Celebrity System In The DC Universe

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Eternal_Ending

it is good, but it is not for me, it seems more like a musical than a fanfic.

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Saiyan_Of_God

The character is fine , Just don't make him a HYPOCRITE Like Batman. If the MC faces villains like Joker, Use Common Sense like Send Him to a Secret Island where only the MC Knows or use his victims to haunt him for eternity. An example would be giving joker the Death sentence by Using/Bribing Politicians and if Batman disagrees, have the ghost of his victims haunt him forever. Batman is as guilty and Delusional as the Joker. They both belong in an asylum. P.S.: I like this cover pic better.

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Andrew_maconha

So since he has Vegeta body, the protagonist is a bald dwarf?lalalaallaalalalalllaallaallalalaalalalalalalaallaalaaalaalalaalaalalaaalalaaalalallalalaalalalalalaalalallalalalalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalLalalalalalalLallalalalalaquem traduzir deu o cu

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X1AutumnLeaf

really interesting, I honestly can't wait to see how this turns out. the character interactions are well done and the mc's personality is also well done and not just a blank paper like most. hopefully this updates often and doesn't stagnate.

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ElCarpincho

Surprisingly good .

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skyhound

Read up to chapter 5, I really like what I've read so far. Mc has the beginnings of a fun personality. He's not strictly going the hero route but still cares about helping others. The pacing is good and the characters feel authentic to their source. The grammar and sentence structure is solid. Overall a promising new fic that I'd recommend. Keep up the great work author.

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Aerian

Writing Quality: ⭐⭐ - The writing is okay, but there are issues, particularly with the excessive singing, which becomes annoying. Story Development: ⭐⭐⭐ - The story is okay at best. The romance is mediocre, and the plot progression can feel slow. Character Design: ⭐⭐⭐ - The characters are neither particularly good nor bad. The main character is mainly defined by being a singer and a McDonald's walking billboard. Updating Stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - The updates are frequent and consistent. World Background: ⭐⭐⭐ - The world-building is decent but nothing extraordinary.

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jackson_smith

Level1Goblin Excellent Fanfic You can do this DC fanfic immediately after Celebrity System In The DC Universe DC: Ultimatrix A young man wakes up in DC. Fortunately, he was given a gift: the Ultimatrix from Ben 10. He decides becoming a superhero is boring and formulaic; besides, being a villain sounds more fun. Harem Christina Bell Tanya Fox Roulette Catwoman Poison Ivy Harley Quinn Tracey Buxton Giganta Cheetah Silver Banshee Tala Circe Iolande Aga’po Ghia’ta Veronica Cale Emerald Empress Tsarita Talia Al Ghul Bleez Mongal Highmother Avia Lyssa Drak Soranik Natu

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Ireallylikereading

is it just the overpowered tag or is there weak to strong you just forgot to add, i really dont like mc's who are just op at the start without doing anything, so telling me would be very much appreciated.

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Benoit_Valtin

hello your prison gave me the idea of creating a character who guards a prison, but I also had the idea of making him multiversal. Dexter Yagami, the jailer butcher, a man who after imprisoning supervillains cuts them up and tears them into pieces. but I don't know how to write, does the idea interest you?

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fogbog

just stopped updating with no heads up when it was getting good

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MagiciansWriter

idk, But this is a good ff, I love how this turn, And as a reader, I know I like this ff because i only need 2-3 hours to 1-51 so yeah..So A Perfect FF You Give, A Perfect Score You Get

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ilive

great story but i dont like that the mc is not training even though he is a saiyan and has Vegeta's talent.

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skotnyx

MC got some hero complex as he saves a random boy in the very first chapter.

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DNHELO

100 chapters, I've read this for 100 chapter. Consistently saying to myself "I like the system and the idea so let's keep reading " but honestly I can't do so anymore. The last 3 chapters 97 to 100 felt like a sausage fest who's only reason to be there was to pull at the mcs ego and harem. The story doesn't delve deep into any character or plot line and there is no tension because of how overwhelmingly meaningless all conflict feels

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Fullpower

One of my favorite fanfictions in this page

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immortalbook

pretty good book very much enjoy reading it

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Felhavon

This is awesome! Interesting premise with a fun "system". I wish there was more novels with music as a theme.