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this is a very interesting fanfic with its own twists...everything's good but sometimes the plot is forced and it really isn't a problem cuz later the reason for such is revealed as the story continues on
Very Fun story,It is not Copy Paste of OG .Manga and has some very good elements.
Harem trash with genderbent characters and unnecessary crossover characters. 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻
Why it's just 4.3???________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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This is a copy and paste of the manga, which would be acceptable if other aspects changed, such as the charisma of the protagonist and how he behaves with his environment. unfortunately it is unfortunate too flat
Author honestly I have a great IDEA PLEASE CHANGE NAMI'S WEAPON TO A TRIDENT EACH PRONG HAVING ONE OF THE THREE BUBLES THIS INCREASES THE EASE IN USING IT AND GIVES HER MORE DAMAGE DEALING POWER THANKS TO ARMAMENT HAKI
For now it's good, I liked the intelligent Luffy but that doesn't lose the original essence........................................................................................................
Very nice One Piece AU story. Im glad Luffy acts like a normal person should.
Let's goooooooooo,i like this [img=update] need more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Thanks for writing my fav anime fanfic❤️____________________________________________
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Pretty good but author decides to ruin it by genderbending the best characters all for the sake of harem not for me.
The author should see to standardizing the update like for example something like three chapters every day at 8 p.m. or something like. Sinon l'histoire est bonne.
i think i gave it too many stars honesltly reading it is painful and i usually read a lot of mtl Google translate could have done a better job
Have been reading this guy fanfics for some months and all of his fanfic are top class work.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️This fanfic is another 5 ★★★★★ story made by the Author aka some_writer! 💝✨
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I love this story, I like how Luffy was written without much change in him other than becoming smarter and stronger than he was in canon. Keep working hard and writing what you like. I have a question for the One Piece fanfic readers, do you prefer the main characters like (Luffy Zoro Sanji...) in their female version? Or do they stay the same.[img=recommend]
hasta ahora me gusta bastante la historia solo espero que al autor añada mas romance con los personajes y seria feliz [img=recomendar][img=actualizar]
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Revelar Spoiler The Thing with Nami confused me and made be angry. Still great story tho. Zoro fight with Mihawk was great.
This has been really good so far, I really like the story a lot and glad to see the system isn't influencing much of Luffy's life but it had to be a harem fanfic, again... *sigh* Not my cup of cocoa but you do you Author-san. Have fun writing the story
Well, the system is a waste of time, the story is copy and paste with subtle personality changes and powers that are not worth it, the protagonist is a soup of powers when he already had his own op powers anyway nice try
I will be honest this story is realy great, yea sure thare are some elements who irk me a bit but they do not effect my enjoyment in reading this story.
this is a very interesting fanfic with its own twists...everything's good but sometimes the plot is forced and it really isn't a problem cuz later the reason for such is revealed as the story continues on
Very Fun story,It is not Copy Paste of OG .Manga and has some very good elements.
Harem trash with genderbent characters and unnecessary crossover characters. 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻
Why it's just 4.3???________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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This is a copy and paste of the manga, which would be acceptable if other aspects changed, such as the charisma of the protagonist and how he behaves with his environment. unfortunately it is unfortunate too flat
Author honestly I have a great IDEA PLEASE CHANGE NAMI'S WEAPON TO A TRIDENT EACH PRONG HAVING ONE OF THE THREE BUBLES THIS INCREASES THE EASE IN USING IT AND GIVES HER MORE DAMAGE DEALING POWER THANKS TO ARMAMENT HAKI
For now it's good, I liked the intelligent Luffy but that doesn't lose the original essence........................................................................................................
Very nice One Piece AU story. Im glad Luffy acts like a normal person should.
Let's goooooooooo,i like this [img=update] need more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Thanks for writing my fav anime fanfic❤️____________________________________________
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[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Pretty good but author decides to ruin it by genderbending the best characters all for the sake of harem not for me.
The author should see to standardizing the update like for example something like three chapters every day at 8 p.m. or something like. Sinon l'histoire est bonne.
i think i gave it too many stars honesltly reading it is painful and i usually read a lot of mtl Google translate could have done a better job
Have been reading this guy fanfics for some months and all of his fanfic are top class work.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️This fanfic is another 5 ★★★★★ story made by the Author aka some_writer! 💝✨
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I love this story, I like how Luffy was written without much change in him other than becoming smarter and stronger than he was in canon. Keep working hard and writing what you like. I have a question for the One Piece fanfic readers, do you prefer the main characters like (Luffy Zoro Sanji...) in their female version? Or do they stay the same.[img=recommend]
hasta ahora me gusta bastante la historia solo espero que al autor añada mas romance con los personajes y seria feliz [img=recomendar][img=actualizar]
🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Revelar Spoiler The Thing with Nami confused me and made be angry. Still great story tho. Zoro fight with Mihawk was great.
This has been really good so far, I really like the story a lot and glad to see the system isn't influencing much of Luffy's life but it had to be a harem fanfic, again... *sigh* Not my cup of cocoa but you do you Author-san. Have fun writing the story
Well, the system is a waste of time, the story is copy and paste with subtle personality changes and powers that are not worth it, the protagonist is a soup of powers when he already had his own op powers anyway nice try
I will be honest this story is realy great, yea sure thare are some elements who irk me a bit but they do not effect my enjoyment in reading this story.