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pretty good im exited to see where this goes if im being honest,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
it's going pretty great, and i found your move to make this a AU a great one, since most end up in the trap of doing it in the main universe and then the mc just gets absurdly powerful really quick, this is also happening here but as this is a Alternate Universe and things are different and over all the power scalling is really pumped up he can do whatever he wants as of now in the story to give the mc a challenge while keeping his growth insane and interesting, just wish u could upload more author this stuff is like crack i be checking webnovel three times a day to see if u updated it💀.
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A great story so far, the mc isn't too passive nor is he overly aggressive. He thinks about his future, but he isn't perfect. He's relatable in the choices he makes. He's extremely powerful, but not overly busted. He doesn't abuse what he's got either, all in all, the dude is okay
Love it keep going author I hope you a good year 😂😂🎃😂🌞🎃🌞🌞🌞🎃🌞🎃🌞😂😂🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞😂😂🌞🌞🌞😂🎃😂🌞😂🎃😂😂😂🎃🌞😂😂🎃🌞🌞😂😂😂🎃🎃🎃
way too op by 15 chaps in , there's also no real end goal for MC, been just a power grind. everyone besides MC doesn't get much of a description
pretty good im exited to see where this goes if im being honest,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
it's going pretty great, and i found your move to make this a AU a great one, since most end up in the trap of doing it in the main universe and then the mc just gets absurdly powerful really quick, this is also happening here but as this is a Alternate Universe and things are different and over all the power scalling is really pumped up he can do whatever he wants as of now in the story to give the mc a challenge while keeping his growth insane and interesting, just wish u could upload more author this stuff is like crack i be checking webnovel three times a day to see if u updated it💀.
Revelar Spoiler A great story so far, the mc isn't too passive nor is he overly aggressive. He thinks about his future, but he isn't perfect. He's relatable in the choices he makes. He's extremely powerful, but not overly busted. He doesn't abuse what he's got either, all in all, the dude is okay
Love it keep going author I hope you a good year 😂😂🎃😂🌞🎃🌞🌞🌞🎃🌞🎃🌞😂😂🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞😂😂🌞🌞🌞😂🎃😂🌞😂🎃😂😂😂🎃🌞😂😂🎃🌞🌞😂😂😂🎃🎃🎃
way too op by 15 chaps in , there's also no real end goal for MC, been just a power grind. everyone besides MC doesn't get much of a description