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only at ch10 so far but i don't see what the fuss is about. i mean, it has the nonhuman tag so.........
I Would have been fine with nonhuman if they were at least some kind of vamp,werewolf or something but a full on monster the whole time just creeps me out. Nope! Huge pass
I herey you to tell me whats going on in the forum as I don't have any acces dor the following 5 days. Seriously, boi. Also, even though i'm not a fan of HP, at least you fanfic too. Thats enough to satisfy me.
Возник вопрос: ГГ - это монстр навсегда? Язык написания хорош. Но вот ГГ - нелюдь ... Жаль, а все так хорошо начиналось. Автор, не бросай писательскую деятельность. У тебя хорошо получается, но ... Всегда есть но. Очень оригинально - не значит интересно. Сложно с таким ГГ добиться фанатов.
Wonderful story, truly unique in the sea of HP reincarnation style fanfics. I wish I had found it sooner, though now I can binge more so no complaints.
The one thing that mattes the most of a nonhuman fanfic/story is keeping the mc nonhuman. Ya see, changing your mc into looking like or being human-like is the bane of any good nonhuman novel. We didn’t come her to find a human, we didn’t come her to find a half-nonhuman, the one thing we came for and was assured of in the synopsis is the nonhuman part. Now that you know why your readers bothered to open the novel, we get to the reason this novel is terrible. Mind you this could be the most well written novel in all of history but it’d still be trash. You turn your mc human-ish and remove the part and staple point for the creature you based it off. He’s no longer an enderman, he’s just a transformed human. You didn’t give the viewers a good reason to stay. You remove the looks, remove the preset expectation, and then you moved on. You said enderman and you removed the enderman. I know you’re gonna look at this and wonder why I’m not reviewing the rest of the story but honestly this one point completely overshadows any other complaint. You can’t create a novel about let’s say a dragon, then remove the dragon and move on with the novel. That’s not how stories work. Now I don’t like harem novels at all, think they’re about as useless as the people who read it(completely background side-characters) but I’d rather read that abomination of a disease that plagues webnovel than read this. This is like those gta 5 YouTubers who say “like and sun for a giveaway” but never give the stuff away, you said enderman in the synopsis but 20ish chapters in he’s no longer enderman. He doesn’t have the iconic look of an enderman and he removed the main standing point that Minecraft gave that species. Just write a normal HP fanfic and don’t label it as something you never follow through on. 5 -> 3 -> 1 -> 1 -> 3 on the ratings bottom to top
Sucks imagine Minecraft using their sticks to do their magic spells and doing romance with humans lol , but it's not my taste. Only for 5 to 8 yr like they write on Minecraft box .
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I want to ask about a novel for those who know it? It's about someone reincarnated as a brother to Harry Potter. And he must not change canon.
Hey Russian! I've been a fan since your Alchemist fic, which you dropped... Oh, and your ATLA fic! Which you dropped... Both great ideas and executions that I really wish you finished, just like this one. Please don't drop? MC is an Enderman, as you may have realized. Russian is good at combining story elements of two different IP through an MC with a foreign power, and he does the same here. I thought adding minecraft would be clunky and childish here but he pulls it off with the proper humor and gravity. He doesn't feel like an Enderman here but like a real HP creature with real consequences. The mystique he claims as a Hogwarts student few people have the right to actually see is a cool dynamic I've never seen before, and his magic is unlike anything a student can do, or has to deal with. Overall, This story deserves no less than four stars for any reason so far and anyone who tries to rate the story less is probably whining about something that doesn't matter.
this is a magnificent work by a master of words. it has a beautiful charm of it's own and I'd say it worthwhile to lost yourself in the story that the author weaved for us. p/s: dear author, please do update the story until the end.
This has been the work that recently has me the most excited to follow. The intersection of Minecraft and Harry Potter is something I personally had never seen before, and I've been enjoying watching it. Of course, I would love to see more silly and fun interactions with other characters, but I'm not sure if they would fit well with the narrative. In summary, it's a work unlike anything I've seen before, and I've been enjoying how it has been unfolding.Não sou bom com inglês, me perdoem pelos erros <3
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haven't read it yet but finally a good novel with a clearly non human mc, no human transformation, no hidden form, just a monstrous guy in hogwarts[img=recommend]
If you're expecting a human wizard SI with Enderman themed powers, look elsewhere, because THIS guy, described in-universe as looking like a dementor without a cloak, is going to attend Hogwarts despite being walking nightmare fuel. I would've thought wizards would be more likely to harvest him for potions ingredients than give him a wand, but apparently not.
Nro tjis is on the level of enderman in SDS and this must become a multiverse one so it wont end fast
I just realized there's a R18 tag on this book now I'm imaging a enderman molesting blocks. What have you done to my mind author why must it be such a vivid image
I love it. Enderman ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
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only at ch10 so far but i don't see what the fuss is about. i mean, it has the nonhuman tag so.........
I Would have been fine with nonhuman if they were at least some kind of vamp,werewolf or something but a full on monster the whole time just creeps me out. Nope! Huge pass
I herey you to tell me whats going on in the forum as I don't have any acces dor the following 5 days. Seriously, boi. Also, even though i'm not a fan of HP, at least you fanfic too. Thats enough to satisfy me.
Возник вопрос: ГГ - это монстр навсегда? Язык написания хорош. Но вот ГГ - нелюдь ... Жаль, а все так хорошо начиналось. Автор, не бросай писательскую деятельность. У тебя хорошо получается, но ... Всегда есть но. Очень оригинально - не значит интересно. Сложно с таким ГГ добиться фанатов.
Wonderful story, truly unique in the sea of HP reincarnation style fanfics. I wish I had found it sooner, though now I can binge more so no complaints.
The one thing that mattes the most of a nonhuman fanfic/story is keeping the mc nonhuman. Ya see, changing your mc into looking like or being human-like is the bane of any good nonhuman novel. We didn’t come her to find a human, we didn’t come her to find a half-nonhuman, the one thing we came for and was assured of in the synopsis is the nonhuman part. Now that you know why your readers bothered to open the novel, we get to the reason this novel is terrible. Mind you this could be the most well written novel in all of history but it’d still be trash. You turn your mc human-ish and remove the part and staple point for the creature you based it off. He’s no longer an enderman, he’s just a transformed human. You didn’t give the viewers a good reason to stay. You remove the looks, remove the preset expectation, and then you moved on. You said enderman and you removed the enderman. I know you’re gonna look at this and wonder why I’m not reviewing the rest of the story but honestly this one point completely overshadows any other complaint. You can’t create a novel about let’s say a dragon, then remove the dragon and move on with the novel. That’s not how stories work. Now I don’t like harem novels at all, think they’re about as useless as the people who read it(completely background side-characters) but I’d rather read that abomination of a disease that plagues webnovel than read this. This is like those gta 5 YouTubers who say “like and sun for a giveaway” but never give the stuff away, you said enderman in the synopsis but 20ish chapters in he’s no longer enderman. He doesn’t have the iconic look of an enderman and he removed the main standing point that Minecraft gave that species. Just write a normal HP fanfic and don’t label it as something you never follow through on. 5 -> 3 -> 1 -> 1 -> 3 on the ratings bottom to top
Sucks imagine Minecraft using their sticks to do their magic spells and doing romance with humans lol , but it's not my taste. Only for 5 to 8 yr like they write on Minecraft box .
PK ROMANCE SI IL EST UN ENDERMAN , ? [img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle]
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Revelar Spoiler I want to ask about a novel for those who know it? It's about someone reincarnated as a brother to Harry Potter. And he must not change canon.
Hey Russian! I've been a fan since your Alchemist fic, which you dropped... Oh, and your ATLA fic! Which you dropped... Both great ideas and executions that I really wish you finished, just like this one. Please don't drop? MC is an Enderman, as you may have realized. Russian is good at combining story elements of two different IP through an MC with a foreign power, and he does the same here. I thought adding minecraft would be clunky and childish here but he pulls it off with the proper humor and gravity. He doesn't feel like an Enderman here but like a real HP creature with real consequences. The mystique he claims as a Hogwarts student few people have the right to actually see is a cool dynamic I've never seen before, and his magic is unlike anything a student can do, or has to deal with. Overall, This story deserves no less than four stars for any reason so far and anyone who tries to rate the story less is probably whining about something that doesn't matter.
this is a magnificent work by a master of words. it has a beautiful charm of it's own and I'd say it worthwhile to lost yourself in the story that the author weaved for us. p/s: dear author, please do update the story until the end.
This has been the work that recently has me the most excited to follow. The intersection of Minecraft and Harry Potter is something I personally had never seen before, and I've been enjoying watching it. Of course, I would love to see more silly and fun interactions with other characters, but I'm not sure if they would fit well with the narrative. In summary, it's a work unlike anything I've seen before, and I've been enjoying how it has been unfolding.Não sou bom com inglês, me perdoem pelos erros <3
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haven't read it yet but finally a good novel with a clearly non human mc, no human transformation, no hidden form, just a monstrous guy in hogwarts[img=recommend]
If you're expecting a human wizard SI with Enderman themed powers, look elsewhere, because THIS guy, described in-universe as looking like a dementor without a cloak, is going to attend Hogwarts despite being walking nightmare fuel. I would've thought wizards would be more likely to harvest him for potions ingredients than give him a wand, but apparently not.
Nro tjis is on the level of enderman in SDS and this must become a multiverse one so it wont end fast
I just realized there's a R18 tag on this book now I'm imaging a enderman molesting blocks. What have you done to my mind author why must it be such a vivid image
I love it. Enderman ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
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