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MMORPG: Rebirth of the Shadow Mage

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Autor: Gurdon

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    R4GE
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    For the most part its typical returner vrmmo fair, but the Author makes 2 very bold decisions that stand out, however, they also don’t seem to have thought through the consequences. 1) The NPCs are near lifeless automatons running a script and listening to key words, with occasional cutscenes. The author describes NPC interactions and story elements as boring to even the mc so what does it mean for anyone to play this game, why are they doing it at all, it can't be just combat gameplay right? Leads to point 2. 2) The author casually tosses out an absolute bombshell that time moves 48x faster in the game. This has insane consequences: the mc returned after 12 years means he is nearly 500 years old. With the game a person with a lifespan of 100 years could live closer to 4800 years! This is also where most of the logic of the story breaks down. Why did the company make a game when they invented the fountain of eternal life? Why would a company make a game when they made the ultimate productivity machine? How are relationships affected when a weekend apart is over 2 months of separation (16 hours a day gaming, 2 days becomes 64)? How is work affected? On Mondays I forget what I was working when leaving on Friday, just 48 hour gap imagine a 64 days. Also in game timing has numerous errors because author does not consistently consider the 48x speed when narrative requires cooldowns for abilities or delays in quests, or when MC talks about how much time has elapsed. Why does the MC act like a 20 year old when he is the oldest human on the planet after his return? Why is he attracted to anyone not mentally in their hundreds, or getting flustered by anything he should have seen it all and become a curmudgeonly person right? Other points of interest for me: - So far the MC is a near pure mage (yay!), unfortunately there are hints of him becoming a boring typical magic swordsman considering his last life was a sword class and him wielding a staff covered in fire occasionally. - Shadow powers are cool -He knows way too much about the game, from his perspective his early unlocks should be things he heard in rumours 500 years ago not something he knows in detail and can just follow the steps. He should be able to sniff out points of interest not know exactly where they are and every intimate detail. - The game presents all the stats and abilities of the enemies; this is bad for both the game and the narrative. Why not make the combat more exciting for both the characters and readers if abilities need to be guessed at like in a real fight. Each fight could be far far more interesting. In conclusion if you have read a returner VRMMO you have probably know what to expect, but the flavor of a shadow mage who at least for now isnt a lame magic swordsman has me liking the brew. The author has 2 bold choices that I think they could lean into to really spice up what makes this story more unique than a typical entry in the genre.

    2yr
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    Taoist_Azure_Sword

    Currently on ch 8 and it’s solid. To make the novel not boring wish he ain’t winnin always and faces some losses. Hope there ain’t no clichè characters, 1 IQ villains, and the plot is not repetitive!

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    2yr
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    God_of_Sandstorms

    not going to lie to you all, I got to about chapter 60+ and dropped the story. to many unrealistic stat numbers were thrown around to often, and became inconsistent in the back of my mind while reading took a month for a character to get to lv10 in his past life, when realistically with the numbers given it wld take 1 week max. the final nail in the coffin for me tho was the MC just casually keeping the biggest snitch in the game around him, even when he is actively trying to keep a low profile and not let his info get out to the world so soon. also the game can partially affect ur looks??? that was a random piece of info that gets glossed over with no explanation or prior info to fall back on. for those of u who will still keep reading even with the points mentioned above, I can at least say the character gets some brownie points in the fact he looks at stocks and flipping, instead of solely relying on finding his next boss cheese. the items are unique enough to not b generic boring mock ups. the story progression doesn't seem to stagnate currently, so it seems to have a steady movement. if u like rebirth MMO's that rely on finding future rankers becuz "friendship" this one's for u.

    1yr
    Ver 2 Respostas
    Piggy
    LV 15 Badge

    kinda boring, hitting cliche after the next. parents died —> becomes a guild slave —> returns to the past —> promises to save parents and make money —> uses knowledge to chesse bosses and complete quests. i mean thats generally the formula that makes these novels. at least it kills time

    2yr
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    Higgs
    LV 3 Badge

    It's a good story, to be honest. It's just that, I don't see any unique characteristic of this novel that separates it from other novels of the same genre. It would be better if the Author can add something that can only be unique to this novel and this novel alone.

    1yr
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    scp_049

    the story is fun and I'm happy that everybody is chill and try to enjoy the game and doesn't have the cliche where everybody try kill each other and the mc IRL over the smallest of inconveniences and I like the fact that he doesn't have as many inconveniences like his parents disapprove of him playing a game and such but the mc's personality is kind of bland but is still developing so that's fine but the big problem I have with him is that he has the attention span of a gold fish to the point were he start daydreaming in the middle of the fight which get him almost killed multiple times and sometimes have me questioning his intelligence were he gets him self in trouble for the stupidest of reasons like forgetting to press the [NO] botton when the game asked him if he want to reveal his identity which led him to being exposed to the world and forgetting to buy hp/mp potions when needing them despite complaining about forgetting about it two times

    2yr
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    Eh_who_knows

    Story is pretty intriguing so far at chapter 45, there are a few grammar mistakes here and there but nothing detrimental. Overall I'd give it 5 out 5 bananas🍌

    2yr
    Ver 1 Respostas
    Shalu_Rathore_9438

    Is this novel on halt..please author can you confirm

    1yr
    Ver 1 Respostas
    ManEatingTurtle

    Author, could you please upload a picture of his blades? I'm at the chapter where he fights with the orcs, but I just can't imagine how the blades look like. Thank you. And your story is awesome!

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    1yr
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    yuchen_zhang_5379

    Hi! My name is Victoria and you write really well! I would like to inquire if you are interested in trying to work on an interactive novel? Our company is in the beginning stages of rolling out this scripted interactive game worldwide, so if you'd like to work on a new paid creation or would like to do that adaptation of the book, please feel free to get in touch with me!

    1yr
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    Darksiidde

    Great novel! I hope the author keeps up the good work. Huhuhuhuhuhuguhuguguguguguguguguguguguguguguguguguguguguguguguguguguguguggugugugu

    2yr
    Ver 1 Respostas
    Shalu_Rathore_9438

    I really like this story[img=update], I always wanted to read romantic novels with action. I am in love with the interaction between both leads and looking forward to their romance booming. Also for the game it is just explained that it is just a virtual reality game there is no connection with reality it isn't like the in-game attributes will get transferred to players in real life so why is everyone after him in real life like they are going to kill him or something. Really like the main MC character no show off or overly arrogant or egoistic. Low profile and not like to show off[img=recommend]

    1yr
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    FieryCheetah

    It's a good story as far as I have read it and I like it, although the start is a bit cliche, it branches out as most of the VRMMORPG novels do...and the MC's personality is not shown that much, though it seems like its getting fleshed out bit by bit so all in all I'm excited to see where the story goes

    1yr
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    AlphaAndOmega

    The Start of the story is pretty generic but as time goes on it gets way better. The main character gets powerful not because for some reason he got a game breaking system but because he was a information broker. As of the last chapter I read which is 47 he is powerful but not broken it feels good to read something where the mc isn't just given stuff and earns them. In conclusion I recommend it.

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    2yr
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    _MrMoon_

    Overall super good so far, typically I don't like the rebirth with all knowledge tropes but so far this is done well. (hopefully the MC isnt all knowing like in some other novels of this types.) overall I'm glad I gave it a shot and I'm excited to see where the journey leads.

    2yr
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    Matthias_Schmidt

    I read 51 Chapter. I would say it is a solid read. has here and there some hick ups but all in all a nice book. I like the Idea and so far it hasn't disappointed. keep it up.

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    2yr
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    Laugaz
    LV 14 Badge

    how long with this be on Hiatus? it's a really good story. Author, please update when you're able.

    10mth
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    Laugaz
    LV 14 Badge

    I've just found this recently and am moving it. I just got to ch 100. I came back after having to take a break from reading and saw the update schedule as "taking a break." Does anyone have any info on this? I looked at the authors' page and saw 2 had "recently updated." So I'm just wondering if this will be in Haiatus for long or if it'll brief?

    1yr
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    Arthur_PENDRAGON

    Hello author, I would like to ask if you could change the system notifications? Messages in bold are not possible to translate in Google translator, so when it appears, I can't understand most of what is written, why the message is still in English and is not translated... Excellent novel, and keep going, loved it so far.

    1yr
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    BloodMonk

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    Volume 1 : The Beggining

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      Leo 2 years ago
    2. 2
      Fragmental 2 years ago
    3. 3
      Quest 2 years ago
    4. 4
      Salamander Ring 2 years ago
    5. 5
      The Stingy Merchant 2 years ago
    6. 6
      Buying some Spells 2 years ago
    7. 7
      The Castle 2 years ago
    8. 8
      The Dark Prince 2 years ago
    9. 9
      Fall of the Prince 2 years ago
    10. 10
      Loot 2 years ago
    11. 11
      White Flame 2 years ago
    12. 12
      Class 2 years ago
    13. 13
      Perks 2 years ago
    14. 14
      Culg City 2 years ago
    15. 15
      Mayor 2 years ago
    16. 16
      Cave 2 years ago
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      Golems 2 years ago
    18. 18
      Tunnel 2 years ago
    19. 19
      Cavern 2 years ago
    20. 20
      Silver Golems 2 years ago
    21. 21
      Shadow Power 2 years ago
    22. 22
      Fighting a Wyvern 2 years ago
    23. 23
      Absolute Power 2 years ago
    24. 24
      Defeat 2 years ago
    25. 25
      Defeat (2) 2 years ago
    26. 26
      Ah hell nah! 2 years ago
    27. 27
      Escape? 2 years ago
    28. 28
      Companion? 2 years ago
    29. 29
      Food 2 years ago
    30. 30
      Fenrir 2 years ago
    31. 31
      A meal outside 2 years ago
    32. 32
      House 2 years ago
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      House (2) 2 years ago
    34. 34
      River 2 years ago
    35. 35
      Crocodile 2 years ago
    36. 36
      The Reptile Core 2 years ago
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      The city 2 years ago
    38. 38
      Kilgros 2 years ago
    39. 39
      The cloak 2 years ago
    40. 40
      Crafting 2 years ago
    41. 41
      The Holy Church 2 years ago
    42. 42
      Stealing the Water 2 years ago
    43. 43
      Stealing The Water (2) 2 years ago
    44. 44
      Stealing the Water (3) 2 years ago
    45. 45
      Moving In 2 years ago
    46. 46
      The District 2 years ago
    47. 47
      Corrupted Rhino 2 years ago
    48. 48
      The Leader 2 years ago
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      The Leader (2) 2 years ago
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      Corrupted Human? 2 years ago
    51. 51
      Fight against a Corrupted Human 2 years ago
    52. 52
      Beast Tattoo 2 years ago
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      The Raid Castle 2 years ago
    54. 54
      Meeting The Strongest Player 2 years ago
    55. 55
      Meeting the Strongest Player (2) 2 years ago
    56. 56
      Preparations for The Raid 2 years ago
    57. 57
      Auction House 2 years ago
    58. 58
      The Raid 2 years ago
    59. 59
      The Raid (2) 2 years ago
    60. 60
      The Raid (3) 2 years ago
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      ??? 2 years ago
    62. 62
      Shopping 2 years ago
    63. 63
      Ava 2 years ago
    64. 64
      Adventurers' Guild 2 years ago
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      [Bonus chapter] Sewers... 2 years ago
    66. 66
      Sewers... (2) 2 years ago
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      Sewers... (3) 2 years ago
    68. 68
      Sewers... (4) 2 years ago
    69. 69
      [Bonus Chapter] Sewers... (5) 2 years ago
    70. 70
      Sewers... (6) 2 years ago
    71. 71
      Meet Up 2 years ago
    72. 72
      The Graveyard 2 years ago
    73. 73
      One against an Army 2 years ago
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      Grim Reaper 2 years ago
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      Circumstances 2 years ago
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      Fighting a Group 2 years ago
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      Fighting a Group (2) 2 years ago
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      Testing 2 years ago
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      Business 2 years ago
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      Naga Hive 2 years ago
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      Naga Hive (2) 2 years ago
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      An old Enemy 2 years ago
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      An old Enemy (2) 2 years ago
    84. 84
      Colleting the Reward 2 years ago
    85. 85
      Colleting the Reward (2) 2 years ago
    86. 86
      Collecting the Reward (3) 2 years ago
    87. 87
      Collecting the reward (4) 2 years ago
    88. 88
      Assassination 2 years ago
    89. 89
      An alchemist 2 years ago
    90. 90
      A Contract 1 years ago
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      Buying Equipment 1 years ago
    92. 92
      Unfinished business 1 years ago
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      Basilisk 1 years ago
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      Dungeon Boss 1 years ago
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      Vampiric Sword 1 years ago
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      Berserker mode 1 years ago
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      Three weeks 1 years ago
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      Interview 1 years ago
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      Interview (2) 1 years ago
    100. 100
      Preklin University 1 years ago
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      Walk 1 years ago
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      Dragon Seal and the Wyvern 1 years ago
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      The Fall 1 years ago
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      Hell 1 years ago
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      Hell (2) 1 years ago
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      Hell (3) 1 years ago
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      Hell (4) 1 years ago
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      Hell (5) 1 years ago
    109. 109
      The past... 1 years ago
    110. 110
      The past... (2) 1 years ago
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      Ava's proposition 1 years ago
    112. 112
      The Tomb of the Fallen Angel 1 years ago
    113. 113
      The Guardian 1 years ago
    114. 114
      The Tree 1 years ago
    115. 115
      Creatures of Hell 1 years ago
    116. 116
      The Turtle 1 years ago
    117. 117
      The Lock of the Tree... 1 years ago
    118. 118
      The Second Trial 1 years ago
    119. 119
      The Might of a God 1 years ago
    120. 120
      Leo's Investment 1 years ago
    121. 121
      The Third Trial 1 years ago
    122. 122
      The Fallen One 1 years ago
    123. 123
      The Fallen One (2) 1 years ago
    124. 124
      The Fallen One (3) 1 years ago
    125. 125
      The Fallen One (4) 1 years ago
    126. 126
      The Fallen One (5) 1 years ago
    127. 127
      Eric's Journey 1 years ago
    128. 128
      Beauty is a Weapon 1 years ago
    129. 129
      Ava's strength 1 years ago
    130. 130
      Ava's strength (2) 1 years ago
    131. 131
      Ava's Senses 1 years ago
    132. 132
      The Demonic Ants 1 years ago
    133. 133
      The Clown Mask 1 years ago
    134. 134
      The Red Tornado 1 years ago
    135. 135
      The Great Wall 1 years ago
    136. 136
      [Bonus chapter]Insanity... 1 years ago
    137. 137
      Insanity... (2) 1 years ago
    138. 138
      Insanity... (3) 1 years ago
    139. 139
      Insanity... (4) 1 years ago
    140. 140
      It's my Ego... 1 years ago
    141. 141
      A Fallen Angel and a Bone Dragon 1 years ago
    142. 142
      The Change 1 years ago
    143. 143
      The Change (2) 1 years ago
    144. 144
      Feelings 1 years ago
    145. 145
      Grinding 1 years ago
    146. 146
      Grinding (2) 1 years ago
    147. 147
      Grinding (3) 1 years ago
    148. 148
      Another Guild? 1 years ago
    149. 149
      The 'Vikings' 1 years ago
    150. 150
      A Fight between the leaders 1 years ago
    151. 151
      Massacre 1 years ago
    152. 152
      Massacre (2) 1 years ago
    153. 153
      Massacre (3) 1 years ago
    154. 154
      Slight Annoyance... 1 years ago
    155. 155
      Leveling up... 1 years ago
    156. 156
      Siege of the city 1 years ago
    157. 157
      The Second Wave 1 years ago
    158. 158
      The Highest Contributor 1 years ago
    159. 159
      The Second Wave Boss 1 years ago
    160. 160
      The Unknown Player 1 years ago
    161. 161
      Ah shit... 1 years ago
    162. 162
      Complicated... 1 years ago
    163. 163
      Complicated... (2) 1 years ago
    164. 164
      The Challenger 1 years ago
    165. 165
      The Challenger (2) 1 years ago
    166. 166
      A Bone Golem 1 years ago
    167. 167
      A Bone Golem (2) 1 years ago
    168. 168
      Ava's struggle 1 years ago
    169. 169
      Ava's struggle (2) 1 years ago
    170. 170
      Ava's struggle (3) 1 years ago
    171. 171
      The Strength 1 years ago
    172. 172
      The Strength (2) 1 years ago
    173. 173
      The Strength (3) 1 years ago
    174. 174
      [Bonus chapter]The Strength (4) 1 years ago
    175. 175
      The Strength (5) 1 years ago
    176. 176
      The Strength (6) 1 years ago
    177. 177
      An Ice Dragon... 1 years ago
    178. 178
      Escaping 1 years ago
    179. 179
      Escaping (2) 1 years ago
    180. 180
      Allegations 1 years ago
    181. 181
      Leo's Heart 1 years ago
    182. 182
      The Forth Wave 1 years ago
    183. 183
      Fighting a Lich 1 years ago
    184. 184
      Fighting a Lich (2) 1 years ago
    185. 185
      Fighting a Lich (3) 1 years ago
    186. 186
      Leaving 1 years ago
    187. 187
      Ruined City 1 years ago
    188. 188
      Ambush! 1 years ago
    189. 189
      Ambush! (2) 1 years ago
    190. 190
      The Mountain Range 1 years ago
    191. 191
      The Ascent 1 years ago
    192. 192
      Ice Dragon 1 years ago
    193. 193
      Dragon Fight 1 years ago
    194. 194
      Dragon Fight (2) 1 years ago
    195. 195
      Between the monsters 1 years ago
    196. 196
      Drakes 1 years ago
    197. 197
      Drakes (2) 1 years ago
    198. 198
      Fighting an Alpha Drake 1 years ago

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