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The story at the beginning was good .. But now it's really crazy .. Admiros, Mariam, Dana, Sandra and many more crazy characters .. Just don't stop at it
There are little grammatical errors but it doesn't disrupt the flow of the story. This is a book with potential
The story is good and this time someone put some effort in the grammar ...still egyptian hijinks isn't for me
The king is awake!! I like this, the way things are unraveling smoothly. Apart for the little grammar issues, this is a pleasant read.
Nyho ... any way hi guys iam the author if you have any questions iam here ... Something like who is the main hero...well it will show up a little late .. The story is historical and insanely fascinating. Just don't judge it from the start
I've read the first chapters...what can I say? Although there are some errors in translation sometimes, but that did not prevent me from enjoying, do not fall, continue please
The story is great, got me hooked. I am looking for more chapters. This book is something to look forward too and I am glad I saw it and will continue reading.
Wonderful story that takes place in an unusual setting. Definitely a breath of fresh air for all those who like to read adventures. Nicely done, Author!
It begins really well with very good writing. It was very interesting and rather different than many other webnovels. I recommend this novel.
The story if I were in power, should be atleast adapted to a serie. You put up a lot of imagination in a rather simple way. if you can, use grammarly and google docs.
the synopsis got me hooked and looking forward to the story before i even started!!
The story at the beginning was good .. But now it's really crazy .. Admiros, Mariam, Dana, Sandra and many more crazy characters .. Just don't stop at it
There are little grammatical errors but it doesn't disrupt the flow of the story. This is a book with potential
The story is good and this time someone put some effort in the grammar ...still egyptian hijinks isn't for me
The king is awake!! I like this, the way things are unraveling smoothly. Apart for the little grammar issues, this is a pleasant read.
Nyho ... any way hi guys iam the author if you have any questions iam here ... Something like who is the main hero...well it will show up a little late .. The story is historical and insanely fascinating. Just don't judge it from the start
I've read the first chapters...what can I say? Although there are some errors in translation sometimes, but that did not prevent me from enjoying, do not fall, continue please
The story is great, got me hooked. I am looking for more chapters. This book is something to look forward too and I am glad I saw it and will continue reading.
Wonderful story that takes place in an unusual setting. Definitely a breath of fresh air for all those who like to read adventures. Nicely done, Author!
It begins really well with very good writing. It was very interesting and rather different than many other webnovels. I recommend this novel.
The story if I were in power, should be atleast adapted to a serie. You put up a lot of imagination in a rather simple way. if you can, use grammarly and google docs.
the synopsis got me hooked and looking forward to the story before i even started!!
great i loved this book . the story has a good plot🥰🥰🥰