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Alright let's see what you have. remember mine is at the start. I'm here to judge lol
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I read and listen to too many fics so my view may be skewed but I gotta say spicy story and I'm lovin' it
There is a Romance tag in the story but there is nothing till the 22 chapter. I don’t know Mc is lamebrain or something. In chapter 19 you can see what i'm saying. overall 2.8★
This is better then any dbz fics I’ve read it’s truly refreshing to see this kid of book being done thank you for yor patience an diligence
hi author can i know if you continue the re:zetman and the other fanfic that i forgot the title ? ahh right the wolf?
CEO, entrepreneurBorn in 1964JeffreyJeffrey BezosCEO, entrepreneurBorn in 1964JeffreyJeffrey BezosCome on, Jeffrey, you can do itPave the way, put your back into itTell us why, show us howLook at where you came from, look at you nowZuckerberg and Gates and BuffettAmateurs can f^^king suck itF^^k their wives, drink their bloodCome on, Jeff, get ’em!
Honestly a great story so far, decent writing, decent plot, I just wish that every female interest would soo being so flawed and tainted.. I know author wants to get our emotions going like he said in certain scenes I just feel that it was a bit far sometimes, especially in the Mar… universe, I’m probably being sensitive but I don’t really like that time of thing which I’m not going to spoil to the viewers.. nevertheless, still a good novel so far. Good Job.
beautiful, sublime The truth is your novel is great, you added that touch that makes one get hooked on the novel. Not everything is rosy bad things happen is part of life, and writing that already makes you better than many writers who only make good things happen to their protagonists and they never experience bad things or ups and downs. full vanilla novels are disgusting, they are too boring, so I thank you for not being like those writers.
It was okey till chapter 20ish then it's just went downhill really fast and it felt like a chore to read this. 57 chapters currently and only the beginning was interesting rest is mid at best. You have to try yourself tho cause it's only my opinion
I just really hope Felicia gets better and that mc chooses her as his romantic partner
biggest complaint? the character he's meh but that's just a small thing compared to posting update chapters then not deleting or condensing artwork/charcter images into an aux chapter to not take up space between chapters.
I love the story and I love how he is taking from other fiction but only stuff that could exist in dragon ball if the world was more fleshed out. I also really hope you don't abandon this fic like a lot of authors do.
Revelar Spoiler
A great story with the main character living up to his Legendary Super Saiyan status.
This some good stuff right here 🗣💯this sh is TUFF, but I won't rate it a perfect 5 stars cuz that's sum GOOD GOOD novel typa stuff, like the actual copy of the hunger games typa sh (I'm feeling like a annoying and a little harsh rater, may change later) high quality book, and author may interact with you since we have had a couple convos, n the author is cool too!really good book, I am recommending, and if you bothered to read this, READ THE BOOK!
This novel is extremely fun to read… especially about the legendary super sayian with a system. hopefully I will get to see more of this lovely fanfic
Revelar Spoiler
a story that does justice to the potential of the legendary ssj and best of all there is no nerf: 8/10............................................................
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its great, recomended to read when you are bored. its also been a long time since someone makes db gamer system fanfic
Alright let's see what you have. remember mine is at the start. I'm here to judge lol
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I read and listen to too many fics so my view may be skewed but I gotta say spicy story and I'm lovin' it
There is a Romance tag in the story but there is nothing till the 22 chapter. I don’t know Mc is lamebrain or something. In chapter 19 you can see what i'm saying. overall 2.8★
This is better then any dbz fics I’ve read it’s truly refreshing to see this kid of book being done thank you for yor patience an diligence
hi author can i know if you continue the re:zetman and the other fanfic that i forgot the title ? ahh right the wolf?
CEO, entrepreneurBorn in 1964JeffreyJeffrey BezosCEO, entrepreneurBorn in 1964JeffreyJeffrey BezosCome on, Jeffrey, you can do itPave the way, put your back into itTell us why, show us howLook at where you came from, look at you nowZuckerberg and Gates and BuffettAmateurs can f^^king suck itF^^k their wives, drink their bloodCome on, Jeff, get ’em!
Honestly a great story so far, decent writing, decent plot, I just wish that every female interest would soo being so flawed and tainted.. I know author wants to get our emotions going like he said in certain scenes I just feel that it was a bit far sometimes, especially in the Mar… universe, I’m probably being sensitive but I don’t really like that time of thing which I’m not going to spoil to the viewers.. nevertheless, still a good novel so far. Good Job.
beautiful, sublime The truth is your novel is great, you added that touch that makes one get hooked on the novel. Not everything is rosy bad things happen is part of life, and writing that already makes you better than many writers who only make good things happen to their protagonists and they never experience bad things or ups and downs. full vanilla novels are disgusting, they are too boring, so I thank you for not being like those writers.
It was okey till chapter 20ish then it's just went downhill really fast and it felt like a chore to read this. 57 chapters currently and only the beginning was interesting rest is mid at best. You have to try yourself tho cause it's only my opinion
I just really hope Felicia gets better and that mc chooses her as his romantic partner
biggest complaint? the character he's meh but that's just a small thing compared to posting update chapters then not deleting or condensing artwork/charcter images into an aux chapter to not take up space between chapters.
I love the story and I love how he is taking from other fiction but only stuff that could exist in dragon ball if the world was more fleshed out. I also really hope you don't abandon this fic like a lot of authors do.
Revelar Spoiler A great story with the main character living up to his Legendary Super Saiyan status.
This some good stuff right here 🗣💯this sh is TUFF, but I won't rate it a perfect 5 stars cuz that's sum GOOD GOOD novel typa stuff, like the actual copy of the hunger games typa sh (I'm feeling like a annoying and a little harsh rater, may change later) high quality book, and author may interact with you since we have had a couple convos, n the author is cool too!really good book, I am recommending, and if you bothered to read this, READ THE BOOK!
This novel is extremely fun to read… especially about the legendary super sayian with a system. hopefully I will get to see more of this lovely fanfic
Revelar Spoiler a story that does justice to the potential of the legendary ssj and best of all there is no nerf: 8/10............................................................
1000000000000000000000000/10...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Because I can..................................... ...................................................... .......................................... .............................. ..................... ............. ...
its great, recomended to read when you are bored. its also been a long time since someone makes db gamer system fanfic
love it can't wait for more chapters. -