Tama_Kun

Tama_Kun

male LV 3

New Novelist

2022-12-11 Unido Indonesia
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Emblemas 6

Moments 183
Tama_Kun
Tama_Kun
1 years ago
Commented

Ethan.... I think all author in WN run out of name for male MC. almost every novel I opened, and I find Ethan 😂

Tama_Kun
Tama_Kun
1 years ago
Posted

For me this story is so good, the description , plot, mc and etc

Tama_Kun
Tama_Kun
1 years ago
Posted

I see that your skill already improve bro, but I suggest you to improve your skill for making dialogue

Tama_Kun
Tama_Kun
1 years ago
Commented

people dislike if you make the dialogue like that, don't ever use : but just use "ABC"Samuel claps shania's shoulder and greets him "Hey bro" then he continue "Wanna take a lunch together"Shania looks at Samuel's smiles and it make his heart beating so fast "s-sure" he replied.

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Tama_Kun
Tama_Kun
1 years ago
Commented

too long for one paragraph, make one paragraph consist only 3-5 sentances

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Tama_Kun
Tama_Kun
1 years ago
Replied to Dale_Ostrander4

thanks for your comment, I hope you enjoy the story

On my way to the adventure guild, I met my childhood friend, Zelta. She lived near my house and had the same fate as me; we had both lost our parents. Zelta had long, straight, silver hair, silver eyes, white skin, and a slim body. She was beautiful to me, and I wanted to protect her smile.

The World that I Wish

The World that I Wish

Fantasy · Tama_Kun

Tama_Kun
Tama_Kun
1 years ago
Commented

good concept . I do love the way you make Phoenix as the concept

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Tama_Kun
Tama_Kun
1 years ago
Replied to DaoistZoid

well, Al himself only love zelta, but he don't have enough braveness to confess. In other side, Zelta always give him a signal that she love Al, but Al never realized it. What will happen in the future? will Al realize that Zelta loves him? Let's enjoy the story

Tama_Kun
Tama_Kun
1 years ago
Replied to DaoistZoid

Thank you for reading. I do understand that the early chapter is not enough good because I still newbie in that time. I hope you can still enjoy the story.

Tama_Kun
  • The World that I Wish original

    The World that I Wish

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE R18 WEAKTOSTRONG

    4.55

    In the sprawling Oak Kingdom, a young orphan boy named Al yearns for a life beyond the shadows of poverty and despair. The tragic loss of his parents has burdened him with the responsibility of caring for his younger siblings, and his determination to provide them with a better future burns fiercely within his heart. But Al's path to a brighter tomorrow is fraught with peril. The nefarious Bandit Organization, led by the notorious and enigmatic Bandit King, casts a dark cloud over the land. Their iron grip tightens with each passing day, terrorizing innocent citizens and leaving destruction in their wake. Al knows that if he is to protect his loved ones and fulfill his lofty aspirations, he must face this formidable threat head-on. Armed with nothing but his unwavering resolve and an unyielding spirit, Al embarks on an extraordinary journey of self-discovery and transformation. Along the way, he encounters allies and adversaries alike, each with their own unique powers and motivations. With danger lurking around every corner, Al's quest to become the ultimate adventurer becomes a thrilling race against time. His encounters with mythical creatures, ancient relics, and long-lost secrets push him to his limits, testing his courage and resilience in ways he never thought possible. As the fate of Oak Kingdom hangs in the balance, Al's actions will determine not only his own destiny but also the destiny of those he holds dear. Prepare to be enthralled by a world brimming with enchantment, danger, and unforgettable characters. Join Al on an unforgettable adventure that will ignite your imagination and leave you yearning for more. Will he rise above his humble origins and forge a future that defies all odds? Only time will tell as Al's remarkable odyssey unfolds, capturing the hearts of readers and etching his name in the annals of legend.

    134 Chs 450 Coleções