AS DARKSEID IN MARVEL (OMNIVERSE)

LV 5

ScottyTheD

The people praising this are doing the author a disservice, you need to improve your grammar and spelling. Basic words are spelled wrong and incorrect words are used constantly. The idea for this story is really interesting, but ultimately the writing makes it a chore to read and not worth the headache.

LV 12

Red_Roman

Author-san, you really need to work on your grammar. I would understand if the first few chapters of your first fanfic was infested with horrible grammatical errors...but it is inexcusable for your more recent fanfics to still have this level of grammar. I'm sure you've heard this before but clearly nothing has changed. It probably doesn't matter to you, but know that today you lost a fan because you couldn't be bothered to form coherent sentences for your stories.

LV 2

Ankit_Sharma_9423

Pretty amazing work man it's hard to believe you are the same author that created the Zeus one's starting chapters love it 👏👏👏💗💗💗💗💗💗🫡🫡❤️❤️❤️😺😺

LV 4

FattyFang

Seeing Darksied immediately had me wanting to read this but wow this is like reading a machine translated novel or worse hope the author improves the quality to make it readable

LV 2

SomethingMalefic

grammar is absolutely atrocious. words are completely wrong. for example using the word description instead of destruction ect... barley any punctuation. no commas. sentence structure is abysmal.

LV 5

GodOfGreedAs

My Own refine and batter work hope you will like It I think it's pretty good but if find some problems with it please comment on it but don't give about how bad my English is

LV 14

Younggod01

This is One of the worst i Have had the displeasure of reading The grammer and spelling is horrible the use of phrases and simple words to form a bigger meaning is bad. To be honest most of the Paragraphs lost substantial value After a Few words it is that bad i can go on for a page at least but i will stop here and leave this parting Review. Needs A rewrite and a course on how to Write

LV 3

Kung_Munk

The idea was pretty cool and thiswould’ve been such a good read if you actually pulled it off. There’ s A LOT of grammar mistakes and like another reviewer said, ”it feels like it’s MTL.” which I agree with 💯 I sincerely hope the author improves his grammar and his overall level of English since then I feel like he would be able to beautifully write down his ideas and his concepts Best of luck and I sincerely wish for the best 🤞 -Monkey

LV 15

Bearagamo

The story has a great concept however the grammer is terrible it makes it very hard to follow along with the story and the plot

LV 13

Ashinydecapod

The sentence construction is really bad. I would have been ok if its just the grammar as long as its readable. I mean I've been use to reading machine translated novel for a while now and personally English is like my 3rd language so its abit understandable why the paragraphs are like that. But this is just terrible. I could see the authors love and drive as they wrote this. You could see how he likes the characters and has deep knowledge of each characters personality and such. Its the only thing that is keeping me from dropping this and ofcourse our lord savior Darkseid. But you have to admit grammar, sentence construction. How each characters conversation goes is really bad. I would suggest you get a proof reader or use grammarly or ask anyone from your discord to help you with the fanfic you are writing.

LV 11

Knoxuz

Not much chapter for the moments but seems an interesting fanfic. But I find this Darkseid speak a bit to much ^^ For me Darkseid just stay with his hands in the back + Omega Beams = End of the Fight XD

LV 14

Aye_itz_cloudz

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LV 12

TyrantTron335

Will you continue this novel. where Darkseid is MC. good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 2

Ankit_Sharma_4559

All hail lord Darkseid our ruler Amazing work author this was awesome 👍 much more refined than any of your starting chapters awesome 👍 ❤️❤️❤️💗💗💗👏👏👏👏👏👏

LV 3

ButtNakedMan

I can't read through all of the chapters, I don't have any more brain cells to lose. The grammar and writing quality is bad, incorrect tense used, typos, and the worst of all is NO COMMAS. Huge Paragraph with no commas, it makes it uncomfortable and harder to read because you don't know when a sentence ends and when a new one starts. I thought writing 3 other books will surely improve your writing but I guess not

LV 4

trueidiocy_577

grammarly pls I almost got cancer reading this

LV 4

JUSTEXP

grammar was atrocious, please get an editor

LV 13

ASWANG

Man this novel is CLAPPED, the grammar really needs to be improve. I can not immerse myself to the story because of how difficult it is to understand the sentences. I've read your Zeus novel I'm only at chapter 21 and its getting to taxing to read further because of how awful it is. I hope you don't get offended by this, my opinion on this novel might change so if it improves I will right another review!

LV 1

Tarun_Sharma_9611

Amazing work man love your style awesome I say I love it just after reading the first chapter love you author SAMA cant wait for more [img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=coins][img=update][img=recommend]