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I want to show my appreciation for this work. One of the more unique aspects of this work is the action. It’s quite descriptive. The mc also gets hit. That makes the fight scenes so much more satisfying when he hits back. Love it and thanks for writing this.
Keep update AT I support you,,😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Honestly this is probably one of if not the favourite fic I have read recently would definitely recommend.
Excellent ff. The plot is interesting and original, the actions of the characters are exciting. At the same time, ff is not overloaded with either a stupid description or stupid illogical behavior of the characters. Compared to most disgusting works, it's divine, I recommend it) But I already feel sorry for Mark, can he have a normal weekend?) And please don't overdo it with the addition of female characters: that would be too caricatured. The Joker was right about the cake, it's better not to overeat.
Read out of boredom, stayed because it was interesting and worth continuing to read. Only wish there were more chapters for me to binge and it didn't go so quickly.
Great Story, the characters are extremely fleshed out, and their actions make sense. I hope there is more world-building on how exactly the viltrumites fit in the DC universe and their exact power scaling soon. And there is no need to force a Harem if you feel like you can't write it properly.
The story is very good, the web novel lacks more works like this,very good to pass the time, It's nice to see something that doesn't have to do with a truck running over someone and getting wishes, please don't stop making more of this story
This has been way more enjoyable than I expected. You make the introduction of viltrumites into the DC universe so believable and I love your way of writing I cant wait for more.
Great story, chapters are a good length and well written. Characters feel natural and story moves along on a perfect pace. Keep it up!😁
honestly, it's better than I expected, it has really good Grammer and good written character interactions. Mc is not stuiped, he also isn't op right from the start.
Great, but two more chapters are missing in a serious week, ideally, and I'm sure that over time this fanfic will go to top. Alalalalalalalalaalalalalaalallalallaallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalalalalalallalala
So far it's great, but the chapter frequency is a problem.!!!!!!!!!!@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
Tbh I feel a bit cringe reviewing my own work, but I gotta say I do enjoy writing this fic and it’s my second comic book one, I think I did better on this one tbh.
Muy buena historia pero nerfeaste a los viltrumitas demasiado o sea son como los saiyan cuanto más entrenan más fuertes se vuelven a demás hay muchos personajes de invecible que pueden que son más fuertes que superman osea omniman es más rápido i tan fuerte como superman i trahgg es casi seis veces más fuerte que onmiman los viltrumitas cuanto más viejos son más fuertes se vuelven i Nolan solo entreno menos de 19 años de su vida i mira lo fuerte que es i Mark entreno una 20 años en una dimension diferente i casi iguala a su padre
I like the concept and character development so far and I hope you keep up the good work
Very good fic. taking the break in updates. I'm loving it, in addition to the balance between comedy and fights, in addition to something more realistic. Note English is not my native language.
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Best DC fic right now on this app. The concept is very original and the story is shaping out to be very realistic. Can't wait for more chapters.
Lost in Sothoryos is one of my favorite books from this author, I have been reading it on AO3, but I didn't know there was an InvincibleXDc fic. I'm excited because this author's works are original in the sense of plot, harem as always, I don't mind the harem, really. I welcome it, since in his other focs the build up for his girls are always good...
Read up to the current chapter on Patreon. What I really like is that Mark, even though is different than the show, still feels like Mark. The characters also feel talk and act like they would in the comics or in the show. Now what I like about this story compared to others is the amazing blend of action and r18 scenes. Some r18 stories get tiring to read because it gets kinda boring. The action scenes help break it up the monotony and are really well done. Please don’t stop making this story.
I want to show my appreciation for this work. One of the more unique aspects of this work is the action. It’s quite descriptive. The mc also gets hit. That makes the fight scenes so much more satisfying when he hits back. Love it and thanks for writing this.
Keep update AT I support you,,😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Honestly this is probably one of if not the favourite fic I have read recently would definitely recommend.
Excellent ff. The plot is interesting and original, the actions of the characters are exciting. At the same time, ff is not overloaded with either a stupid description or stupid illogical behavior of the characters. Compared to most disgusting works, it's divine, I recommend it) But I already feel sorry for Mark, can he have a normal weekend?) And please don't overdo it with the addition of female characters: that would be too caricatured. The Joker was right about the cake, it's better not to overeat.
Read out of boredom, stayed because it was interesting and worth continuing to read. Only wish there were more chapters for me to binge and it didn't go so quickly.
Great Story, the characters are extremely fleshed out, and their actions make sense. I hope there is more world-building on how exactly the viltrumites fit in the DC universe and their exact power scaling soon. And there is no need to force a Harem if you feel like you can't write it properly.
The story is very good, the web novel lacks more works like this,very good to pass the time, It's nice to see something that doesn't have to do with a truck running over someone and getting wishes, please don't stop making more of this story
This has been way more enjoyable than I expected. You make the introduction of viltrumites into the DC universe so believable and I love your way of writing I cant wait for more.
Great story, chapters are a good length and well written. Characters feel natural and story moves along on a perfect pace. Keep it up!😁
honestly, it's better than I expected, it has really good Grammer and good written character interactions. Mc is not stuiped, he also isn't op right from the start.
Great, but two more chapters are missing in a serious week, ideally, and I'm sure that over time this fanfic will go to top. Alalalalalalalalaalalalalaalallalallaallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalalalalalallalala
So far it's great, but the chapter frequency is a problem.!!!!!!!!!!@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
Tbh I feel a bit cringe reviewing my own work, but I gotta say I do enjoy writing this fic and it’s my second comic book one, I think I did better on this one tbh.
Muy buena historia pero nerfeaste a los viltrumitas demasiado o sea son como los saiyan cuanto más entrenan más fuertes se vuelven a demás hay muchos personajes de invecible que pueden que son más fuertes que superman osea omniman es más rápido i tan fuerte como superman i trahgg es casi seis veces más fuerte que onmiman los viltrumitas cuanto más viejos son más fuertes se vuelven i Nolan solo entreno menos de 19 años de su vida i mira lo fuerte que es i Mark entreno una 20 años en una dimension diferente i casi iguala a su padre
I like the concept and character development so far and I hope you keep up the good work
Very good fic. taking the break in updates. I'm loving it, in addition to the balance between comedy and fights, in addition to something more realistic. Note English is not my native language.
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Best DC fic right now on this app. The concept is very original and the story is shaping out to be very realistic. Can't wait for more chapters.
Lost in Sothoryos is one of my favorite books from this author, I have been reading it on AO3, but I didn't know there was an InvincibleXDc fic. I'm excited because this author's works are original in the sense of plot, harem as always, I don't mind the harem, really. I welcome it, since in his other focs the build up for his girls are always good...
Read up to the current chapter on Patreon. What I really like is that Mark, even though is different than the show, still feels like Mark. The characters also feel talk and act like they would in the comics or in the show. Now what I like about this story compared to others is the amazing blend of action and r18 scenes. Some r18 stories get tiring to read because it gets kinda boring. The action scenes help break it up the monotony and are really well done. Please don’t stop making this story.