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A phenomenal book though the ending seemed rushed but considering the author's note at the end and the reason he gave for it made sense so it was understandable why It felt that way. The writing starts as good and only gets better the longer you read. A great story all in all.
Besides the rushed ending it was fantastic Although I’m still sad about steve and very curious about dusk and nazgul Overall this was a very good read
The story starts of really well and then just runs of the rails at some point. I think the stories main problem is that the power scaling is done properly. My reasoning for this is that the power eventually reaches a point were it just shouldn't be in the HP world anymore because we no longer have any interaction with the HP characters. That's only really a problem, at some point in the last 100 chapters.
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It's a great story, I didn't expect much because of the title and the system, but once I convinced myself of reading it, I feel it was worth it. The ending was a bit rushed, but the author does explain it in the end. Other than that, I have no complaints about this book.
To be honest, I'm not good at reviews so ill skip that but I must say before I got into "webnovel". I was listening to your story for idk if you include time where I had to wait for uploads on youtube around a year to finish. I felt that the story was really good and game me the feeling of inffine mana where the MC is facing several obstacles and as he passes them encounters more. (If you don't want spoiled of chapters above 610 don't read the following below) The only downside I would say is how fast Zeus was taken out, like in the story MC even before fully entering tier 7(man's wise) he could give Zeus a good fight. But you literally caused Zeus to make the worst decision he could of made by killing naszgul (sry for bad spelling). I would think Zeus could have sensed our MCs connection to her (sry if the gender is wrong it's been close to a month since I listened to the story). But I can understand that Zeus was egotistical causing his intellect to be swayed for those of "mortal" desires like revenge. Overall good story and yes I listened to part of 621. I like to think if the author makes a mistake with the story try to work around it and make that mistake a unique aspect to the story. I mean humans aren't perfect and possibly never will but those mistakes can cause unique personalities to show and I believe you mistakes you mention (even though I didn't see any till around the end) (my opinion) added to the story overall. Good job 👏
I loved the story even though I abandoned it for a while I read it again and I admit it was worth it. (≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)
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by far the best Harry Potter fanfic with a system that I've ever read, the idea of forging/creation is really something that fit the story well. de longe a melhor fanfic de Harry potter com sistema que já li, a ideia de forja/criação é realmente algo que caiu bem na história.
Me encantó la historia la verdad, el desarrollo del protagonista me gustó y todo el lado de la artesanía, si bien al final todo fue un poco apresurado me gustó el cierre finalmente, aunque admito que me hubiese gustado ver más escenas con las amistades de Nick como también el romance de hefesto y Nick siento que en términos de lazos faltaron más escenas propias de ellos, pero en si la historia me atrapó del principio y disfrute viendo como el prota destruyó prácticamente la historia canon de Harry Potter
I enjoyed the story and crafting elements. Like the author said the ending was rushed but it was a unique harry potter fanfic. What I most enjoyed about story was the use of rituals and increase of mana that caused the world to revert back to medieval times with both muggles and wizards fighting against nature and recreating civilization. Thanks to the author for this story.
Decent story, kind of rushed ending to be honest, very few grammar or spelling errors. The story was very thought provoking with interesting ideas and plotlines. Didn't mind the main character becoming overpowered due to the character flaws of Nick. 9/10 would recommend.
good story for most of the story but towards the end it fell in quality because the author didn't know what they wanted to do with it. sentence structure was great, and the main character i think was pretty well fleshed out.
I really enjoyed reading this ff and will definitely check out your other novels 😉
Man, it's weird how everyone treats MC like an adult. After all, he's 11 years old. I don't understand why Dumbledore isn't surprised that a 10-year-old orphan with memory loss suddenly makes rings that can be considered masterpieces.
Tirando o final que reconhecidamente apressado eu achei o livro muito bom e único considerando que é a primeira vez que li alguém sendo um ferreiro de anéis e achei isso bastante criativo em suas diversas ramificações, só achei um pouco triste a falta de desenvolvimento emocional do protagonista que praticamente não mudou em nada Mas tem uma coisa que fiquei curioso, não sei se mudei algum parágrafo sem querer e por isso não vi mas qual foi o final da Luna lovegood ?. O autor deu o desfecho do Harry, Ron, daphine, tracey, e até do steve mas não falou dela
This story is one of the rare stories that I actually come to enjoy as much as I did. While the story was more of an add in to the Potterverse it still held it's own and enhanced it with a reasonable amount of thought. The mc while being fairly op became so overtime and the author didn't just nerf him to extend the story, which is a mistake for many authors as that just destroys the story. Regardless I would definitely recommend people to read this story, I am very critical of stories and even I have very few complaints and enjoyed the story.
From start to finish this is a great book overall and while some things are rushed it was a great book that captured my attention and interest immensely and I enjoyed it very much.
la historia en lo general está increíble un poco diferente pero el final si está un poco flojo
I loved this entire journey thru and thru, if i was able to read the whole thing in less then a week then you know its good! the ending was slightly rushed but not entirely noticable, but even still it was very satisfying to read
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good story I was here since the beginning the story was interesting but as the author said himself power system doesn't fit
Como dijo el autor, comenzo bien pero al final quedo claro que solo estaba alargando las cosas por querer desarrollar bien algo que ya estaba roto. En general, es una buena historia, aunque al final se pierde.
the ending was truly interesting and though it had to end I truly hope you come back to it
Looking forward to the next one ending was meh but still a good story thank you
This was the best story that I have read on this app so far keep up the good work
A phenomenal book though the ending seemed rushed but considering the author's note at the end and the reason he gave for it made sense so it was understandable why It felt that way. The writing starts as good and only gets better the longer you read. A great story all in all.
Besides the rushed ending it was fantastic Although I’m still sad about steve and very curious about dusk and nazgul Overall this was a very good read
The story starts of really well and then just runs of the rails at some point. I think the stories main problem is that the power scaling is done properly. My reasoning for this is that the power eventually reaches a point were it just shouldn't be in the HP world anymore because we no longer have any interaction with the HP characters. That's only really a problem, at some point in the last 100 chapters.
Revelar Spoiler It's a great story, I didn't expect much because of the title and the system, but once I convinced myself of reading it, I feel it was worth it. The ending was a bit rushed, but the author does explain it in the end. Other than that, I have no complaints about this book.
To be honest, I'm not good at reviews so ill skip that but I must say before I got into "webnovel". I was listening to your story for idk if you include time where I had to wait for uploads on youtube around a year to finish. I felt that the story was really good and game me the feeling of inffine mana where the MC is facing several obstacles and as he passes them encounters more. (If you don't want spoiled of chapters above 610 don't read the following below) The only downside I would say is how fast Zeus was taken out, like in the story MC even before fully entering tier 7(man's wise) he could give Zeus a good fight. But you literally caused Zeus to make the worst decision he could of made by killing naszgul (sry for bad spelling). I would think Zeus could have sensed our MCs connection to her (sry if the gender is wrong it's been close to a month since I listened to the story). But I can understand that Zeus was egotistical causing his intellect to be swayed for those of "mortal" desires like revenge. Overall good story and yes I listened to part of 621. I like to think if the author makes a mistake with the story try to work around it and make that mistake a unique aspect to the story. I mean humans aren't perfect and possibly never will but those mistakes can cause unique personalities to show and I believe you mistakes you mention (even though I didn't see any till around the end) (my opinion) added to the story overall. Good job 👏
I loved the story even though I abandoned it for a while I read it again and I admit it was worth it. (≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)(≧▽≦)
Revelar Spoiler by far the best Harry Potter fanfic with a system that I've ever read, the idea of forging/creation is really something that fit the story well. de longe a melhor fanfic de Harry potter com sistema que já li, a ideia de forja/criação é realmente algo que caiu bem na história.
Me encantó la historia la verdad, el desarrollo del protagonista me gustó y todo el lado de la artesanía, si bien al final todo fue un poco apresurado me gustó el cierre finalmente, aunque admito que me hubiese gustado ver más escenas con las amistades de Nick como también el romance de hefesto y Nick siento que en términos de lazos faltaron más escenas propias de ellos, pero en si la historia me atrapó del principio y disfrute viendo como el prota destruyó prácticamente la historia canon de Harry Potter
I enjoyed the story and crafting elements. Like the author said the ending was rushed but it was a unique harry potter fanfic. What I most enjoyed about story was the use of rituals and increase of mana that caused the world to revert back to medieval times with both muggles and wizards fighting against nature and recreating civilization. Thanks to the author for this story.
Decent story, kind of rushed ending to be honest, very few grammar or spelling errors. The story was very thought provoking with interesting ideas and plotlines. Didn't mind the main character becoming overpowered due to the character flaws of Nick. 9/10 would recommend.
good story for most of the story but towards the end it fell in quality because the author didn't know what they wanted to do with it. sentence structure was great, and the main character i think was pretty well fleshed out.
I really enjoyed reading this ff and will definitely check out your other novels 😉
Man, it's weird how everyone treats MC like an adult. After all, he's 11 years old. I don't understand why Dumbledore isn't surprised that a 10-year-old orphan with memory loss suddenly makes rings that can be considered masterpieces.
Tirando o final que reconhecidamente apressado eu achei o livro muito bom e único considerando que é a primeira vez que li alguém sendo um ferreiro de anéis e achei isso bastante criativo em suas diversas ramificações, só achei um pouco triste a falta de desenvolvimento emocional do protagonista que praticamente não mudou em nada Mas tem uma coisa que fiquei curioso, não sei se mudei algum parágrafo sem querer e por isso não vi mas qual foi o final da Luna lovegood ?. O autor deu o desfecho do Harry, Ron, daphine, tracey, e até do steve mas não falou dela
This story is one of the rare stories that I actually come to enjoy as much as I did. While the story was more of an add in to the Potterverse it still held it's own and enhanced it with a reasonable amount of thought. The mc while being fairly op became so overtime and the author didn't just nerf him to extend the story, which is a mistake for many authors as that just destroys the story. Regardless I would definitely recommend people to read this story, I am very critical of stories and even I have very few complaints and enjoyed the story.
From start to finish this is a great book overall and while some things are rushed it was a great book that captured my attention and interest immensely and I enjoyed it very much.
la historia en lo general está increíble un poco diferente pero el final si está un poco flojo
I loved this entire journey thru and thru, if i was able to read the whole thing in less then a week then you know its good! the ending was slightly rushed but not entirely noticable, but even still it was very satisfying to read
Good good, aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa AAA aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
good story I was here since the beginning the story was interesting but as the author said himself power system doesn't fit
Como dijo el autor, comenzo bien pero al final quedo claro que solo estaba alargando las cosas por querer desarrollar bien algo que ya estaba roto. En general, es una buena historia, aunque al final se pierde.
the ending was truly interesting and though it had to end I truly hope you come back to it
Looking forward to the next one ending was meh but still a good story thank you
This was the best story that I have read on this app so far keep up the good work