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I like this fic yes it is not perfect but I like the changes that have been made I hope the author will update his story soon ps: if you don't like the story I can understand but keep your negative and negative comments for yourself if it is not constructive I am tired of seeing people hate for no reason other than feeling superior by demeaning others if you are not happy Why don't you write a fic the way you want it instead of complaining?
Great fic! One of the best one piece stories!! Super recommended! Just one thing is that I wished he could have more devil fruit users in the crew, for example lightning for Nami or gold for Kaya...!
The start of the story was great but the longer it goes it just becomes a carbon copy of OG One Piece, with a little change but still the same result in the end no change at all. If you read this just read manga, at least in manga there's a picture, nothing really changes, don't expect the unexpected because this story is easy to predict the outcome, no surprises factor, no thrill, no unexpected, just a copy paste.
The problem I have with this is that 60 chapters in nothing really changes for the story, Its just a re-hash of the original one piece, its almost the start of arlong arc and so far the only change is that for some random (absolutely b**lls**t) reason luffy has roger's sword that he doesn't really use at all, and kaya joined the crew but she doesn't have any screen time because that will take extra effort to write and her importance to crew is even less than johnny & yasoku. one more thing why is author so gender confused? even till now I can't make up my mind on whether zoro is male or female? one or two times I can understand the confusion but this has been going on for so long that I think even author is also undecided on whether zoro is he or she.
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The gender-bend spoiled it for me. If not it would have been a 5 star. The story is good and all but there are some things that I think people should never change. Genders it gets annoying
Here I am praying that your one piece book is better then your Genshin impact book will change over time
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well what to say, like every fanfiction it is not perfect but overall the author was very good not only in making a stronger luffy with a good power scaling of his enemies . The author was able to follow the plot in a way that is not forced and putting good twists to it matching the changes he made to canon and perfectly fitting his story. In short it is worth reading
Don't mind the negative reviews, this is fanfic made by you so you know what you made, they can only read it whether they like it or not(and i don't care about genderbend)it just that the story is almost the same, can you change the island in the future? like how they fight and how they respond or just go to other blue like north blue, south blue, west blue or just go back to east blue pick up makino just explore the world make the story more richer and longerand don't make a time stop like the 3 month training period in skypiea but the rest of the world doesn't movethe rest is good
What About Gear 4 When Will He Use It Which Arc Is He Going Use It on Fishman Island Arc, Punk Hazard Arc, Dressrosa Arc, Whole Cake Arc, Zou Arc or Wano Arc? Because I am Going Explode With Excitement if He, About The Icon X Scar He going get it or Not Just Me Honest Answer Okay.
It's a great fanfic. The beginning might be a bit plotless but this is One Piece world. There is no plot to being with. I hope the author post more chapters!
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I like this one more than the original, because the protagonist is more alive, not just an uncelebrated one, although it is strange to see Sanji as a gender-swapped Zoro, it was still much more fun to read this version instead of the original, I liked the development of the story of a different way.
great story man hope it continues.it's doesn't follow cannon but it's still solid would recommend to any one that doesn't mind some AU.
I must say the story is pretty good. I will write the good and bad aspects. It may be considered SPOILERS, so think again before reading. First of all, the good aspects. A smarter Luffy a stronger team wars that ended quickly. extra team members bad aspects Changing the gender of characters unnecessarily. (Okay, I understand that you want to make a harem, but there are already many beautiful and strong (potential) female characters in the story. Why do you have to change the men to female characters?) Too much description and detail during storytelling. (Even the compass thing he could have explained in two lines, he explained it in at least 3 paragraphs.) Complete destruction of the timeline. (They can take a break and spend months to get training. The timeline in the series has to be disrupted and many events have to change, but everything is the same.) It follows the same events as the original One Piece. Nothing has changed yet. (In the Enies Lobby incident, it was very illogical for him to go and attack the "Enies Lobby" even though "Franky" and "Robin" were rescued. (I think.) Also, there was no need to attack the sacred dragons in the "Sabaody" archipelago. They could have quickly raided, saved the slave and escaped. events were allowed to develop similarly to the original for the two-year separation to occur.) Anyway, it's a novel that I enjoy reading. I'm looking forward to the sequel (I used google translate when commenting. I'm not very good at writing English. I'm sorry.)
I honestly don't get OP fanfics where they used Luffy as their MC. Bruh there's no way you could do better than Oda, the best thing you could do is a slightly stronger Gear 4th coz Gear 5th is just broken.
the story and concept is interesting, but bad execution, we follow the same path as One Piece with the MC (Luffy), and even if he had enough time to become powerful since he has been training since he was 7 years old with a system and a powerful master but always remains weak and the worst is that he had the opportunity to learn HAKI but he did not want to learn it because it is very boring and he wanted to train techniques that are useless (he gets beaten up by the admirals), honestly i am very disappointed, and now all the crew becomes girls (gender bender), I had high expectations but it's just another Fan Fic that follows the whole process of the manga.
Esta interesante asta que sale de foosha apartir de ahi cae poco a poco . Un sistema con estupidos logros calistenia maximo 300KG ¿en serio? . Lo de cambiar el genero de los personajes principales solo por el haren sin hacerles nada mas lo jode bastante . No lo recomiendo, a no ser que estes muy aburrido y no tengas otra cosa
man good story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I don't get it how can you get the idea of writing this One Piece fanfic in the first place 😮💨. The plot story is only interesting before Luffy sets sail. Characters gender-bender is not a problem but their personality and names ruined it 👎. Since you've turned them into women, you've had to make their personalities more feminine, and their names had to change too. The plot story is another thing that you barely change. 😕 Do you know how I feel when read this ff book? It's "One Piece all over again", I rather watch One Piece anime than read this copy-paste product. 😮💨😠
when you are done with this story maybe you can write BAKI with a system
Good job 👍 for ruining your One Piece fanfic book. I really don't get how can you get the idea of making this One Piece fanfic in the first place 😮💨. The story is only interesting before Luffy set sail. Characters gender-bender is not the problem here but their personality and names ruined it 👎. The plot story is another thing, you barely change it as if you had no motivation. If you don't want to write, don't start it. 😮💨😠
I can not wait , when she fall in love with Luffy . And considering the fact this Luffy is a Casanova it will be great.
la historia no es mala en si es un poco forzada aveces pero lo explican despues se disfruta hasta ahora[img=recomendar][img=actualizar][img=recomendar]
I read this story on Watpadd, translated into Spanish, I wanted to continue reading it but it has been deleted or deleted in its entirety, Mr. author would you be so kind as to upload it again? I liked it very much. Thank you
I like this fic yes it is not perfect but I like the changes that have been made I hope the author will update his story soon ps: if you don't like the story I can understand but keep your negative and negative comments for yourself if it is not constructive I am tired of seeing people hate for no reason other than feeling superior by demeaning others if you are not happy Why don't you write a fic the way you want it instead of complaining?
Great fic! One of the best one piece stories!! Super recommended! Just one thing is that I wished he could have more devil fruit users in the crew, for example lightning for Nami or gold for Kaya...!
The start of the story was great but the longer it goes it just becomes a carbon copy of OG One Piece, with a little change but still the same result in the end no change at all. If you read this just read manga, at least in manga there's a picture, nothing really changes, don't expect the unexpected because this story is easy to predict the outcome, no surprises factor, no thrill, no unexpected, just a copy paste.
The problem I have with this is that 60 chapters in nothing really changes for the story, Its just a re-hash of the original one piece, its almost the start of arlong arc and so far the only change is that for some random (absolutely b**lls**t) reason luffy has roger's sword that he doesn't really use at all, and kaya joined the crew but she doesn't have any screen time because that will take extra effort to write and her importance to crew is even less than johnny & yasoku. one more thing why is author so gender confused? even till now I can't make up my mind on whether zoro is male or female? one or two times I can understand the confusion but this has been going on for so long that I think even author is also undecided on whether zoro is he or she.
Revelar Spoiler The gender-bend spoiled it for me. If not it would have been a 5 star. The story is good and all but there are some things that I think people should never change. Genders it gets annoying
Here I am praying that your one piece book is better then your Genshin impact book will change over time
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well what to say, like every fanfiction it is not perfect but overall the author was very good not only in making a stronger luffy with a good power scaling of his enemies . The author was able to follow the plot in a way that is not forced and putting good twists to it matching the changes he made to canon and perfectly fitting his story. In short it is worth reading
Don't mind the negative reviews, this is fanfic made by you so you know what you made, they can only read it whether they like it or not(and i don't care about genderbend)it just that the story is almost the same, can you change the island in the future? like how they fight and how they respond or just go to other blue like north blue, south blue, west blue or just go back to east blue pick up makino just explore the world make the story more richer and longerand don't make a time stop like the 3 month training period in skypiea but the rest of the world doesn't movethe rest is good
What About Gear 4 When Will He Use It Which Arc Is He Going Use It on Fishman Island Arc, Punk Hazard Arc, Dressrosa Arc, Whole Cake Arc, Zou Arc or Wano Arc? Because I am Going Explode With Excitement if He, About The Icon X Scar He going get it or Not Just Me Honest Answer Okay.
It's a great fanfic. The beginning might be a bit plotless but this is One Piece world. There is no plot to being with. I hope the author post more chapters!
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I like this one more than the original, because the protagonist is more alive, not just an uncelebrated one, although it is strange to see Sanji as a gender-swapped Zoro, it was still much more fun to read this version instead of the original, I liked the development of the story of a different way.
great story man hope it continues.it's doesn't follow cannon but it's still solid would recommend to any one that doesn't mind some AU.
I must say the story is pretty good. I will write the good and bad aspects. It may be considered SPOILERS, so think again before reading. First of all, the good aspects. A smarter Luffy a stronger team wars that ended quickly. extra team members bad aspects Changing the gender of characters unnecessarily. (Okay, I understand that you want to make a harem, but there are already many beautiful and strong (potential) female characters in the story. Why do you have to change the men to female characters?) Too much description and detail during storytelling. (Even the compass thing he could have explained in two lines, he explained it in at least 3 paragraphs.) Complete destruction of the timeline. (They can take a break and spend months to get training. The timeline in the series has to be disrupted and many events have to change, but everything is the same.) It follows the same events as the original One Piece. Nothing has changed yet. (In the Enies Lobby incident, it was very illogical for him to go and attack the "Enies Lobby" even though "Franky" and "Robin" were rescued. (I think.) Also, there was no need to attack the sacred dragons in the "Sabaody" archipelago. They could have quickly raided, saved the slave and escaped. events were allowed to develop similarly to the original for the two-year separation to occur.) Anyway, it's a novel that I enjoy reading. I'm looking forward to the sequel (I used google translate when commenting. I'm not very good at writing English. I'm sorry.)
I honestly don't get OP fanfics where they used Luffy as their MC. Bruh there's no way you could do better than Oda, the best thing you could do is a slightly stronger Gear 4th coz Gear 5th is just broken.
the story and concept is interesting, but bad execution, we follow the same path as One Piece with the MC (Luffy), and even if he had enough time to become powerful since he has been training since he was 7 years old with a system and a powerful master but always remains weak and the worst is that he had the opportunity to learn HAKI but he did not want to learn it because it is very boring and he wanted to train techniques that are useless (he gets beaten up by the admirals), honestly i am very disappointed, and now all the crew becomes girls (gender bender), I had high expectations but it's just another Fan Fic that follows the whole process of the manga.
Esta interesante asta que sale de foosha apartir de ahi cae poco a poco . Un sistema con estupidos logros calistenia maximo 300KG ¿en serio? . Lo de cambiar el genero de los personajes principales solo por el haren sin hacerles nada mas lo jode bastante . No lo recomiendo, a no ser que estes muy aburrido y no tengas otra cosa
man good story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I don't get it how can you get the idea of writing this One Piece fanfic in the first place 😮💨. The plot story is only interesting before Luffy sets sail. Characters gender-bender is not a problem but their personality and names ruined it 👎. Since you've turned them into women, you've had to make their personalities more feminine, and their names had to change too. The plot story is another thing that you barely change. 😕 Do you know how I feel when read this ff book? It's "One Piece all over again", I rather watch One Piece anime than read this copy-paste product. 😮💨😠
when you are done with this story maybe you can write BAKI with a system
Good job 👍 for ruining your One Piece fanfic book. I really don't get how can you get the idea of making this One Piece fanfic in the first place 😮💨. The story is only interesting before Luffy set sail. Characters gender-bender is not the problem here but their personality and names ruined it 👎. The plot story is another thing, you barely change it as if you had no motivation. If you don't want to write, don't start it. 😮💨😠
I can not wait , when she fall in love with Luffy . And considering the fact this Luffy is a Casanova it will be great.
la historia no es mala en si es un poco forzada aveces pero lo explican despues se disfruta hasta ahora[img=recomendar][img=actualizar][img=recomendar]
I read this story on Watpadd, translated into Spanish, I wanted to continue reading it but it has been deleted or deleted in its entirety, Mr. author would you be so kind as to upload it again? I liked it very much. Thank you