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I have not read the novel. I'm commenting because I've seen some cruel comments. Unfortunately, some people don't care that this is your first novel. Remember that you can do better in the future.
At first I was interested due to the premise of guy becoming Brook, but as already mentioned it's quite amateurish. Like I wonder how old the writer is and if they are simply not native speakers because while it's been a long time for me as I recall anyone who has at least gone through high school requires a certain level of language arts which covers writing which is further expanded in college with creative writing. These are core subjects as far as I remember. Anyways I hope writer gets better and it's good that he is trying to improve his skills however what I've read so far has little coherence and it's quite lacking. I wish author the best going forward and hope my review is taken in the light it's intended which it's simple befuddlement rather than me belittling his attempt.
Keep up the good work.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Well first time writing a fanfic, just here to give it a try. I initially wanted to write a OPM fanfic but here we are. I decided to improve my writing skills before truly being invested in a fanfic.So, don't expect much, also it can be dropped anytime, as I said, I am writing it because I am somewhat bored. Though there are a lot mistakes, some which I ignored because I was to lazy to care. But if you find any consistent mistakes you can point it out in the comments. I will probably not reply to your comments because I am the dude in the group chat who sees everything but never types anything back.
This is the most amateurish writing i have ever read. Mistakes, stupidity, lack of dialogue, wasting of the reader's time. It has it all.
I hope you don't drop this it has potential (for me that is) ........................................................ ...... ................
this is so good . kerp up the good work.[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I have not read the novel. I'm commenting because I've seen some cruel comments. Unfortunately, some people don't care that this is your first novel. Remember that you can do better in the future.
At first I was interested due to the premise of guy becoming Brook, but as already mentioned it's quite amateurish. Like I wonder how old the writer is and if they are simply not native speakers because while it's been a long time for me as I recall anyone who has at least gone through high school requires a certain level of language arts which covers writing which is further expanded in college with creative writing. These are core subjects as far as I remember. Anyways I hope writer gets better and it's good that he is trying to improve his skills however what I've read so far has little coherence and it's quite lacking. I wish author the best going forward and hope my review is taken in the light it's intended which it's simple befuddlement rather than me belittling his attempt.
Keep up the good work.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Well first time writing a fanfic, just here to give it a try. I initially wanted to write a OPM fanfic but here we are. I decided to improve my writing skills before truly being invested in a fanfic.So, don't expect much, also it can be dropped anytime, as I said, I am writing it because I am somewhat bored. Though there are a lot mistakes, some which I ignored because I was to lazy to care. But if you find any consistent mistakes you can point it out in the comments. I will probably not reply to your comments because I am the dude in the group chat who sees everything but never types anything back.
This is the most amateurish writing i have ever read. Mistakes, stupidity, lack of dialogue, wasting of the reader's time. It has it all.
I hope you don't drop this it has potential (for me that is) ........................................................ ...... ................
this is so good . kerp up the good work.[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]