Ben_Payne

Ben_Payne

male LV 14

Life is great!

2021-03-24 Unido United Kingdom
Emblemas 9

Moments 178
Ben_Payne
Ben_Payne
4 months ago
Posted

I liked the story at first, but honestly with so many different povs it becomes a chore to read and the mc has just become some Mary sue who never actually loses anything with real meaning, and when he does lose they do some Mary sue shenanigans where they actually won and played their opponents all along. It’s just become some face slapping power fantasy story.

Ben_Payne
Ben_Payne
8 months ago
Posted

This is stolen.

Ben_Payne
Ben_Payne
9 months ago
Replied to boxessssss

I mean, it was war so no one’s the good guy. but they probably thought that the Persians were gonna claim Greece and basically overwrite their culture so eh idk

Este livro foi excluído.
Ben_Payne
Ben_Payne
1 years ago
Replied to Xerxes_73

It’s hard but more in a grind at one boss for hours until you get good enough to beat it than a this is impossible and annoying kind of way

It was like playing a game on easy mode, after playing Dark Soul for hours.

DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD

DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD

Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER

Ben_Payne
Ben_Payne
1 years ago
Posted

Great fic. it’s a slow burn but that allows the world to be built up in a detailed and easily understandable manner

Ben_Payne
Ben_Payne
1 years ago
Commented

Was it not level 1 on the previous page?

Ben_Payne
Ben_Payne
1 years ago
Commented

Until the final arc where everyone just learns how to fly

Take the Eagle Wings, for example. It would allow one to fly in the sky. You should know that there aren't many people who can fly in the Naruto world.

Naruto: Family System

Naruto: Family System

Anime & Comics · SoftCrow

Ben_Payne
Ben_Payne
1 years ago
Commented

Walking home but taken from your bed?

All I saw was darkness as I was simply walking home but then in a flash of light I was suddenly taken away as I laid on my bed.

FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH

FAIRY TAIL: GAMER PATH

Anime & Comics · Jovami6729

Ben_Payne
Ben_Payne
1 years ago
Replied to Mr_Cuak

Yeah but some random gangster comes up to you being chased by a cop you have no reason to 1 trust the gangster and 2 believe the gangster can even offer anything

Ben_Payne
Ben_Payne
1 years ago
Posted

The character is basically based off of Raymond reddington from blacklist but the author just doesn’t understand the character at all.yes they might do terrible things but it’s always for an overarching reason. He wouldn’t just brutally murder a cop for no visible gain