Elemental Tear

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DubiousTone

Apologies for the shameless 5-star review, but I just had to express how much I loved this book. If you have any questions about the characters or plot, please feel free to ask! I'm happy to discuss.

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Spardac

I'm really excited about the development of this fantasy novel! I've only read the first three chapters, but already I'm hooked. The world the author has created is amazing, full of magic and adventure. The characters are really interesting, and the story is full of surprises. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters and find out what happens next. Bookmarked and eagerly anticipating the release of more chapters.

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hampat

This story is intriguing, with a unique take on the classic medieval fantasy genre. The concept of monstrous creatures called "teras" attacking humanity is a great hook, and the introduction of four heroes with elemental powers adds an exciting layer to the story. The focus on Alex, the heir to the power of fire, as the protagonist is a good choice to ground the narrative and give readers a character to invest in. The idea of Alex going on a journey to uncover the truth behind the teras' appearance is a classic hero's journey, and the potential for character growth and development is high. Must read!

This fantasy novel has a great start with vivid world-building and a captivating plot. The descriptive language brings the fantastical realm to life and leaves readers eager to learn more. A promising start to what could be an exciting new series.

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Kutchilola

Just finished the 3rd chapter and im already liking the story! Keep going [img=update][img=update]

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Niggimasama

I just finished reading the latest chapter of this novel and I am amazed by the quality of the writing. keep going!!!! I highly recommend this novel to anyone looking for a well-written and engaging story that will leave you wanting more. Keep up the amazing work, author!![img=recommend]

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Satwo

That was really good i hope you continue this amazing work i just finished at chapter 10 its really well written.

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MartinsEmmanuel

Very great novel I really enjoyed your novel and wish that you could write more. Also do well to include more interesting characters in order to lighten your novel. Anyways its a really great project.

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normanletus

i'm really excited to see where this story goes! The plot and characters have already captured my attention, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue writing!!!

Amazing storyline 🤩 Good grammar 👍 Pacing is on point 👌 Description is pretty short and still quite informative . Wonderful story author , your book is just wow and awesome please update more regularly!

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onedaysomedayy

Elemental Tear is unique, showcasing a medieval fantasy-like world with mages, teras (brilliant creativity), and selected elemental-wielding heirs. The story follows the mc, Alex, who is discovered by the Church due to his fire abilities detected by the Orb. I'm usually not a fan of 3rd POV, but author delivered the narrative perfectly without repeating the same phrases etc. Keep up the good work!!

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femme_fatale

The chapters were so well written! I was really immersed in it. The way you write is very special. There wasn't any long description of the world and I clearly liked it. The plot also seems promising too.

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The_Mad_Titan

This is a fantastic novel with a captivating plot and nice world-building. The author's use of descriptive language is one to behold, making it easy to vividly imagine each scene as you read through. A must-read for lovers of medieval fantasy. Keep up the good work!

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HandsomeWriter

Fantasy with post-apocalyptic elements. The writing quality is excellent, scenes are described with just enough words to allow you to clearly picture them but not so much that it feels padded or long-winded. Paragraphs tend to be on the chunkier side but are simple enough to be read without any difficulty. The setting is quickly introduced, and though there is a somewhat large chunk of exposition in the 3rd chapter it is not overwhelming and answers questions that naturally pop up in the readers head in the earlier chapters. Characters don't yet feel very distinct in tone as of chapter 5, but there's been so much emphasis on fleshing out the world that I don't think it could have fit. Overall, excellent read. Good job by the author!

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LizMi

This is pretty good, hope too see more of Alex story....❤️❤️

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redlady

I can tell just from the first chapter that the plot is well put together and the descriptions are spot on.It is really catchy !I felt like I was next to Alex at some point . You have talent !

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summer_cicada

It is very well-written and the characters are portrayed very well. I personally see story progressing really well and the improvement with each and every chapter! Recommended for everyone <3

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Twitchy_

Alright everybody, welcome to one of the best stories on Webnovel. This novel is amazing, the way that the author perfectly constructs a world he doesn't over-explain, creating Alex, a 12-year-old boy who is a REALISTIC child, one with fears and one with talents, it's all perfectly constructed. I'm sure you're reading these reviews to find out if this is the right novel for you. Trust me, if you're looking for quality, you found it. I have five books in my collections, and this is now one of them. Excellent job.

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BlueJeans

The book is really good. It's unique although it might have similar premise as other with the 4 major element, fire, air, water, and earth. The writing is so good and the description for each character appearance are so detail. You could actually imagine how they might look like. I want to ask the author, how many chapter do you think your book would have as it mark as complete book? In my opinion, this book could get pass 700+ since there are a lot content and event that could be added into the story. It would even better if the world building of the story will also develop well. As for romance, I think I saw the book have romance tag. In this type of story, tbh I don't really enjoy much if the romance appear early. I haven't seen the romance yet. I just hope the mc will get the best girl. You know what I mean right, author.

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Flattened_Rice_007

It is a good story. The author's writing is good and very descriptive. The world he asks to embark on with him is a good one too. It is a slow-paced novel, that familiarises the readers with the surroundings of the story too well. Keep up the good work author.