Deathwatch99999

just because you have the right doesn't mean you don't look stupid posting it nor that you should it's childish and homophobic

Really good job on this story. The few issues I have is that there are some name inconsistencies that could have been easily corrected, some translations that the author said he didn't understand so he didn't complete a few paragraphs, and a couple of times where the timeline jumped forward with no warning and then came back. The constant yet again unending asking for patreon support which is technically a legal gray area that I will never support for fanfiction because it feels like you're gaining money from others work, which is why I put the update stability so low and will now so in the future for my ratings, putting fanfiction chapters behind a paywall if not illegal should be. It's not that I don't respect fanfiction authors I just feel it's kind of scummy to do so. There's also the character getting op a little fast for my taste. Otherwise good job.