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¿El autor reescribio todo el FF o solo algunos capítulos en especifico??? Porque recuerdo haberlo dejado por el capítulo donde el y eriri hacen un complot para que el MC pueda obtener a otra waifu, no se si el autor me pueda recordar cuales son más o menos esos capítulos
Absolute love it Can anyone recommend me any with similiar MC(a short and cute protagonist, but cunning and manipulative one with big PP)?
good character development, I like how the car or writer has investigated the tricks or traps that the protagonists of h use in the fanfic and is structuring the story so that the plot does not feel so forced in both ways, both with public weigh-ins as in his r 18 or intimate moments, thank you for this work author
Its Great..... I wat to see the love is war heroine's..... . . Great writing... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...............................................................
It was a good read, very balanced elements (plot, narration, development of relationships, pseudo-world-building), average level author I would classify, as simple as the story is, it is also very coherent (at least in the universe in question) , which increases immersion and makes the adventure more vivid. There are things I could point out, but I like to evaluate the author according to his level of writing/narration (beginner-medium-advanced) and as an average author (in this story) there are few things I can say that I found bad, simple, coherent (simple), decent development (for medium level), well if I had to point out something it would be the mc's ability, I wanted to know its limitations which are a little vague and besides that the author would like you to think about the future of the mc , if MC's game blows up he would need a company to deal with it... anyway the author delivered what he promised and I liked that. I'll take a break to accumulate chapters, thanks for the story.
Very good novel with slow pace story line just don't drop it. or be ready for Heavenly warth[img=recommend]
Good 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿dios mio 140 letras para publicar algo
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Una historia bastante interesante y llegue hasta el final actualizable. Aunque hay unos lugares incómodos (Que son pocos) No es algo que haga mala la historia porque simplemente son tan pequeños que no importa realmente. Lo que me dejo amargo la boca fue la trama de Chantaje en los primeros capítulos. Pero después me di cuenta que en realidad era bastante necesario para formar el harem y realmente el autor lo penso bastante. Ya que en realidad el MC no tiene muchas cualidades necesarias aparte de su belleza casi femenina (que detesto) y su alto grado de aprendizaje y el hecho de que es un reencarnado alivia mucho. Hay muchas personas que se quejan del NTR, pero nunca vi algo que realmente se considere NTR en mi opinión. (Hay que saber que he visto lo peor de lo peor, lo más bajo de NTR que incluso te hace llorar, amar, odiar al autor. Ese autor nisiquiera tiene piedad de sus lectores. Por ejemplo En la novela dicen que hay NTR pero lo que yo experimente puede ser a lo mucho simplemente pensamientos un poco enamorados a otra persona de su interes, "la chica guapa, tetona que va cruzando la calle" hay que decir que eso es lo que puedo argumentar y es bastante acertado.
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it not a real transmigration why would you put that as the tag. the original body/person just got someone memories.
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I already re-read this novel Five times and i can only say that this novel is very good. the lines in the story are neat and readable. The characters in the story are special and each has a unique character. The story is engaging and so much fun to read, you can't help but wait for the next chapter. When I read the announcement that the author will discontinue the novel, I became very sad and a little angry, after all there are few novels that are as good as this one. Fortunately lady luck blessed me when i finally saw the heavenly words that the author will start continuing the story I became ecstatic and happy at the news. So I will start supporting this story again and put two out of the three stones I have every day. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This fanfic needs more warning (tags) in the synopsis, because there are some people who don't tolerate MC keeping all the wifus and leaving the original main character with traumas. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Pretty good but I feel like a system even if it didn’t do much would had been good… even if it just said his skill and slightly helped improve his body it would have been fine
Me gusto mucho tu historia, la trama aunque un poco lenta, tiene un buen ritmo, a mi parecer el autor hizo bien en llevar el ritmo de la historia de esa manera. Me gusto que la primera heroína fuera Eriri, y ojalá no la vaya a descuidar por andar con otras. También sería interesante ver una escena en la que el sexo entre Kouta y Eriri fuera más vanilla al punto de volverla totalmente adicta al MC. En cuanto a las demás heroínas, sinceramente es cuestión de gustos, aparte de Eriri, solo Sakura y Utaha me gustan, el resto era como un "Meh". Autor! Vi por ahí que iino Miko(kaguya) estaba en la lista! Agregala al Harem pls!!
No has pensado agregar clannad a la historia de anime ????????????🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
................................................. Good.......................,...............o.o.o.o.oo.o.o.o.o.o.o.oo.o.o.o.oo.o.o.o.o.o.oo.o.o.o.o.oo.o.o.o.o.o
The plot is good, but bro, it's not possible that in 70 chapters it only has 2 heroines, the author is obsessed with Eriri and keeps putting in so many chapters of her and the mc that it became boring.
This is my cup of tea. Story so good I read 50 chapters in one day. MC is manipulative. The girls are gullible but not easy. MC have to work hard to get them to fall. But it's so satisfying when they do fall for MC. A few typos here and there but not that bad..
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¿El autor reescribio todo el FF o solo algunos capítulos en especifico??? Porque recuerdo haberlo dejado por el capítulo donde el y eriri hacen un complot para que el MC pueda obtener a otra waifu, no se si el autor me pueda recordar cuales son más o menos esos capítulos
Absolute love it Can anyone recommend me any with similiar MC(a short and cute protagonist, but cunning and manipulative one with big PP)?
good character development, I like how the car or writer has investigated the tricks or traps that the protagonists of h use in the fanfic and is structuring the story so that the plot does not feel so forced in both ways, both with public weigh-ins as in his r 18 or intimate moments, thank you for this work author
Its Great..... I wat to see the love is war heroine's..... . . Great writing... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...............................................................
It was a good read, very balanced elements (plot, narration, development of relationships, pseudo-world-building), average level author I would classify, as simple as the story is, it is also very coherent (at least in the universe in question) , which increases immersion and makes the adventure more vivid. There are things I could point out, but I like to evaluate the author according to his level of writing/narration (beginner-medium-advanced) and as an average author (in this story) there are few things I can say that I found bad, simple, coherent (simple), decent development (for medium level), well if I had to point out something it would be the mc's ability, I wanted to know its limitations which are a little vague and besides that the author would like you to think about the future of the mc , if MC's game blows up he would need a company to deal with it... anyway the author delivered what he promised and I liked that. I'll take a break to accumulate chapters, thanks for the story.
Very good novel with slow pace story line just don't drop it. or be ready for Heavenly warth[img=recommend]
Good 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝☝🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿dios mio 140 letras para publicar algo
Revelar Spoiler Una historia bastante interesante y llegue hasta el final actualizable. Aunque hay unos lugares incómodos (Que son pocos) No es algo que haga mala la historia porque simplemente son tan pequeños que no importa realmente. Lo que me dejo amargo la boca fue la trama de Chantaje en los primeros capítulos. Pero después me di cuenta que en realidad era bastante necesario para formar el harem y realmente el autor lo penso bastante. Ya que en realidad el MC no tiene muchas cualidades necesarias aparte de su belleza casi femenina (que detesto) y su alto grado de aprendizaje y el hecho de que es un reencarnado alivia mucho. Hay muchas personas que se quejan del NTR, pero nunca vi algo que realmente se considere NTR en mi opinión. (Hay que saber que he visto lo peor de lo peor, lo más bajo de NTR que incluso te hace llorar, amar, odiar al autor. Ese autor nisiquiera tiene piedad de sus lectores. Por ejemplo En la novela dicen que hay NTR pero lo que yo experimente puede ser a lo mucho simplemente pensamientos un poco enamorados a otra persona de su interes, "la chica guapa, tetona que va cruzando la calle" hay que decir que eso es lo que puedo argumentar y es bastante acertado.
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it not a real transmigration why would you put that as the tag. the original body/person just got someone memories.
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I already re-read this novel Five times and i can only say that this novel is very good. the lines in the story are neat and readable. The characters in the story are special and each has a unique character. The story is engaging and so much fun to read, you can't help but wait for the next chapter. When I read the announcement that the author will discontinue the novel, I became very sad and a little angry, after all there are few novels that are as good as this one. Fortunately lady luck blessed me when i finally saw the heavenly words that the author will start continuing the story I became ecstatic and happy at the news. So I will start supporting this story again and put two out of the three stones I have every day. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This fanfic needs more warning (tags) in the synopsis, because there are some people who don't tolerate MC keeping all the wifus and leaving the original main character with traumas. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Demasiado buena, si tienes tiempo léela es entretenida......................................... ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Pretty good but I feel like a system even if it didn’t do much would had been good… even if it just said his skill and slightly helped improve his body it would have been fine
Me gusto mucho tu historia, la trama aunque un poco lenta, tiene un buen ritmo, a mi parecer el autor hizo bien en llevar el ritmo de la historia de esa manera. Me gusto que la primera heroína fuera Eriri, y ojalá no la vaya a descuidar por andar con otras. También sería interesante ver una escena en la que el sexo entre Kouta y Eriri fuera más vanilla al punto de volverla totalmente adicta al MC. En cuanto a las demás heroínas, sinceramente es cuestión de gustos, aparte de Eriri, solo Sakura y Utaha me gustan, el resto era como un "Meh". Autor! Vi por ahí que iino Miko(kaguya) estaba en la lista! Agregala al Harem pls!!
No has pensado agregar clannad a la historia de anime ????????????🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
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The plot is good, but bro, it's not possible that in 70 chapters it only has 2 heroines, the author is obsessed with Eriri and keeps putting in so many chapters of her and the mc that it became boring.
This is my cup of tea. Story so good I read 50 chapters in one day. MC is manipulative. The girls are gullible but not easy. MC have to work hard to get them to fall. But it's so satisfying when they do fall for MC. A few typos here and there but not that bad..
Stealing heroines proceeds to show Astolfo💀