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- Qualidade de Escrita
- Estabilidade das atualizações
- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
- Antecedentes do mundo
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*Incoming wall of text* This story is a perfect example of how all villainous MC stories should be constructed. It elaborates wonderfully on how most people are not born evil, but end up transforming into it, and the shades of gray a villain may be subjected to, initially rejecting the deepest darkest parts of themselves, but eventually accepting them. I also really enjoyed the first interactions of the MC and the first FL (this is a harem, right?), especially the twisted version of the marriage contract, which was superbly written. The abilities, system and skills were also very entertaining, apparently being inspired by Dungeons & Dragons (unless I'm just a gigantic nerd and I'm reading too much into it), though I would've liked it better if they were revealed slowly over time, and not dumped immediately on the readers to sort it out for themselves. A glossary chapter with a compilation of the skills, etc would also be convenient. The only complaint I have is that the story seems to be a little all over the place at times, with the MC's backstory and his reincarnation's backstory. But, it is a little early to tell, with just 13 chapters to go with. The update stability is also pretty decent, but too soon to tell as well. In summary, good job author! Keep on it! P.S.- Please don't ruin the story with a bad harem, I'm begging you. But the author seems to have a very good grasp of romance (in my opinion) so I'll have faith.
well.. the novel is not what we were promised to see, the mc is anything but a psychopath .-. the novel is pretty good tho, except if you ignore the fact that he is caring and kind not a lot but its there... how disappointing for me 😨 he is even a virgin shy kid, you know the ones with the simp type personality definitely not a chad..
*Incoming wall of text* This story is a perfect example of how all villainous MC stories should be constructed. It elaborates wonderfully on how most people are not born evil, but end up transforming into it, and the shades of gray a villain may be subjected to, initially rejecting the deepest darkest parts of themselves, but eventually accepting them. I also really enjoyed the first interactions of the MC and the first FL (this is a harem, right?), especially the twisted version of the marriage contract, which was superbly written. The abilities, system and skills were also very entertaining, apparently being inspired by Dungeons & Dragons (unless I'm just a gigantic nerd and I'm reading too much into it), though I would've liked it better if they were revealed slowly over time, and not dumped immediately on the readers to sort it out for themselves. A glossary chapter with a compilation of the skills, etc would also be convenient. The only complaint I have is that the story seems to be a little all over the place at times, with the MC's backstory and his reincarnation's backstory. But, it is a little early to tell, with just 13 chapters to go with. The update stability is also pretty decent, but too soon to tell as well. In summary, good job author! Keep on it! P.S.- Please don't ruin the story with a bad harem, I'm begging you. But the author seems to have a very good grasp of romance (in my opinion) so I'll have faith.
well.. the novel is not what we were promised to see, the mc is anything but a psychopath .-. the novel is pretty good tho, except if you ignore the fact that he is caring and kind not a lot but its there... how disappointing for me 😨 he is even a virgin shy kid, you know the ones with the simp type personality definitely not a chad..