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why gender bend? even though its not my type its still interesting to read
I just want it to be rated high Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background
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The same disease that plagues the novel in Marvel as the Hive.. I worry too much if the novel release rate will be fast enough before our inevitable death...
Amazing Story! Author! i especially like the prophecy you and your friends wrote! i hope you can continue writing this amazing novel! -The Tired Idol
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This is really great fanfic combination of shiraori overlord and marvel it's really fun to see my favourite anime characters. . . . . ....
PLEASE PIN THIS!!! 📌 Here to tell you that I read the whole fic so far and believe this 100% deserves a read, the fanfic is extremely well done and one of the better ones in my opinion. I did see a 1 star review that claimed writing was horrible and it was full of Author Notes but that isnt true at all, author has a lot of knowledge about Marvel/MCU/Nani desu ga, nani ka/Overlord, a lot of the author notes are him explaining various things and certain decisions, the writing and personality of the characters is fantasticly done. The only thing I can see driving that guy away was either the fact that he didn't like some of the very large paragraphs that can be disrupting to read for some readers (these large paragraphs reflect original shirahoi's personality and I think a few people were able to see it) or the fact that Ain didn't come.
Best over lord story idea ever. I don't understand why i need 140 characters to make a review tho. Still not enough characters. Same as last sentence.
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I’ve caught up with the story which is ch39 at time of review, and man, this is pretty good yooo. It’s great to get a kumo desu ga fic and even better how the author is able to incorporate it with Overlord lore and marvel world. Overall I think if author keeps the pace this has great potential, you might be onto something big author.
I always thought it would be more interesting of a story about Shiro being a god with D in the modern world... this satisfy a little bit of my cravings
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Amazing story keep it up love how you well you got the character and you actually used the tva for something most stories completely skip it.
Read it through to the current chapter 29, still haven't seen any Marvel type action yet that made it famous. Just some preparation for the future kinda thing so far, Overlord aspect of it is pretty good. Can see this turning into something great if we don't get sidetracked too often. Love it so far, keep up the great work!
Muy buena historia ; espero que no se detenga y podamos seguir disfrutando de la lectura de este fanfic...,........................................,..............
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Very well written. I hope the author continues writing for a long time and Shiraori conquers the multiverse. I personally feel the author is onto something here and might be able to write a top-tier fanfic.
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The living tribunal, the OAA and the Almighty will immediately notice her. especially the Almighty, as he is the creator of the multiverse. Observers may also notice (uncertainly) (I write through a translator)..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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A very good work with crossovers and it seems very interesting from the beginning even though it's a genderbend it didn't give the feel that most fics in that genre give its a very good work keep the pace going it will be one of the best fics here with simple story structure and a very detailed world background just don't drop it and it will be one of the best works out there..❤❤❤❤❤
An okay-ish fic that gets constant sabotage from it's own author. If the mediocre writing doesn't get to you maybe the author constantly breaking the flow of the story with comments about how bad he thinks X chapter is or trying to excuse how this paragraph that makes no sense reffers to Y thing that only he knows about will do it. This fic is basically a "Tell and don't show" thing. But the tell is always done by the author telling you in AN (author notes). Now it could be better...if the author wasn't one of those authors that instead of improving preffers to remain ignorant. As he said, if you don't like it don't read it. I would recommend that you follow some of his advice and just don't read it.
I can't understand how there's a gorillion of stories about characters trying to be gods but there's like only one dropped chinese novel and this one that the character is already basically a god.keep it up!
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please don't drop this author sama!!!! please don't drop this!!! I love this novel
(Review until Chapter 19) So far this Novel is Good. I love the anime "Overlord" and "I am a Spider So What?". This novel includes these 2 great Isekai animes, basically the recap of this story is the main character was transmigrated into a world of "So I am a Spider , So What?" but later on she discovers that her world is mixed into the same world Yggdrasil is and where the Overlord's starting plot took place before transmigrating. So if you like Isekai with domineering MC this is a good Novel for you!
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I'm hooked, honestly some solid work and i can't wait to see what the author does next.
why gender bend? even though its not my type its still interesting to read
I just want it to be rated high Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background
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The same disease that plagues the novel in Marvel as the Hive.. I worry too much if the novel release rate will be fast enough before our inevitable death...
Amazing Story! Author! i especially like the prophecy you and your friends wrote! i hope you can continue writing this amazing novel! -The Tired Idol
one of the best stories i ever saw in my life one of the best stories i ever saw in my life.[img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins]
This is really great fanfic combination of shiraori overlord and marvel it's really fun to see my favourite anime characters. . . . . ....
PLEASE PIN THIS!!! 📌 Here to tell you that I read the whole fic so far and believe this 100% deserves a read, the fanfic is extremely well done and one of the better ones in my opinion. I did see a 1 star review that claimed writing was horrible and it was full of Author Notes but that isnt true at all, author has a lot of knowledge about Marvel/MCU/Nani desu ga, nani ka/Overlord, a lot of the author notes are him explaining various things and certain decisions, the writing and personality of the characters is fantasticly done. The only thing I can see driving that guy away was either the fact that he didn't like some of the very large paragraphs that can be disrupting to read for some readers (these large paragraphs reflect original shirahoi's personality and I think a few people were able to see it) or the fact that Ain didn't come.
Best over lord story idea ever. I don't understand why i need 140 characters to make a review tho. Still not enough characters. Same as last sentence.
Revelar Spoiler I’ve caught up with the story which is ch39 at time of review, and man, this is pretty good yooo. It’s great to get a kumo desu ga fic and even better how the author is able to incorporate it with Overlord lore and marvel world. Overall I think if author keeps the pace this has great potential, you might be onto something big author.
I always thought it would be more interesting of a story about Shiro being a god with D in the modern world... this satisfy a little bit of my cravings
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Amazing story keep it up love how you well you got the character and you actually used the tva for something most stories completely skip it.
Read it through to the current chapter 29, still haven't seen any Marvel type action yet that made it famous. Just some preparation for the future kinda thing so far, Overlord aspect of it is pretty good. Can see this turning into something great if we don't get sidetracked too often. Love it so far, keep up the great work!
Muy buena historia ; espero que no se detenga y podamos seguir disfrutando de la lectura de este fanfic...,........................................,..............
Revelar Spoiler Very well written. I hope the author continues writing for a long time and Shiraori conquers the multiverse. I personally feel the author is onto something here and might be able to write a top-tier fanfic.
Revelar Spoiler The living tribunal, the OAA and the Almighty will immediately notice her. especially the Almighty, as he is the creator of the multiverse. Observers may also notice (uncertainly) (I write through a translator)..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Bu seriye devam güzel ilerliyorfjwoeheijeheisheiejejshdirueysjsownsbdidbxjsqonaaoisskndj bu hdjjsiskssbisshisbissbissbwushdhdurdksnytyvhcjghhkruhv
A very good work with crossovers and it seems very interesting from the beginning even though it's a genderbend it didn't give the feel that most fics in that genre give its a very good work keep the pace going it will be one of the best fics here with simple story structure and a very detailed world background just don't drop it and it will be one of the best works out there..❤❤❤❤❤
An okay-ish fic that gets constant sabotage from it's own author. If the mediocre writing doesn't get to you maybe the author constantly breaking the flow of the story with comments about how bad he thinks X chapter is or trying to excuse how this paragraph that makes no sense reffers to Y thing that only he knows about will do it. This fic is basically a "Tell and don't show" thing. But the tell is always done by the author telling you in AN (author notes). Now it could be better...if the author wasn't one of those authors that instead of improving preffers to remain ignorant. As he said, if you don't like it don't read it. I would recommend that you follow some of his advice and just don't read it.
I can't understand how there's a gorillion of stories about characters trying to be gods but there's like only one dropped chinese novel and this one that the character is already basically a god.keep it up!
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please don't drop this author sama!!!! please don't drop this!!! I love this novel
(Review until Chapter 19) So far this Novel is Good. I love the anime "Overlord" and "I am a Spider So What?". This novel includes these 2 great Isekai animes, basically the recap of this story is the main character was transmigrated into a world of "So I am a Spider , So What?" but later on she discovers that her world is mixed into the same world Yggdrasil is and where the Overlord's starting plot took place before transmigrating. So if you like Isekai with domineering MC this is a good Novel for you!
Revelar Spoiler I'm hooked, honestly some solid work and i can't wait to see what the author does next.
i like it so far, please don't drop it