See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle
You must be late -or - You’re late You’re must be late needs to be changed.
"H–how did you know this is my ro–room? You're must be la–late for your next class too!" She's afraid to look at his cold, blue eyes.
Teen · Maryixxx
You tell her Seb!!! Get it!
"Come with me! Haters can't hurt you now." Seb told her.
Teen · Maryixxx
I wish you would have described how they know each other. She calls him a nickname but why? It would improve the immersion of the book if you had a paragraph or two in the first or second chapter about their history.
"Y–you... you won! I can't believe it, Seb!"
Teen · Maryixxx
Yay!! I LOVE red hair. I’m glad she has beautiful red hair!
Halora grabbed the black bag from her side and walked towards the exit. She tried to cover herself with her long, ginger red hair.
Teen · Maryixxx
Mine would be too, Halora!
Halora couldn't still believe that Sebastian Woo saved and protected her from Sandra. She never felt this way before, but her soul was on cloud nine.
Teen · Maryixxx
"Everyone, from this day, no one shall bully nor hurt her. But if you will do, I have no choice but to give you a lesson!" Sebastian Woo told the crowd coldly and furiously.
Teen · Maryixxx
even when* the entire school
He cut her off and said, "On this day, I will be your knight shining armor! I will always be at your back even the entire school hates you,"
Teen · Maryixxx
in shining armor*
He cut her off and said, "On this day, I will be your knight shining armor! I will always be at your back even the entire school hates you,"
Teen · Maryixxx
Thank you so much Peter! It’s almost complete too :)
Banishment
Fantasy · Dehni_Olsen