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I'll begin by saying that this novel absolutely doesn't deserve the rating it has. It is one of the little novels I'm actually able to give 5 stars to, without any regret. Apart from Margrave being and incredible author and writing numerous awesome books, this novel by itself is already a masterpiece. It only takes second place, behind My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires, as my favorite yandere novel, and Caitlyn is in my personal top 5 favorite characters in all fiction. True, this is a comedy, so it isn't the most serious novel, but I've fell off my seat in laughter numerous times while reading it. The only thing I feel would be a problem to the average reader in this novel is Margrave's writing style (which I personally adore). It is extremely complex, littered with references to mythology and history (which are fortunately explained in the author's thoughts section, even I didn't understand some) and is chock-full of 'big words' and descriptive adjectives, so much that it resembles an understandable form of poetry. That may be enormously detrimental to many readers, as most people reading here are not experienced linguists with a master's degree in literature (not that it requires those characteristics, mind me) and would probably get lost in a sea of cultured writing, and would feel frustrated as they understand little. The other issue I had observed was wonderfully covered by Blazing_1NS4N1TY on his review. The last thing I was wondering was if this novel was on hiatus, as I would absolutely love to see it continue, and would be irredeemably sad if it were to be dropped.
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is this dropped? just curious dont mind waiting for more just dont want to get my hopes up for more. already reread everything twice and still find it hilarious and amazing.
Amazing Story! Had me Laughing in the first few chapters. I wish the author was still writing this story.
Nija Adnrew tate alpha warlord!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have been enjoying this novel so much that I am posting my 1st review. I am doing so in hopes that the author will write more often for this story. I understand that it is being written in a less than popular style and why they are prioritizing their other works. They have to eat but this is 1 of the most entertaining novels I have read on this app. So please keep up the good work.
simply bad ....................................................................................................................................................
This book is the epitome of the "too much of a good thing" saying. The book starts off fantastic and keeps getting better. It is well written, character interactions are fun and entertaining and there is solid world building. The issue (imo) stems from the attempt to ensure that the women are allowed to shine, which in and of itself is awesome. This starts out very well, with the limitations placed on the Mc being logically thought out and well written. Unfortunately, these limitations are leaned into far too much, making the Mc seem almost fake and like an extra written in after the fact. After awhile, dialogue between characters becomes forced and contrived. Honestly, the issue probably seems as glaring as it does due to the high expectations brought on by the strong start. Overall, the writing quality is great, the plot line is great, and the only problem is a slight character deviation that snowballed into a bigger issue.
I have to say while it may follow certain cliché guidelines the comedy level on this novel makes it one of my absolute favorites. I cant go two chapters without absolutly bursting out in laughter. I look forward to every new chapter update that the author manages to pump out. Hope to see more of this and the quirky hijinxes of the dainty death squad.
1st paragraph into the novel im already frustrated with it. Make your people smarter. I cant stand stupid tropes.
This is THE most crazy, insane and ridiculously funny novel I have read in a very long time. It is hilarious and absurd and at the same time interesting and weirdly complex. I like it a lot.
you're writing style for this book is excellent in , my opinion and I have read every chapter you have released on WN.
it could have been a good novel, if not for the author screwing it up. I liked the personalities of mc and his first three harem members. Even though gods are shown as too bored, gasping over smallest action of mc, it was still okay as it gave more attention on mc. But the awful writing style of author ruined it. Too much talking, and too much nonsensical words are used to show emotions of people. It shows how author doesn't have tiny bit of subtlety while showing story, and thinking that adding lots of adjective will make it interesting. rather, I stopped reading because of it.
while the idea is really interesting, nothing makes sense and becomes increasingly stale and boring. it becomes more and more ridiculous and hard to read after chapter 50+. and in all honesty, I don't see how he cares so much about saving women only for him to kill/ leave them behind at any given opportunity.
I dont have much to say apart from the fact the story is funny and the author created funny and interesting characters. I say that because stories with Gods, higher beings or whatever giving the MC and everyone else power to act as their entertainment and watch them likes some kinda of zoo is not it for me. Even worse when they are simply Sect Elders from cultivation novels turned Gods, that try to kill the MC because the MC killed someone that was theirs, be it family or possession. Its just beyond me to like a story where the MC is at a constant threat of powerful beings that try to kill and put him in dangerous situations for petty reasons, but the story is definitly not bad, is it good? Idk, for me in a 1-10 scale it would be 4,5, but I recognize thats because of my personal tastes and the story isnt all that bad.
At chapter 29 and I must say the Mc is really good written and I hope you won’t drop this amazing harem novel.
Não, apenas não. É tao ruim que nem quero pensa em escrever isso em inglês, o MC é um completo imbecil. Uma perda de tempo lendo até o 26 onde depois de tudo isso ele ainda manda a garota perder a virgindade com outra garota enquanto ele continua sendo um virgem de merda.
I would think of this novel as a comedic approach to harems in the apocalypse. It's not fall out of your seat funny but it'll put a smile on your face, I'm around chapter 40, it feels a bit slow moving but that's alright for now though I do hope the pace picks up a bit later as in: seeing more of the world, creatures, haphazard societies
First web or light novel I’ve ever read where the protagonist has Narcolepsy like I do in real life. The protagonist is too relatable to me and I’m biased. Well written apocalypse novel with harem (big W)
In truth, the basic pitch is interesting, but very poorly exploited. My reading of this book was not pleasant for me while several elements attracted me greatly, a real disappointment. Then I advise you to read the first 4 chapters to get an idea, because it will be the same way of writing and the same atmosphere for all the following chapters
I tried to leave a review that properly said how great this is, but my phone crashed and it was really long kek so I just want to say it’s really good. Good pacing, impressive humor and diction, for the most part it is sensible, clear EQ growth, the only complaint i have is that i wish it was my life
I have found the story outrageously funny. Don't read this if you are offended by sociopathic tendency's and some sexual humor. I cannot wait to read the rest of the story!
How hasn't anyone talked about how ridiculously funny this novel is? I've laughed for an entire chapter at one point. That was in between the chuckling land and rolling while crying chapters. I've never thought about wearing bats like boxing gloves, but now it's burned into my memory like the rest of the nonsense in this novel. I'm confused about the sociopath concerns. The mc wears ruthless ambivalence like a coat when it doesn't involve women. It's both brutal, glorious, and necessary. Perhaps I'm biased because I'm a fan of the other's novels. But I also wouldn't read their works if I didn't enjoy the author's writing. I don't know. Just trying to spread culture over here. Don't mind me. Enjoy your day!
This is the profound, cultured, and inspiring tale of a young man who woke up during the apocalypse, got a system from the harem god, and decided to rebuild civilization—one member at a time. Kind of, obviously not. The apocalypse is part of a—non-deathmatch free-for-all—God Trial where candidates are put under pressure to see if they can demonstrate the virtue of their gods. The gods have social media and go wild with degenerate gambling, rewarding competitors, and decadent debauchery. Their candidates come from worlds across the cosmos. That means cat ears, bunny ears, fox ears, and shapeshifting dragon women. It's lit. The plot tells you one thing—this is a whimsical comedy with all your favorite tropes. I hope you'll give it a read!
Read till ch.21, until now the pace of the story is good, the characters feel alive kinda but sometimes the conversations make me confused so I have to skim through it and if author keeps on the quality of writing it has right now till the end without mc taking women like pokemon which most of the harem ought to do then I can say for sure it will be a really good novel with true harem. And Love the mc, he is a real giga chad. Also please don't drop.
Pros. The MC's power and skills manipulate emotions. What could go wrong? haha It's a wild concept and I'm looking forward fo seeing where things go. The novel's chaotic, but that makes it hilarious. If you're someone that can enjoy the moment it's great. Also, there's a reverse Isekai where different races come to earth, I hope there's a bunny girl. It's worth reading for sure. Potential cons. The mc is less of a sociopath and more of a normal guy that doesn't have an aversion to killing people. It's pretty plot armory, but I'm okay with that. Also, It's focused on absurdity, so it's hard to take seriously sometimes. That's it's greatest strength, but I hope the mc fights more humans. Lastly, references for days. The writing seems mindless but it's extremely high level. That's a pro, but it also provides a filler that many won't get. I'm certain many will love that, but many won't. Other than these things, I'm loving the story.
stumbled across this again and man this is gold. hilarious and intriguing how you worked this out. are you writing more for this or is it discontinued?
I'll begin by saying that this novel absolutely doesn't deserve the rating it has. It is one of the little novels I'm actually able to give 5 stars to, without any regret. Apart from Margrave being and incredible author and writing numerous awesome books, this novel by itself is already a masterpiece. It only takes second place, behind My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires, as my favorite yandere novel, and Caitlyn is in my personal top 5 favorite characters in all fiction. True, this is a comedy, so it isn't the most serious novel, but I've fell off my seat in laughter numerous times while reading it. The only thing I feel would be a problem to the average reader in this novel is Margrave's writing style (which I personally adore). It is extremely complex, littered with references to mythology and history (which are fortunately explained in the author's thoughts section, even I didn't understand some) and is chock-full of 'big words' and descriptive adjectives, so much that it resembles an understandable form of poetry. That may be enormously detrimental to many readers, as most people reading here are not experienced linguists with a master's degree in literature (not that it requires those characteristics, mind me) and would probably get lost in a sea of cultured writing, and would feel frustrated as they understand little. The other issue I had observed was wonderfully covered by Blazing_1NS4N1TY on his review. The last thing I was wondering was if this novel was on hiatus, as I would absolutely love to see it continue, and would be irredeemably sad if it were to be dropped.
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is this dropped? just curious dont mind waiting for more just dont want to get my hopes up for more. already reread everything twice and still find it hilarious and amazing.
Amazing Story! Had me Laughing in the first few chapters. I wish the author was still writing this story.
Nija Adnrew tate alpha warlord!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have been enjoying this novel so much that I am posting my 1st review. I am doing so in hopes that the author will write more often for this story. I understand that it is being written in a less than popular style and why they are prioritizing their other works. They have to eat but this is 1 of the most entertaining novels I have read on this app. So please keep up the good work.
simply bad ....................................................................................................................................................
This book is the epitome of the "too much of a good thing" saying. The book starts off fantastic and keeps getting better. It is well written, character interactions are fun and entertaining and there is solid world building. The issue (imo) stems from the attempt to ensure that the women are allowed to shine, which in and of itself is awesome. This starts out very well, with the limitations placed on the Mc being logically thought out and well written. Unfortunately, these limitations are leaned into far too much, making the Mc seem almost fake and like an extra written in after the fact. After awhile, dialogue between characters becomes forced and contrived. Honestly, the issue probably seems as glaring as it does due to the high expectations brought on by the strong start. Overall, the writing quality is great, the plot line is great, and the only problem is a slight character deviation that snowballed into a bigger issue.
I have to say while it may follow certain cliché guidelines the comedy level on this novel makes it one of my absolute favorites. I cant go two chapters without absolutly bursting out in laughter. I look forward to every new chapter update that the author manages to pump out. Hope to see more of this and the quirky hijinxes of the dainty death squad.
1st paragraph into the novel im already frustrated with it. Make your people smarter. I cant stand stupid tropes.
This is THE most crazy, insane and ridiculously funny novel I have read in a very long time. It is hilarious and absurd and at the same time interesting and weirdly complex. I like it a lot.
you're writing style for this book is excellent in , my opinion and I have read every chapter you have released on WN.
it could have been a good novel, if not for the author screwing it up. I liked the personalities of mc and his first three harem members. Even though gods are shown as too bored, gasping over smallest action of mc, it was still okay as it gave more attention on mc. But the awful writing style of author ruined it. Too much talking, and too much nonsensical words are used to show emotions of people. It shows how author doesn't have tiny bit of subtlety while showing story, and thinking that adding lots of adjective will make it interesting. rather, I stopped reading because of it.
while the idea is really interesting, nothing makes sense and becomes increasingly stale and boring. it becomes more and more ridiculous and hard to read after chapter 50+. and in all honesty, I don't see how he cares so much about saving women only for him to kill/ leave them behind at any given opportunity.
I dont have much to say apart from the fact the story is funny and the author created funny and interesting characters. I say that because stories with Gods, higher beings or whatever giving the MC and everyone else power to act as their entertainment and watch them likes some kinda of zoo is not it for me. Even worse when they are simply Sect Elders from cultivation novels turned Gods, that try to kill the MC because the MC killed someone that was theirs, be it family or possession. Its just beyond me to like a story where the MC is at a constant threat of powerful beings that try to kill and put him in dangerous situations for petty reasons, but the story is definitly not bad, is it good? Idk, for me in a 1-10 scale it would be 4,5, but I recognize thats because of my personal tastes and the story isnt all that bad.
At chapter 29 and I must say the Mc is really good written and I hope you won’t drop this amazing harem novel.
Não, apenas não. É tao ruim que nem quero pensa em escrever isso em inglês, o MC é um completo imbecil. Uma perda de tempo lendo até o 26 onde depois de tudo isso ele ainda manda a garota perder a virgindade com outra garota enquanto ele continua sendo um virgem de merda.
I would think of this novel as a comedic approach to harems in the apocalypse. It's not fall out of your seat funny but it'll put a smile on your face, I'm around chapter 40, it feels a bit slow moving but that's alright for now though I do hope the pace picks up a bit later as in: seeing more of the world, creatures, haphazard societies
First web or light novel I’ve ever read where the protagonist has Narcolepsy like I do in real life. The protagonist is too relatable to me and I’m biased. Well written apocalypse novel with harem (big W)
In truth, the basic pitch is interesting, but very poorly exploited. My reading of this book was not pleasant for me while several elements attracted me greatly, a real disappointment. Then I advise you to read the first 4 chapters to get an idea, because it will be the same way of writing and the same atmosphere for all the following chapters
I tried to leave a review that properly said how great this is, but my phone crashed and it was really long kek so I just want to say it’s really good. Good pacing, impressive humor and diction, for the most part it is sensible, clear EQ growth, the only complaint i have is that i wish it was my life
I have found the story outrageously funny. Don't read this if you are offended by sociopathic tendency's and some sexual humor. I cannot wait to read the rest of the story!
How hasn't anyone talked about how ridiculously funny this novel is? I've laughed for an entire chapter at one point. That was in between the chuckling land and rolling while crying chapters. I've never thought about wearing bats like boxing gloves, but now it's burned into my memory like the rest of the nonsense in this novel. I'm confused about the sociopath concerns. The mc wears ruthless ambivalence like a coat when it doesn't involve women. It's both brutal, glorious, and necessary. Perhaps I'm biased because I'm a fan of the other's novels. But I also wouldn't read their works if I didn't enjoy the author's writing. I don't know. Just trying to spread culture over here. Don't mind me. Enjoy your day!
This is the profound, cultured, and inspiring tale of a young man who woke up during the apocalypse, got a system from the harem god, and decided to rebuild civilization—one member at a time. Kind of, obviously not. The apocalypse is part of a—non-deathmatch free-for-all—God Trial where candidates are put under pressure to see if they can demonstrate the virtue of their gods. The gods have social media and go wild with degenerate gambling, rewarding competitors, and decadent debauchery. Their candidates come from worlds across the cosmos. That means cat ears, bunny ears, fox ears, and shapeshifting dragon women. It's lit. The plot tells you one thing—this is a whimsical comedy with all your favorite tropes. I hope you'll give it a read!
Read till ch.21, until now the pace of the story is good, the characters feel alive kinda but sometimes the conversations make me confused so I have to skim through it and if author keeps on the quality of writing it has right now till the end without mc taking women like pokemon which most of the harem ought to do then I can say for sure it will be a really good novel with true harem. And Love the mc, he is a real giga chad. Also please don't drop.
Pros. The MC's power and skills manipulate emotions. What could go wrong? haha It's a wild concept and I'm looking forward fo seeing where things go. The novel's chaotic, but that makes it hilarious. If you're someone that can enjoy the moment it's great. Also, there's a reverse Isekai where different races come to earth, I hope there's a bunny girl. It's worth reading for sure. Potential cons. The mc is less of a sociopath and more of a normal guy that doesn't have an aversion to killing people. It's pretty plot armory, but I'm okay with that. Also, It's focused on absurdity, so it's hard to take seriously sometimes. That's it's greatest strength, but I hope the mc fights more humans. Lastly, references for days. The writing seems mindless but it's extremely high level. That's a pro, but it also provides a filler that many won't get. I'm certain many will love that, but many won't. Other than these things, I'm loving the story.
stumbled across this again and man this is gold. hilarious and intriguing how you worked this out. are you writing more for this or is it discontinued?