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Absolute masterpiece, not wanting to spoil but don't get caught up with the average reviews of people who just red the 15 first chapters, it is a very well written story, like every other work by this author. This is a story about a non-human MC, a battle junkie through and through with an astonishing talent for battle and martials arts. The pace of the story is really good and the MC is in no way completely broken OP or whatever at 15 yo like way too much One Piece fanfics. He gains strenght like you could expect him to regarding his training, doesn't get to tussle with Admirals at the beginning and most importantly doesn't steamroll the whole canon story by being Yonko commander level at chapter 15.
If you don’t mind an MC that is lowkey evil, then this fanfic is amazing. Writing quality is god tier by webnovel standards, and the story is very good, side characters are almost all OC’s but they’re very likable and well done, and we’re starting to see more and more canon characters as the MC rises in fame and power. Updates are very frequent, and I really have no complaints. Just know that the mc doesnt mind slaughtering islands lol
Fun but dirty and extremely violent novel. Characters shape the world of One Piece in a never ending conquest. Lots and lots of s*** ... For once the main ch. isn't a human but a Savage Monkey Mink.
this sucks it's so bad that I have to give it 5 stars nah I'm just joking it's pretty good plus the author is amazing even tho it is kinda of slow paced at the start for me even tho I only got to chapter 8 lol
Peak. At first, Freyja irritated me beyond belief but now she has grown on me. Considering he spent most of his childhood fighting for his life from birth it’s not unbelievable for him to be a psycho. Great stuff!
A violent, cruel and merciless captain and his crew of madlads, ready to bring chaos to the world.
Mc is self insert. Mc is kid edgy. So; Mc is psychopath, asexual, eunuch, that the only thing he enjoys is committing genocides and looking for powerful men to touch.
One of the best written ff out there. Definitely not a story for those who dislike psycopathic-killer type of MC’s. However, i believe the author does a decent job at justifying such character development, for both the Mc and the crew. I understand some might not enjoy the beginning of story (although I hardly see why not), but please give it a shot. I’m on chapter 108 so far, and I can say that the story development, character growth (both in strength and nature) have been great. Keep up the good work author🙌🏻
One of the best one piece fan fic! You’ll see that his personality of leaving his ‘enemy’ or foe alive is kinda real and make sense later on with the story! It makes his personality more consistent. Try it guys, you’ll not regret it!
warning! ⚠️ warnings ⚠️ Not for the light-hearted. But I really love the work .
Let me start this review off with something positive. I'll gladly admit that you’re far better than most fanfic authors on this app, but I am somewhat concerned with the abrupt change from Traning/Battle maniac to psychopathic killer. I wouldn't mind killing if it made sense, but reading about the MC killing randoms for nonsensical reasons was a major mood killer. He went straight to killing without any motive other than basic information or because their fear gave him a sense of sick satisfaction. Sorry for rambling on and on, I hope you continue to improve despite any negative reviews you receive.
Almost every thing is good with it EXCEPT THAT FREYJA EXISTS, that is my biggest complaint and i have NEVER seen ANYONE actually like her
Bro cooked, it's everything I expect from Diddy, chaotic and bloodthirsty as possible. Idk y pple be hating on this novel it's great, I even dig the lil romantic subplot cooking in the background. Keep it up
author is deleting low rating honest comments...awhile back I read a comment about mc giving his vitality to freyja and kept saving her the whole journey and now that comment is gone. I also couldn't find a lots of low rating comment that was previously there. I wonder why
the mc has a succubus on crew he's not a romantic but they do show her doing lewd stuff alot
I love it so you better Finish it 🫵🏾 or else,,,, anyways keep up the good work Savvy
hello author-san, I want to know whether the mc will be a devil fruit or not. If so, what will it be. or will he eat sun wukong devil fruit. this story in itself is very fascinating for me. It's also amazing to see him slowly getting sun wukong powers. please don't drop this or any of your other stories.
The link to the discord is expired could you post a new one?.............dots to fill 140 character limit...........................................................
world background: Very good, character design: I don't like protagonists who don't look human (a matter of personal taste), dvlpmt story: Until chapter 20 I was interested, after that I lost interest, updating: unfortunately at the time I read it it was very slow, writing quality: very good and with a lot of potential. Many people may like it, after all the author knows how to write well, even I use the translator, it was quite good. If you do other stories I'll be there to follow you, good luck with the development of this one. KkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Lot of review in this fic isn’t justified at all, like there’s literally no problem with authors writing plot development or what not, the mc is acting like a pirate, some cannot take this and just cry atvthe review section for me this fic is truly underrated. Author just keepo on writing and just write. You’ll be better or someday you’ll make a book that will be loved by many. Ciao
honestly, i would say, i absolutely loved the novel before that lady Freya was introduced. apparently, from reading another review she is alive even at chapter 80 that's way beyond my patience point.so what happens is that MC killed family of this woman then he gives her a fruit because she wanna kill MC and is quite determined to do it. MC gives her a lot of his own vitality to save her according to MC as much as 25 grown men. i don't get the reason at all if MC wanted strong opponents he can find many everywhere and it's not even like he is unaware of strong opponents that's the first thing he saw how strong some humans are. so if it doesn't bother you that MC Carry around with him a woman who wants him dead at all cost then maybe you could read it otherwise i don't recommend it at all.
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Very good beginning, it really caught my attention, I liked the quality of writing, it is one of the best beginnings I have read. But, from chapter 20 or so, at the moment the girl takes the devil fruit, Everything goes downhill, the simple scene that happens after the fight in the gym leaves me with a feeling of disgust, simply incredible.Fast forward a few chapters, around 50 or 80 I think? Where Diddy gives her vitality to save her in a fight, and apparently you want her to be her partner, honestly ruined the story in my opinion.Obviously they are my tastes, there must be people who liked the story, simply giving my opinion, I really like your ff, I'm reading the new one in fact, this one is simply not to my taste.Good luck (Google Translate)
what garbage this fan fic is was good until chapter 20 and some bofore thats why even give that lady a devil fruit then she dose r 18 thing so im dropping this aslo you shold add a r 18 tag so people who dont like that suff wont read it. aslo iknow i made so many spelling mistakes
At first you think that it's a decent novel but the reality will hit you very hard. The case of being talentless again, with so many mistakes, like forgetting the stuff you spoke before, making dumb decisions like not giving mc the knowledge about world, but mc act as if he knows it all, having no understanding of martial arts and real fight but speaking as if you spend 3-5 hours on streets fighting other gangs. Shame that spent my time reading like 20 something chapters
Все хорошо начиналось, а потом просто с главы 19 пошло так себе...прочитал, нет скорее дотерпел до 62 главы и все больше не могу..а жаль( был потенциал, но гг своими действиями убил фик, так что 1 звезда
MC with his senseless killing really brought down any good thing about this fanfic. I don't mind MC's killing enemies, but he even killed the ones who saved him.
You took an interesting fighting maniac, and made him into a cold blooded murderer. Ruined it. Being psycho is fine, but murdering innocent civilians and children? No.
Writing Quality: Amazing, almost no errors or typos, and it reads fluently. 5/5 -- Updates: Pretty quick considering the length of the chapters, -/- -- Story Development: Here's where personal preference comes in, or why I rate it slightly lower than I usually would. The start was amazing, no doubt about it. Still, the story direction was affected by what the MC was turning into, perhaps to a very high degree, which derailed much of its potential toward a full villain-sided story. 3/5 from me, sorry. --- Character Design: In all honesty, the MC's personality is what made this story.... not something I looked forward to reading once I saw there was an update. It singlehandedly destroyed my interest to see him grow, become stronger, and thrive in the danger he exposed himself to. It all turned the MC into some kind of second-rate murderhobo whenever possible. I do understand how you wrote the character, I truly do, but when at every turn things are resolved with slaughter and mayhem and chaos, it quickly turns stale. (This is only my personal view.) --- World Background: One-Piece world, what more do I have to say. --- Overall: Great, but not my cup of tea. Highly recommend people to at least check it out and make their own opinions.
Absolute masterpiece, not wanting to spoil but don't get caught up with the average reviews of people who just red the 15 first chapters, it is a very well written story, like every other work by this author. This is a story about a non-human MC, a battle junkie through and through with an astonishing talent for battle and martials arts. The pace of the story is really good and the MC is in no way completely broken OP or whatever at 15 yo like way too much One Piece fanfics. He gains strenght like you could expect him to regarding his training, doesn't get to tussle with Admirals at the beginning and most importantly doesn't steamroll the whole canon story by being Yonko commander level at chapter 15.
If you don’t mind an MC that is lowkey evil, then this fanfic is amazing. Writing quality is god tier by webnovel standards, and the story is very good, side characters are almost all OC’s but they’re very likable and well done, and we’re starting to see more and more canon characters as the MC rises in fame and power. Updates are very frequent, and I really have no complaints. Just know that the mc doesnt mind slaughtering islands lol
Fun but dirty and extremely violent novel. Characters shape the world of One Piece in a never ending conquest. Lots and lots of s*** ... For once the main ch. isn't a human but a Savage Monkey Mink.
this sucks it's so bad that I have to give it 5 stars nah I'm just joking it's pretty good plus the author is amazing even tho it is kinda of slow paced at the start for me even tho I only got to chapter 8 lol
Peak. At first, Freyja irritated me beyond belief but now she has grown on me. Considering he spent most of his childhood fighting for his life from birth it’s not unbelievable for him to be a psycho. Great stuff!
A violent, cruel and merciless captain and his crew of madlads, ready to bring chaos to the world.
Mc is self insert. Mc is kid edgy. So; Mc is psychopath, asexual, eunuch, that the only thing he enjoys is committing genocides and looking for powerful men to touch.
One of the best written ff out there. Definitely not a story for those who dislike psycopathic-killer type of MC’s. However, i believe the author does a decent job at justifying such character development, for both the Mc and the crew. I understand some might not enjoy the beginning of story (although I hardly see why not), but please give it a shot. I’m on chapter 108 so far, and I can say that the story development, character growth (both in strength and nature) have been great. Keep up the good work author🙌🏻
One of the best one piece fan fic! You’ll see that his personality of leaving his ‘enemy’ or foe alive is kinda real and make sense later on with the story! It makes his personality more consistent. Try it guys, you’ll not regret it!
warning! ⚠️ warnings ⚠️ Not for the light-hearted. But I really love the work .
Let me start this review off with something positive. I'll gladly admit that you’re far better than most fanfic authors on this app, but I am somewhat concerned with the abrupt change from Traning/Battle maniac to psychopathic killer. I wouldn't mind killing if it made sense, but reading about the MC killing randoms for nonsensical reasons was a major mood killer. He went straight to killing without any motive other than basic information or because their fear gave him a sense of sick satisfaction. Sorry for rambling on and on, I hope you continue to improve despite any negative reviews you receive.
Almost every thing is good with it EXCEPT THAT FREYJA EXISTS, that is my biggest complaint and i have NEVER seen ANYONE actually like her
Bro cooked, it's everything I expect from Diddy, chaotic and bloodthirsty as possible. Idk y pple be hating on this novel it's great, I even dig the lil romantic subplot cooking in the background. Keep it up
author is deleting low rating honest comments...awhile back I read a comment about mc giving his vitality to freyja and kept saving her the whole journey and now that comment is gone. I also couldn't find a lots of low rating comment that was previously there. I wonder why
the mc has a succubus on crew he's not a romantic but they do show her doing lewd stuff alot
I love it so you better Finish it 🫵🏾 or else,,,, anyways keep up the good work Savvy
hello author-san, I want to know whether the mc will be a devil fruit or not. If so, what will it be. or will he eat sun wukong devil fruit. this story in itself is very fascinating for me. It's also amazing to see him slowly getting sun wukong powers. please don't drop this or any of your other stories.
The link to the discord is expired could you post a new one?.............dots to fill 140 character limit...........................................................
world background: Very good, character design: I don't like protagonists who don't look human (a matter of personal taste), dvlpmt story: Until chapter 20 I was interested, after that I lost interest, updating: unfortunately at the time I read it it was very slow, writing quality: very good and with a lot of potential. Many people may like it, after all the author knows how to write well, even I use the translator, it was quite good. If you do other stories I'll be there to follow you, good luck with the development of this one. KkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkjkkkkkkkkkkkkkjjkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Lot of review in this fic isn’t justified at all, like there’s literally no problem with authors writing plot development or what not, the mc is acting like a pirate, some cannot take this and just cry atvthe review section for me this fic is truly underrated. Author just keepo on writing and just write. You’ll be better or someday you’ll make a book that will be loved by many. Ciao
honestly, i would say, i absolutely loved the novel before that lady Freya was introduced. apparently, from reading another review she is alive even at chapter 80 that's way beyond my patience point.so what happens is that MC killed family of this woman then he gives her a fruit because she wanna kill MC and is quite determined to do it. MC gives her a lot of his own vitality to save her according to MC as much as 25 grown men. i don't get the reason at all if MC wanted strong opponents he can find many everywhere and it's not even like he is unaware of strong opponents that's the first thing he saw how strong some humans are. so if it doesn't bother you that MC Carry around with him a woman who wants him dead at all cost then maybe you could read it otherwise i don't recommend it at all.
Revelar Spoiler Very good beginning, it really caught my attention, I liked the quality of writing, it is one of the best beginnings I have read. But, from chapter 20 or so, at the moment the girl takes the devil fruit, Everything goes downhill, the simple scene that happens after the fight in the gym leaves me with a feeling of disgust, simply incredible.Fast forward a few chapters, around 50 or 80 I think? Where Diddy gives her vitality to save her in a fight, and apparently you want her to be her partner, honestly ruined the story in my opinion.Obviously they are my tastes, there must be people who liked the story, simply giving my opinion, I really like your ff, I'm reading the new one in fact, this one is simply not to my taste.Good luck (Google Translate)
what garbage this fan fic is was good until chapter 20 and some bofore thats why even give that lady a devil fruit then she dose r 18 thing so im dropping this aslo you shold add a r 18 tag so people who dont like that suff wont read it. aslo iknow i made so many spelling mistakes
At first you think that it's a decent novel but the reality will hit you very hard. The case of being talentless again, with so many mistakes, like forgetting the stuff you spoke before, making dumb decisions like not giving mc the knowledge about world, but mc act as if he knows it all, having no understanding of martial arts and real fight but speaking as if you spend 3-5 hours on streets fighting other gangs. Shame that spent my time reading like 20 something chapters
Все хорошо начиналось, а потом просто с главы 19 пошло так себе...прочитал, нет скорее дотерпел до 62 главы и все больше не могу..а жаль( был потенциал, но гг своими действиями убил фик, так что 1 звезда
MC with his senseless killing really brought down any good thing about this fanfic. I don't mind MC's killing enemies, but he even killed the ones who saved him.
You took an interesting fighting maniac, and made him into a cold blooded murderer. Ruined it. Being psycho is fine, but murdering innocent civilians and children? No.
Writing Quality: Amazing, almost no errors or typos, and it reads fluently. 5/5 -- Updates: Pretty quick considering the length of the chapters, -/- -- Story Development: Here's where personal preference comes in, or why I rate it slightly lower than I usually would. The start was amazing, no doubt about it. Still, the story direction was affected by what the MC was turning into, perhaps to a very high degree, which derailed much of its potential toward a full villain-sided story. 3/5 from me, sorry. --- Character Design: In all honesty, the MC's personality is what made this story.... not something I looked forward to reading once I saw there was an update. It singlehandedly destroyed my interest to see him grow, become stronger, and thrive in the danger he exposed himself to. It all turned the MC into some kind of second-rate murderhobo whenever possible. I do understand how you wrote the character, I truly do, but when at every turn things are resolved with slaughter and mayhem and chaos, it quickly turns stale. (This is only my personal view.) --- World Background: One-Piece world, what more do I have to say. --- Overall: Great, but not my cup of tea. Highly recommend people to at least check it out and make their own opinions.