly hooked, instantly started reading. Now the question is, what's this novel about now? The master? Like yeah I get the title, but the synopsis and summary indicate another thing. Thought this was gonna be a system novel but was jabaited, update or change your synopsis.
So much potential… wasted because author is too wishy washy to decide from the start what they want to do. Seriously, if it’s a system novel, keep it that way. If you wanted to get rid of the system, say so from the start. And worst of all, stop listening to readers requests for everything. Take the suggestions, if you like them and find a way to incorporate them into the story without dismantling everything you wrote, then do it, otherwise ignore it
Revelar Spoiler Honestly, the rhythm of the story is completely random and most of the plot is forced so the Novel's MC can act cool. I Read up to the latest chapter (25) and it's very confusing, one moment our MC is "free" then the next he is somehow burdened by another thing. At one point he can cuddle all night with a woman and act fine but if it's one kiss then he immediately realizes how bad it is. The entire story is just one big mix of Wish Fulfillment, DRAMA, "Cool" MC. The story itself is fine if you just want to turn off your brain and read for the sake of it but it will either take a Massive Rewrite or a new way of Writing if this story is to reach 70 Chapters without the Plot Holes imploding the story...
I loved it. It brought me joy after reading such a good novel. Thank You.