Ace Of Diamond: Baseball System

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Hoku_1

Ignore me shamelessly reviewing my own novel. I had a question from you guys. Should I make Sawamura and Rei close or not? I was thinking of Rei and Chris as a battery. Miyuki later when Chris graduates. What do you think?

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DRAGONElking

one of the best sports fics I ever read Well keep going bro 5s luxurious rating from this bro for you and don't limit your imagination

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SwordGod007

I was liking this story, but the way you wrote yakushi vs seido game really disappointed me. I mean why is miyuki making wrong calls, why is rei not using his breaking ball, and why is rei's behavior like a child who just learned baseball.

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FattyFang

It was good while it lasted ff canon. latest chapters just doesnt make sense anymore, at this point it is good because of it being a diamond no ace fic but anything additional is just trash

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MarvelAtTheCosmos

The story was really good but the author decided to throw a surprise that was poorly written, in haste. no build up whatsoever. very amateurish and put a giant dent in the great story this was. Trying to be unique is hard I get it but there's better ways to go about it. if you can ignore this horrible plot point and event altogether then you'll probably still enjoy the story. because it was quite good until then.

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Samarjith_Nayak

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DotComplex

I was gonna give this a 4 star because its good but it has some grammar mistakes and the system feels kinda wonky, but the latest chapter 68.......man that was just so satisfying, you can tell the author is improving so 5 stars from me

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Night132

I don't have much to say in term of the story as a whole, but the one thing that annoys me or that disturbs me a lot is the system. In my opinion, a system does not go well with a slice-of-life anime like Diamond no ace or other sports anime. It breaks the vibe that the story should have and it's only distracting. The system feels like a sore thumb that you have no idea what to do with. Instead of "telling" us the improvement of the character, "show" us his improvement. That's the main reason why I love sports anime. They don't tell, they show. But installing a system in that sort of story, it just kills all expectation and surprise and hype for a tense situation.

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BunnyFF

Ok so I like Diamond no ace and there are almost no good fanfiction out there so just writing a basic one will definetly get you some views. However this fanfiction so far is a carbon copy of the original with the mc just taking furuya’s moments and speeches, heck even the reaction from the others is the same they. So far the mc’s prensece hasn’t affected the original plot. I really hope it will change later on.

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SitOnBread

The main character is insufferable, there is really nothing redeemable about his character to me. The author tries to play it off as it’s not arrogance it’s confidence, meanwhile the mc is puking on teammates and picking fights for no real reason, this guys first interaction with his teammates were laughing at them when they said they were going to get into the second string. He’s honestly more annoying than those young masters and delinquents in other novels and mangas. The level of confidence doesn’t even really make sense since the only reason why he’s good is because of the system. Also, up to around chapter 20, which is what I got to before giving up, the mc isn’t even really training as hard as in the beginning, opting to game on his phone instead, like how is he meant to be likeable at all. This may change in later chapters idk because I couldn’t get through how bad it was. If you really enjoy reading sports fanfics and can switch your brain off whenever the mc interacts with anyone other than his parents, then you may enjoy this.

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ForgeCoffee

The book is good, however, it was wonky somewhere within Chapter 35-50. Author just needs a bit of touch up with baseball knowledge and everything would be good. The pacing of growth is actually pretty good, however, the characters could do some canon touch up. For example, Miyuki kept experimenting, while it was his way of playing, it was done wrong. Kept making mistakes and what not. Overall, book is good, a solid read.

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FAMHDTVPNG

my favourite manga..............................................................................................................................................

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DaoistfCyLoO

i really like the way that mc quit from the team it is just like real life looking forwaed to revenge

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Young_fruit_Smiley

A rare fiction of Diamond no Ace .... & one that's with almost no mistakes . As of now there's no romance . Friendship is going to start b/w bros . character development is good . Update speed is a bit ~~😊 . recommended 🤣👍 . MC IS A PITCHER

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Crownless312

A good one , give more chapters.

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Yuvie1010

One of my fave ace no diamond fics.

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Ronald_Camua

this is great 👍👌✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨

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GreedyHuman

writing - i didn't find any mistake so far so 5 ⭐ story - good so far 5 ⭐ character - confident Mc (He got a skill to back it up) 5 ⭐ Update - 5 ⭐ world - 5 ⭐ Thanks Author for this Fanfic ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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MadSculptor

Binged the whole story in a day. Really the best Ace of Diamond fanfiction. I was surprised by the twist with his school situation but really like it this way. Looking forward to more!