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Sendo sincero a ideia é muito boa vim com ótimas expectativas porém uma palavra pra descrever essa história seria confusa mano ele acorda como uma criança de 5 anos com convenientemente roupas do personagem de Black list e um baralho que ele decide pegar pq sim e do nada parece que ele ganha uma habilidade do baralho além de que ele mata um policia esmagando a cabeça na parede pro um gangster qualquer só pq ele é mais inclinado pra máfia sem falar que ele parece estar escrevendo um adulto com corpo de um adulto pq uma criança de 5 anos não tem força física pra matar daquele jeito além de que ele acordou no meio do nada era pra ele estar desnutrido assumindo que esse corpo não se formou pra ele convenientemente sinceramente ideia boa premissa é execução horríveis PS critica construtiva
Mostly neutral review because of wrong expectations. But the writing quality and stability of updates is good so I'm giving those 5 stars. I'm going to pass along this heads-up. If you think this story features an adult main character you are wrong. Starts with the body of a 5-year-old and doesn't time skip past his youth. And the newest arc is going to be his Hogwarts years. So if you were thinking in this story he would be an established adult character revealing himself to the world that isn't what happens at all. And unfortunately that's what I was here for, so... Kid Reddington in HP. Not Reddington in HP. That distinction changes a lot imo. That said, it doesn't mean the story is bad so don't take this review as that please.
so, the author writes with great description without forgetting to continue the plot. which is much harder than it sounds!!! and the story itself is also excellent. with great character development and plot development. extremely pleased and do notify me as soon as you have a Patreon. thank you for the exceptional story ☺️ all the best! 👍🙏
Very fresh concept don't drop it will reach rank 1 Udidhrififhdufifjdhdhdidkxjcbfhdjckcjfbdhdidifjffhjfifjdjdjhehejrififjdhegegdjdjxkkckcifidjehrhrhdjcickfjdjrherh
The character is basically based off of Raymond reddington from blacklist but the author just doesn’t understand the character at all.yes they might do terrible things but it’s always for an overarching reason. He wouldn’t just brutally murder a cop for no visible gain
the writing feels very repetitive you say the same thing over and over with different words
I love how detail his transformation was and it is pretty good with everything else
Shameless author reviewww , what can i say this is my first work that i had written despite having almost 0 creativity and all of that jazz
Sendo sincero a ideia é muito boa vim com ótimas expectativas porém uma palavra pra descrever essa história seria confusa mano ele acorda como uma criança de 5 anos com convenientemente roupas do personagem de Black list e um baralho que ele decide pegar pq sim e do nada parece que ele ganha uma habilidade do baralho além de que ele mata um policia esmagando a cabeça na parede pro um gangster qualquer só pq ele é mais inclinado pra máfia sem falar que ele parece estar escrevendo um adulto com corpo de um adulto pq uma criança de 5 anos não tem força física pra matar daquele jeito além de que ele acordou no meio do nada era pra ele estar desnutrido assumindo que esse corpo não se formou pra ele convenientemente sinceramente ideia boa premissa é execução horríveis PS critica construtiva
Mostly neutral review because of wrong expectations. But the writing quality and stability of updates is good so I'm giving those 5 stars. I'm going to pass along this heads-up. If you think this story features an adult main character you are wrong. Starts with the body of a 5-year-old and doesn't time skip past his youth. And the newest arc is going to be his Hogwarts years. So if you were thinking in this story he would be an established adult character revealing himself to the world that isn't what happens at all. And unfortunately that's what I was here for, so... Kid Reddington in HP. Not Reddington in HP. That distinction changes a lot imo. That said, it doesn't mean the story is bad so don't take this review as that please.
so, the author writes with great description without forgetting to continue the plot. which is much harder than it sounds!!! and the story itself is also excellent. with great character development and plot development. extremely pleased and do notify me as soon as you have a Patreon. thank you for the exceptional story ☺️ all the best! 👍🙏
Very fresh concept don't drop it will reach rank 1 Udidhrififhdufifjdhdhdidkxjcbfhdjckcjfbdhdidifjffhjfifjdjdjhehejrififjdhegegdjdjxkkckcifidjehrhrhdjcickfjdjrherh
The character is basically based off of Raymond reddington from blacklist but the author just doesn’t understand the character at all.yes they might do terrible things but it’s always for an overarching reason. He wouldn’t just brutally murder a cop for no visible gain
the writing feels very repetitive you say the same thing over and over with different words
I love how detail his transformation was and it is pretty good with everything else
Shameless author reviewww , what can i say this is my first work that i had written despite having almost 0 creativity and all of that jazz