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She is one of my favorite MCs. I love what you have done with the story. Hope you continue. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Personally, I really like this fanfic. I’m not going to give it a good review just because it’s a kumo-desu-ga/overlord/marvel fanfic, but the world and the way the followers worship Shiraori is well built. Just wish the worship stuff wasn’t just listed out in a chapter. The author should turn that into a prologue chapter or just blend it in somehow … Like some of the upper reviews, the beginning chapters are meh, but in the later chapters really improve. The author is a student so don’t expect chapters every week, but I think the author really needs to work out a schedule, thus far, he only updates like once every three-four weeks. The characters are nice and the timeskip chapters remind me of the actual kumo desu ga. I wish there were more of those since there are only two in the first 60 ish chapters (at the time I’m writing this) but then again it would kind of lose it’s glow. My rating would be, if you like fantasy fiction with some “yuri” (purposeful air quotes) notes in it as well as funny characters, a 8.57/10 read 👍🏻.
i love the book so far and now that i am caught all the way up i have a question: will the MC end up with an(y) actual lover(s)? i am trying to phrase this in a way that does not force you to say who or how many
good premise innovative never seen combining 3 unique good stories like that is rare only thing is this need polishing in grammar and also frequent update
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I think it's a good story so far, I wish the time in overlord was a little long and better explained and these I really wish the author would go and remove the A/N on every chapter saying they "don't care" or they're "lazy" because even if it's true it's not adding anything to the story by sticking it in there multiple times per chapter
Well, too many AN(author’s notes) weigh the story down, I heard the author said he’s gonna stop but I’m gonna get into why that is still relavent in this review. The story drags on, combined with the AN’s the progress is too slow yet too fast at points. We got both transmigrations within about 5 chapters but then we had to wait another 15 for her to even step out into the marvel world. This wouldn’t be bad if the mc was likable but she’s like that friend that puts things off to an unhealthy amount and waits for future them to deal with it. We get 2 POV’s for each side of the interaction which might even be just so the author could say a single joke. Then we have the misunderstandings that she could easily avoid by getting her point across, but she doesn’t. The gaurdian thing was annoying aswell since I was hoping to enjoy a novel about shiraori in marvel but she doesn’t even want to go outside. It took me a day to get passed 10 chapters sheerly because spectating my friend carrying stuff back in lethal company was more enjoyable than reading this. I’m literally forgetting parts of the novel as I’m writing this. Moving on, constant mistakes and misspellings add more variety than the 26ish chapters I sat through, the world background would be something above a 1 but we’ve been to 2 worlds and we still only know the timeframe of 1 of them that we left in 5 chapters. She has so much power yet even when knowing she’s in danger of death if 1 being decides to erase her, she’d rather lie down in nazarik than worry about it. Story development, where. Stability don’t care. Writing quality bad. Character design even worse. World background, bedroom, hall, bedroom again. Don’t read this, you will live your life out trying to get to chapter 50
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this story is so good. mc this likable even you dont know much about overlord you can still understand and have fun read this
The chapter was excellent.........................................................................................................................................................
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So far so good, has the potential to be a great crossover fan-fiction. Rare to find quality Overlord Fan-fiction and the crossover with Marvel feels natural. I just hope the author keeps writing and remains consistent.
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It's an amazing fanfic, sasuga author-sama. Its about MC with kumo background, in the Overlords Yggdrasil, and get thrown to Marvel world with Nazarick.
The story is too boring MC is OP but extra extra paranoid and too dam over conscious
This novel is very good. The very first thing the White weaver does is get herself in more trouble even though she does not want it. Very much like her. Although it hurts to see Ainz is not in this situation, yet would be very taxing on the author so it is better that he is not. I'm really liking how the story progressed and I already feel invested. The only thing is that I hope it does not take long for what you need to do and get back to updating!!! Have a wonderful day!!!
some persevered because of responsibility, some persevered because of hatred, some persevered because of excitement, and some persevered because of love… And Fang Yuan’s answer? He was still expressionless, he continued to move forward relentlessly. I had once screamed, gradually, I lost my voice. I had once cried, gradually, I lost my tears. I had once grieved, gradually, I became able to withstand everything. I had once rejoiced, gradually, I became unmoved by the world. And now! All I have left is an expressionless face, my gaze is as tough as a monolith, only perseverance remains in my heart. This is my own, an insignificant character, Fang Yuan’s — Perseverance!
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Personally, I really like this fanfic. I’m not going to give it a good review just because it’s a kumo-desu-ga/overlord/marvel fanfic, but the world and the way the followers worship Shiraori is well built. Just wish the worship stuff wasn’t just listed out in a chapter. The author should turn that into a prologue chapter or just blend it in somehow … Like some of the upper reviews, the beginning chapters are meh, but in the later chapters really improve. The author is a student so don’t expect chapters every week, but I think the author really needs to work out a schedule, thus far, he only updates like once every three-four weeks. The characters are nice and the timeskip chapters remind me of the actual kumo desu ga. I wish there were more of those since there are only two in the first 60 ish chapters (at the time I’m writing this) but then again it would kind of lose it’s glow. My rating would be, if you like fantasy fiction with some “yuri” (purposeful air quotes) notes in it as well as funny characters, a 8.57/10 read 👍🏻.
i love the book so far and now that i am caught all the way up i have a question: will the MC end up with an(y) actual lover(s)? i am trying to phrase this in a way that does not force you to say who or how many
good premise innovative never seen combining 3 unique good stories like that is rare only thing is this need polishing in grammar and also frequent update
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I think it's a good story so far, I wish the time in overlord was a little long and better explained and these I really wish the author would go and remove the A/N on every chapter saying they "don't care" or they're "lazy" because even if it's true it's not adding anything to the story by sticking it in there multiple times per chapter
Well, too many AN(author’s notes) weigh the story down, I heard the author said he’s gonna stop but I’m gonna get into why that is still relavent in this review. The story drags on, combined with the AN’s the progress is too slow yet too fast at points. We got both transmigrations within about 5 chapters but then we had to wait another 15 for her to even step out into the marvel world. This wouldn’t be bad if the mc was likable but she’s like that friend that puts things off to an unhealthy amount and waits for future them to deal with it. We get 2 POV’s for each side of the interaction which might even be just so the author could say a single joke. Then we have the misunderstandings that she could easily avoid by getting her point across, but she doesn’t. The gaurdian thing was annoying aswell since I was hoping to enjoy a novel about shiraori in marvel but she doesn’t even want to go outside. It took me a day to get passed 10 chapters sheerly because spectating my friend carrying stuff back in lethal company was more enjoyable than reading this. I’m literally forgetting parts of the novel as I’m writing this. Moving on, constant mistakes and misspellings add more variety than the 26ish chapters I sat through, the world background would be something above a 1 but we’ve been to 2 worlds and we still only know the timeframe of 1 of them that we left in 5 chapters. She has so much power yet even when knowing she’s in danger of death if 1 being decides to erase her, she’d rather lie down in nazarik than worry about it. Story development, where. Stability don’t care. Writing quality bad. Character design even worse. World background, bedroom, hall, bedroom again. Don’t read this, you will live your life out trying to get to chapter 50
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this story is so good. mc this likable even you dont know much about overlord you can still understand and have fun read this
The chapter was excellent.........................................................................................................................................................
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So far so good, has the potential to be a great crossover fan-fiction. Rare to find quality Overlord Fan-fiction and the crossover with Marvel feels natural. I just hope the author keeps writing and remains consistent.
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It's an amazing fanfic, sasuga author-sama. Its about MC with kumo background, in the Overlords Yggdrasil, and get thrown to Marvel world with Nazarick.
The story is too boring MC is OP but extra extra paranoid and too dam over conscious
This novel is very good. The very first thing the White weaver does is get herself in more trouble even though she does not want it. Very much like her. Although it hurts to see Ainz is not in this situation, yet would be very taxing on the author so it is better that he is not. I'm really liking how the story progressed and I already feel invested. The only thing is that I hope it does not take long for what you need to do and get back to updating!!! Have a wonderful day!!!
some persevered because of responsibility, some persevered because of hatred, some persevered because of excitement, and some persevered because of love… And Fang Yuan’s answer? He was still expressionless, he continued to move forward relentlessly. I had once screamed, gradually, I lost my voice. I had once cried, gradually, I lost my tears. I had once grieved, gradually, I became able to withstand everything. I had once rejoiced, gradually, I became unmoved by the world. And now! All I have left is an expressionless face, my gaze is as tough as a monolith, only perseverance remains in my heart. This is my own, an insignificant character, Fang Yuan’s — Perseverance!
Шикарная вещь! Побольше бы глав! И конечно хотелось бы больше событий... слишком большой таймскип уже к событиям мстителей... хотелось бы хотя бы с Капитана Америки начать тайм скип
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Very good.. would be better with moar summoning!!