I really love this twilight fanfic. The mc is so cute, and her reactions are believable, a very well written story with excellent flow. I recommend reading before judging it.
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One more thing: You want Bell to be a girl in this story? It doesn't change anything for me, honestly, but I'd like to know what you think about it, since it might change their dynamic.
DanMachi: New Sun
Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
Chapter -1: The lion cub awakens!
DanMachi: New Sun
Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
I liked the chapter a lot, thanks
8130 words! 8527 in English! That's the length of the chapter, what did you think? I feel like I'm a bit rusty, so I'm not sure if it turned out well; give me your opinions.
Still Defiant! SI-OC [Marvel/DC]
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
it was really good, an awesome job of detailing what was happening durring the fight.
The fight was something that came up suddenly; I haven't written fights in a while, so I don't know how well it was. Was it clear or confusing? It was really challenging due to the disparity in the physical abilities of both characters; I had to delete a lot and rewrite even more. I hope it was enjoyable to read.
Still Defiant! SI-OC [Marvel/DC]
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
this version is so much better than the older defiant fanfiction, the grammar is really well written so I don't turn dumb trying to read it, like with most fanfics on this site, interesting powers as well, author makes the wishes actually work and blend into the world. please don't drop this it is a really good fanfiction
a very good story, written so well that you can actually feel the tension between the characters. at the start the mc drifter might seem like he is overshadowed my the kirito, but that really changes around chapter 30. very interesting with the livestream of the boss fights around the world. please don't drop this.
so good, the writing quality is really good, the character design and development is top notch, although similar to the fanfiction unyielding at the beginning but after the first floor it is complete original and is one of the best SAO fanfiction I have read.
Este livro foi excluído.
why did you make him a pothead?
Walking into the gym he went right to get changed, as he came out to stretch and warm-up the gummy hit him, he started laughing for no reason realizing that. No one even looked at him as he did so, it was just a fact that he was a pothead so they weren't surprised about it.
Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!
Movies · Flaming_Lines